Denis Mair

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  • Denis Mair Denis Mair (9/2/2017 4:13:00 AM)

    She paid me in the kind of pennies that change hands when someone says PENNY FOR YOU THOUGHTS. I pay the thoughts forward and there is a shower of pennies from Heaven.

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  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (9/1/2017 1:42:00 AM)

    how much did you pay Pamela to say those words! ?

  • Pamela Sinicrope Pamela Sinicrope (6/8/2016 8:54:00 AM)

    I am humbled after reading through your poetry. Your poetic voice has a subtle soft ring to it as I read. At some parts the writing is conversational, and at others, I sense pure poetry at its best, with seamless meter, rhythm, alliteration and imagery. Metaphor and deeper meaning can easily be found by the reader, yet the writing doesn't hammer that in....which I like. The paths traveled by the speaker are much different from my own, which enables me (the reader) to go on a small adventure with each poem I read. The author's notes are of interest, but the style of writing enables the reader to also seek their own connections.

So Says The Peacock

Take a look at this ornament. How does it make you feel?

See how my eyespots can gather you in from all angles. See how kaleidoscopically I enjoy the beauty of your crest from all compass points of my tail.

With all these eyes I know where the best seeds are. Come and I can show you the best forage spots.

All my eyespots sway gently in the breeze. Imagine how we will gaze together on the perfect garden!

The refracted light from my feathers gives an appearance of liquid depth. My ne

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