Desiree Whitamore

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  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (10/14/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    you are a poet of good ideas, i like your poems

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  • Fred Babbin (1/10/2008 9:57:00 PM)

    O.K. You got me. I'll have to reread you poem in the morning. Nobody's perfect.

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Best Poem of Desiree Whitamore

Falling Metaphors?

slowly falling off my cliff of tears, i catch a twig and hold on.
not knowing how long the twig will last, i gather myself up, and start climbing.
as i climb i see my past, present, and future tumbling past me.
i'm close to the top now.
my every move is watched carefully by the birds flying above.
watching me as i make my mistakes they keep a close eye in case i fall.
hoping that my short bit of luck will last, i stand up.

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Prevailing

write what you feel they said, draw what you see.
how do i draw the life thats crashing in front of me?
when i don't have the paper, when i don't have the words,
how can i make sure they understand their baby girl?
i'm growing up now, i'm starting to be
what i always feared would become of me.
there's no more waiting, it's ending now.
all they do is brush it off, no harm no foul.
so what do i write when life takes a turn?