Doom and Gloom

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Comments about Doom and Gloom

  • Quench Thirst (9/11/2007 3:39:00 AM)

    I just happened onto your poems by accident and I think they are excellent. They get the message in a flowing, rhyming, easily read manner. As soon as I read the first one I liked it, then the next was equally good and so on. Thankyou for posting these.

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  • Shar Thompson (7/10/2007 10:48:00 AM)

    Passion and poison… could be a lethal combination.

  • Marvin Brato (6/26/2007 11:40:00 PM)

    I thingk it should be GLOOM AND DOOM! It must be the cause before the effect, right? Anyway, I salute to your talent bro.

  • Francois Hoon (6/11/2007 1:43:00 PM)

    You are such a good writer, don't let your poetry be limited by your name
    Blessings, Francois

  • Francois Hoon (6/11/2007 2:38:00 AM)

    You definately have a talent like few in the world my friend, but I'm worried about your soul. It cannot just be that you imagine these things you are writing. I think you must be experiencing them to be able to express it so vividly. May you find peace...

    'For what does it profit a man if he gains the whole world, and loses his own soul? '
    Mark 8: 36

  • Mo. (6/2/2007 1:07:00 PM)

    Keep It Up! !

  • Young And Smart (5/8/2007 10:01:00 PM)

    Your poems are excellent. They're a great combination of grief and pain... I haven't really picked a favorite out of all of your poems, they're all to equal on the 'greatness' scale. Once again, excellent work, and keep producing such lovely poems.

  • Teresa Sykes (4/19/2007 2:24:00 PM)

    I like your poems.......there great........pain and sadness is a great combination

  • Lilith Rose Reitenbach (4/2/2007 1:49:00 AM)

    Such sadness...such pain...such dark greatness...

  • Andrew Michaels (3/28/2007 2:19:00 AM)

    As silent sheds silence I swear
    The less my weary heart must share
    I have the worst of fears it seems
    That man pines for his past extremes

    the pale color of man
    andrew michaels

    I appreciate your work, it is both doom and gloom,
    I shall read more of your material... best wishes, AM

Best Poem of Doom and Gloom

Broken

There was a time when I was whole, in body, mind, heart & soul
When I was flawless without seam, a fairy tale a perfect dream
A single piece with no divide, with faith, hope & love inside
Complete, entire & intact. All I need, nothing lacked
Then I met you
Now I find that I am shattered, broken bruised and badly battered
Cut asunder callously, by your fair hand so savagely
Smashed and torn totality ceases
Left abandoned in a million pieces

Read the full of Broken

Sandman

Did you notice that shadow at night?
That moved like a wraith at the edge of your sight.
That melted away as you turned on the light.
That my love was me

Did you hear that noise at night?
That awoke you from sleep with panic and fright
That seemed out of place & not quite right
That my love was me

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