egi david perdana

Rookie (17 december 1989 / indonesia)

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  • Vidi Writes Vidi Writes (4/14/2008 2:57:00 AM)

    Its not the lanhuage alone, we readers search
    The theme inside, we mainly perch
    In this tender age its a great notch
    Your call to read you, is my clutch
    All the best... to your approach.

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  • Egi David Perdana (3/19/2008 2:32:00 AM)

    my poems it's poor gram and language yes I intend this my style

The Sky Fell Down

light close all loopholes
wind chill lurking from behind the season
There is only one hole for me to breathe
my faith began to blister and festering
his voice was getting more and more irregular and...
the sky started to fell down.

I was not the sword that you're plugs

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