you really write well, Elizabeth! I came to know about you today from your poem One Princess To Another which is today's Poem of the day on PH. Congrats! I read a couple of other poems also like Boyfriends. It was a great experience. Well done and keep it up!
your imagination and honesty produces poetry that stretches far beyond your years. i was riveted to each poem. often, a young poet writes and lays her groundwork for stronger writings later. you've started strong already. keep this momentum going, and you will produce some immortal stuff.