Elsa Bear

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Elsa Bear Poems

41. Narrowminded Ego 5/28/2005
42. Graham And Elsa 5/28/2005
43. Q & A 5/28/2005
44. I Got You Babe 5/28/2005
45. Baring All 6/5/2005
46. Hold Me In The Morning 8/29/2005
47. Tsunami 9/22/2010
48. Forgotten Friends....Again 12/3/2010
49. Fallen 12/29/2005
50. 150th 9/3/2006
51. The Last Weekend 9/3/2006
52. Ode To A Jummy (Funny Stuff) 9/4/2006
53. Worrier 10/6/2005
54. A Good Night Out 4/8/2005
55. Straight From The Bottle 6/20/2005
56. Will You Forgive Me? 9/3/2006
57. A Stitch In Time 6/16/2005
58. A Slow Journey On A Hot Bus 6/28/2005
59. Mine And Yours 12/29/2005
60. Stepping Into Gotham 6/5/2005
61. Forgotten Friends 12/13/2005
62. Her Home 12/26/2004
63. Blurred Memories 7/27/2005
64. I Have Felt Sadness 7/27/2005
65. Dear Boy 7/30/2005
66. If I Left 8/29/2005
67. Confusion 1/24/2005
68. My Life 12/13/2004
69. Dancing Dreams 12/26/2004
70. Broken 10/8/2004
71. Her Choice, Her Punishment 12/26/2004

Comments about Elsa Bear

  • Rufina Moor (8/29/2005 4:34:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed it. it's very nice and it flows well. light but deep at the same time :)
    Thanks. Nico

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  • Elsa Brooks (5/28/2005 8:00:00 PM)

    *blush*

  • earyt etr (5/27/2005 8:05:00 AM)

    Elsa, first off, wow.You are a poet. Most people who write poetry just find clever ways to rhyme words together, and slap a title on it.Others, true poets, write from the heart, and that is what I consider poetry. The rest? Well, thats what I call Glorified Commercial Slogans. Keep writing, you inspire us all.

  • XBlackxRainbowX (5/25/2005 11:18:00 AM)

    I love your work. I especially like your poem named Manufactured. I can relate to that one. Keep writing. Reading your work is something I look forward to. ^-^

  • James Wright (2/10/2005 1:03:00 PM)

    Hehe 'comes with maturity' I kill me.

  • dissatified exmember (1/28/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    Elsa Honey
    NEVER be scared of what people say. It's good to hear it. It helps, even when you don't think it does. This IS a public site and your work IS good enough to read. You did say you were writing from experience and its your life you are telling us all about. Well when you share your life with people, you have to expect them to say stuff. Often things we don't like. Also remember if you are telling people about yourself you do have to watch how you say it. Just in case they get the wrong impression. Don't take it on, and continuee to be yourself. Just take advice from Poet Hound. He has some good advice to give.

  • Elsa Brooks (12/27/2004 4:51:00 PM)

    if only i knew how to delet comments

Best Poem of Elsa Bear

Her Choice, Her Punishment

a product of misery
she barely survived her childhood.
living on the verge of a breakdown
it takes all her energy not to cry everyday.
2am christmas morning she allows herself to cry gently.
2pm shes all on her own.
HER choice
HER heartbreak
HER private pain
HER private punishment.
she doesn't deserve happiness,
or completeness, or contentment.
self destructive, cynical, lonely, bitter.
they describe her perfectly.
guilty.
it eats her up inside.
she's let so many people down
her pride gets in the way
her stubborness blinds her.
she's ...

Read the full of Her Choice, Her Punishment

How Was Your Day?

i call you at midnight
to cry down the phone
to moan about my pathetic life
i dont even ask how your day was.
i fear the magic roundabout music
revolves around your head
as you stare blankly at the tv
your mind devoid of any thought.
i know you care

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