Elsa Bear

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Elsa Bear Poems

41. Fallen 12/29/2005
42. 150th 9/3/2006
43. The Last Weekend 9/3/2006
44. Ode To A Jummy (Funny Stuff) 9/4/2006
45. Worrier 10/6/2005
46. A Good Night Out 4/8/2005
47. Straight From The Bottle 6/20/2005
48. A Slow Journey On A Hot Bus 6/28/2005
49. Will You Forgive Me? 9/3/2006
50. Mine And Yours 12/29/2005
51. Stepping Into Gotham 6/5/2005
52. Her Home 12/26/2004
53. Blurred Memories 7/27/2005
54. For A Friend 5/21/2005
55. For The G-Man 5/21/2005
56. Sticky Skin 6/20/2005
57. Grief 12/12/2005
58. My World 12/12/2005
59. Forgotten Friends 12/13/2005
60. Daisies 5/28/2005
61. A Stitch In Time 6/16/2005
62. My Future 11/21/2005
63. If I Left 8/29/2005
64. I Have Felt Sadness 7/27/2005
65. Dear Boy 7/30/2005
66. Memories 10/8/2004
67. Dancing Dreams 12/26/2004
68. My Life 12/13/2004
69. Broken 10/8/2004
70. Her Choice, Her Punishment 12/26/2004
71. Confusion 1/24/2005

Comments about Elsa Bear

  • Rufina Moor (8/29/2005 4:34:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed it. it's very nice and it flows well. light but deep at the same time :)
    Thanks. Nico

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  • Elsa Brooks (5/28/2005 8:00:00 PM)

    *blush*

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  • earyt etr (5/27/2005 8:05:00 AM)

    Elsa, first off, wow.You are a poet. Most people who write poetry just find clever ways to rhyme words together, and slap a title on it.Others, true poets, write from the heart, and that is what I consider poetry. The rest? Well, thats what I call Glorified Commercial Slogans. Keep writing, you inspire us all.

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  • Iskandr Kreepor (5/25/2005 11:18:00 AM)

    I love your work. I especially like your poem named Manufactured. I can relate to that one. Keep writing. Reading your work is something I look forward to. ^-^

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  • James Wright (2/10/2005 1:03:00 PM)

    Hehe 'comes with maturity' I kill me.

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  • dissatified exmember (1/28/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    Elsa Honey
    NEVER be scared of what people say. It's good to hear it. It helps, even when you don't think it does. This IS a public site and your work IS good enough to read. You did say you were writing from experience and its your life you are telling us all about. Well when you share your life with people, you have to expect them to say stuff. Often things we don't like. Also remember if you are telling people about yourself you do have to watch how you say it. Just in case they get the wrong impression. Don't take it on, and continuee to be yourself. Just take advice from Poet Hound. He has some good advice to give.

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  • Elsa Brooks (12/27/2004 4:51:00 PM)

    if only i knew how to delet comments

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Best Poem of Elsa Bear

Broken

you always promised me that things wouldn't change
and that youd love me all the same
youd be there for me when i was happy or sad
youd wipe away every tear that i cried
and i believed you
for all those promises were worth i belived youd keep them
every broken promise was another bitter tear
trailing miserably down my pale cheek
sometimes i believed that promises were made to be broken
but hearts, like childhood dreams were not
photographs torn to shreds
left like shattered truths
the ruins of what was onece viewed as a perfect childhood lay stretched out ...

Read the full of Broken

I Wish

it was all my fault,
i broke my heart as well as his
i hurt as much as he did.
three times.
three times i did it because i didnt know.
i didnt know i loved him.
i didnt know i cared so much,
i'd hurt so much, i'd cry so much.
it really was a scene from a movie