Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose
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When Old People.
When old people talk to 'emselves
What do they say?
Is it old memories of the past day tale?
When old people laugh to 'emselves
What amuse 'em?
Do them make old jokes once told by friends long gone to 'em?
When old people gaze into space
What do they see?
Is it sights young eyes does not dear to peek?
When old people gnash their teeth
What do they chew?
Is it hard nuts, robo, kuli-kuli or burning pain in their hearts they view?
When old people tap their feet
What do they beneath their feet kill?
Is it ants and bugs we do not see or ...
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Your discriptive expressions shows flexible imagination and good use of words with smooth flow of language.