GJG Elton

Rookie - 112 Points (Philadelphia, PA)

Biography of GJG Elton

There is not much to say. I never wrote a poem in my life until it was suggested by my ex wife that we write a poem to each other. Once I started, I could not stop. All the poems, for now, are about her, my loss of her and my wish for a new beginning and future.

I know many of the poems need work, some a LOT of work, so if you see something you like, or not, please let me know. If you have suggestions for improvement, I am all ears. I learn from doing and listening to others.

To that, I would really appreciate your voting on poems that you like, or not. I really appreciate the feedback, good or bad.

Thank you for looking.

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Two Women

Her incoming messages, I need to ignore,
As once I had said, one time before.
Every new buzz, it just breaks my heart,
Is this, the message, that drives us apart?

Two women I belong, in my twisted mind,
One is by heart, the other by line.
Crazy, she drives me, my heart's on the run,
I can't talk to her, while fighting with one.

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