GREENWOLFE 1962

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  • Brenda (3/15/2018 3:43:00 PM)

    Your words speak to me. Thank you for them.

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  • Riquetta Elliott (12/28/2011 11:05:00 PM)

    I don't know if you know, but we message each other before because 20 year old girl critized your poem called the oak tree lol. Anyways I read some of your poems and you still moved me with emotions and thoughts. Continue to write your piece to capture the audience sir. Keep it up! ! ! !

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  • Roy Gotaas (7/13/2010 8:41:00 AM)

    'In the land of the blind, the one-eyed man is king! '

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  • Vaibhav Pandey (6/8/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    He is one of the best poet I've ever read....Read his work and you'll never get disappointed.

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/5/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    Great write.. his poems are thoughtful, yet simple.. he understands the power of simplicity.. he is a teacher to me.

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  • Corey Campbell (BlackChild) (2/25/2009 3:54:00 PM)

    Greenwolfe, you are very good! ! I read your 'PAIN' poem. Wow...... That's all I can say. Thank goodness you have a lot of poems posted. I can just go through each one. Keep it up! !

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  • voice of the wild- child of the wolves (2/24/2009 5:54:00 PM)

    He is more than a great poet to me....i consider him as a friend

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/17/2009 7:23:00 PM)

    I can really say the you are among my favorite poets on PoemHunter.You are a true Master Of The Rhyme and you capture emotions so strongly in your words-I can actually hear a heart break or sense an epiphany-tens and many stars! ! ! ! !

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  • Myrtle Thomas Myrtle Thomas (2/2/2009 7:39:00 PM)

    I just want to say that your work inspires me to want to write just to your level, I find you are an excellent writer.I enjoyed it very much.I am new to writing as I just discovered I have a little talent a few months ago.I found my small talent on myspace.Look me up we can be friends on myspace Myrtle Thomas

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  • Joe M.-M. (1/24/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    I am not trying to be cruel or mean though I undoubtedly might, but you really need to work on your sound. I wrote things like this when I was in the 5th grade, though admittedly, a little less verbose and often with not so much subject matter at my disposal, but quite similar in simplicity. I enjoy your subject matter, but unless your audience is an assembly of the world's 4th graders, please spice it up a little, at least vary your line structure a little. You say you've read Shakespeare and Dickinson, but you're too uniform. Remember that on of the best parts of writing formal poetry, is breaking form to add import or delay understanding from line to line. Without variation, people might (as I admittedly had to fight doing out of respect to you) skip to the end or stop reading entirely. However, as a poet you have every right to continue in any way you wish. I just couldn't continue reading your work without at least voicing this. I really do enjoy the content.

    A fan (albeit, a critical one)

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Best Poem of GREENWOLFE 1962

Circle Of Angels

I sat in a circle of angels.
A place I had not been before.
I heard the sweet choir of Heaven,
Sing praise to the Lord evermore.

They glowed like the sun in the Heavens.
A light with a warmth I adored.
I felt like a babe in a cradle.
Nestled in the arms of the Lord.

Their wings were as white as a snowflake.
Their eyes like the stars in the sky.
They each one, in turn, spoke so gently;
I blinked, as a tear ...

Read the full of Circle Of Angels

Who'Ll Be There?

Who'll be there to hold my hand?
Who'll be standing by?
Will any shed a tear for me
As I prepare to die?

Who'll be there to pray for me?
Who'll be there to sing?
And who'll be there to kiss my cheek
If I go in the spring?