Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 359,055 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2014 6:22:00 PM)

    Many friends...

    Fully agreed with this great poem. Thanks for sharing.


    Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan
    Oct 16,2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/2/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Dream packed drama...

    Sarah Russell Yet, power lives beyond werds... absolutely! ! ! Poet, you Rule.
    6 hrs · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    I am happy, , , ,
    By far the best poem


    Daniel FranckLess than a minute ago
    This is the best poem I ever read on this website. It's a nice peice of art work keep up the good work

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    Rock star...Shows you care about the world. Other than just yourself.

    Lacie Mark5 hours ago
    Keep writing poems about world changes and politics. It's your thing :)
    Comment +1
    Wonderful

    Virginia R5 hours ago
    Your ending stanza was very strong
    Comment +1
    good poem


    iron maiden fan4 hours ago
    a leader or a rock star what do we need?
    Nice


    Ahmad Al_khatat5 hours ago
    Very crate
    Comment +1
    good


    Jeckle Hyde5 hours ago
    good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    Real wisdom.....
    Love This


    BabyGirl26 minutes ago
    And the poor will enter God's kingdom of riches and be as kings.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Chelsea Hamel29 minutes ago
    You sir are humble and a great poet.
    Comment +1
    Yes Indeed.... Quite Impressive Work! ! ! !


    Michael Donovan27 minutes ago
    Such a nice reading experience has been provided by this formidable piece.
    Comment +1
    well done


    Sai Krishna31 minutes ago
    beautiful

  • Kassem Oude Kassem Oude (9/25/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Hello, I am amazed by this poem and others too as I read all you show, this is a special one. I would hold your hand tightly and shake well. Thank you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    NO one to question....

    Beautiful


    Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago
    A true testament to this time and age.
    Comment +1
    good


    Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago
    I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing

    Jaime Leal10 minutes ago
    Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    She does

    A true man speaking of a true woman.


    Amanda SteinbrecherLess than a minute ago
    She must really love and be dedicated to you and her family. No woman will give her best day in and day out unless they have firm reason to. Cherish her dearly!
    ...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2014 10:57:00 PM)

    No ordinary...

    I enjoy it..


    Richard J Swartz44 minutes ago
    You have to know Poetry to understand it and know how to Read it...as well as to Wright it. You are a very good Poet I might add.
    Comment +1
    Best line


    Todd Vanisacker59 minutes ago
    Love the line I shall always see in form of an art I am half tempted to steal it. Just kidding
    Comment +1
    It's alright

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2014 10:42:00 AM)

    Love and...

    Aman


    Ahmad Al_khatat1 hour ago
    Very powerful writing
    Comment +1
    Love and- - - - -Passion- - -Compassion- - - - Fine unique expression- -


    Subhashchandra Adhav1 hour ago
    The design of the poem is thoughtful, imaginative and unique of its kind- - - - -I liked it much- -
    A zealous write of strong message- - - Love, peace, Aman and Amen- - -

    An excellent read- - - -

    Great work!

    Comment +1
    talented poet


    Sandra Boswell1 hour ago
    you are obviously a talented poet and despite a couple of lines that i did not understand i think you have written a great poem.Thank you.

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Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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