Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 304,952 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/7/2014 5:36:00 AM)

    Lento Maez (Mesa United States; Male; 74)
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
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    9/5/2014 3: 56: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    MHA, I present you with the highest award for literary excellence in poetry. Stay well and keep on keeping on.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/5/2014 8:33:00 PM)

    Martial law...

    Re: Martial law (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Friday, September 05,2014 (20: 40: 22)
    this is chilling and frightening and yet something I fear our current government here in the United States is aiming for. There is never a reason for martial law especially here in the States. We are a government of the people, by the people and for the people. Unfortunately as I said our current President seems to have forgotten that and day by day I see us heading into martial law and there seems little we can do about it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/5/2014 7:33:00 PM)

    Martial law

    Re: Martial law (Score: 1)
    by sedubah on Friday, September 05,2014 (02: 23: 00)
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    thanks for writing on this subject jadia4708au,

    in these yet united states of america;
    we call it the military police.

    i love these last lines

    But martial law is curse
    In many cases it has provide futile of course
    But still it is helpful to some extent
    It is needed at present

    To every thing there is a season,
    and a time to every purpose
    under the heaven

    Ecclesiastes 3: 1


  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2014 9:36:00 AM)

    Dear soldiers

    Soldiers are caught in the web of they're authority- more than many just want to be home with said families, so many would not be caught up at all, if given opportunity, the need for protection is understood, but not always who is being protected- Great write
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2014 8:11:00 PM)


    Marvellous line

    Ashutosh Kumar9 hours ago
    Comment +1
    “Is it curse to be in poor family”?

    Helvi Salminen19 hours ago
    People coming from poor families face problems which can seem like big mountains. To climb these mountains we must struggle, I agree. Also the question is it curse to be in poor family is interesting. Some explain that children suffer from parents' bad doing for generations. To me existence of poverty is a political choice which can be changed if there is a real will to do so.
    Comment +1
    Good one

    Rod Daniel19 hours ago

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2014 10:44:00 PM)

    At my door....

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2014 2:29:00 AM)

    I wish it...

    Intriguing and thought provoking. I like it.

    stan brierly58 minutes ago
    Keep writing and sharing.
    Comment +1

    SarahKnova Woods53 minutes ago
    I really like the first stanza even though it has a rhyme. I am not the biggest fan of rhyming; but you made it work in this first stanza :) Maybe in second one put make (a) sincere offer?

    The entire piece reminds me of being in love and knowing YOU will always be there for that person but they are in this case just not able to share that level of love you have for them.

    Reminds me of the first time I fell in love and life slowly putting me through many painful years and tears; nights up drinking far too much and writing about the pain of why would this person not see how deeply I cared for them.

    Thank you for sharing :)
    Comment +1
    Aw! Destined to be!

    Abigail Foster57 minutes ago
    Very nice, I like the message.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 1:36:00 AM)

    Suzette Portes San Jose Hasmukh Mehta...you have good lines of excerpts...i know how fast you can write...poets writes what we feel...i guess your fingers were as fast as your heart...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/5/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    Spare us...

    Ali Abdul M likes this.

    Ali Abdul M Your poetic effort is appreciated.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2014 7:40:00 PM)

    Caste system

    Re: Caste system (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Sunday, August 03,2014 (12: 50: 26)
    prejudice will always be a part of any society as long as people live. there will always be hate and jealousy and racism and there will always be love and joy and acceptance. it is all a part of being human.

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    Re: Caste system (Score: 1)
    by sedubah on Sunday, August 03,2014 (14: 21: 26)
    Dalit is a designation for a group of people traditionally regarded as untouchable.[6] Dalits are a mixed population, consisting of numerous social groups from all over India; they speak a variety of languages and practice a multitude of religions. There are many different names proposed for defining this group of people, including Panchamas (fifth varna) , and Asprushya (untouchables) .[citation needed]

    In 2011, the proportion of Dalit population was 24.4 percent of India's total population.[7] The Dalit population is broadly distributed across Indian states and districts. In 2011, the state of Punjab had the highest proportion of its population as Dalit, at about 31.9 percent, [8] and the state of Mizoram had the lowest at nearly zero. The government of India recognises and protects them as Scheduled Castes(SC) and Scheduled Tribes(ST) . The term Dalit has been interchangeably used with term Scheduled Castes, and Scheduled Tribes these terms include all historically discriminated communities of India out-caste and Untouchables. To prevent untouchable act and other criminal acts on Scheduled Castes(SC) and Scheduled Tribes(ST) Indian government commenced Prevention of Atrocity(POA) act on 31 March 1995[9][10]

    While discrimination based on caste has been prohibited and untouchability abolished under the Constitution of India, [11] discrimination and prejudice against Dalits in South Asia remains.[12][13][14] Since its independence in 1947, India has implemented an affirmative policy of reservation, the scope of which was further expanded in 1974, to set aside and provide jobs and education opportunities to Dalits.[15] By 1995, of all jobs in India,17.2 percent of the jobs were held by Dalits, greater than their proportion in Indian population.[16] In 1997, India democratically elected K. R. Narayanan, a Dalit, as the nation's President. Many social organisations too have proactively promoted better conditions for Dalits through improved education, health and employment.

    Dalits and similar groups are found in India, Nepal, Pakistan, [17] Sri Lanka[citation needed] and Bangladesh. Further wherever immigrants from these countries have left, caste has gone with them. As a result Dalits can also be found in the U.S., U.K, Singapore, Malaysia, Canada, and the Caribbean.[18][19][20]

    In addition, the Burakumin in Japan, Cagots and Roma in Europe, Al-Akhdam in Yemen, [21] and the Baekjeong in Korea are or were excluded from the surrounding community in much the same manner as the Dalit.[citation needed] In fact, a 2012 paper[22] argued that the European Romas' DNA matches the Dalit in India.

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    Re: Caste system (Score: 1)
    by sedubah on Sunday, August 03,2014 (14: 15: 22)
    thanks Hasmukh,

    for posting the relevant reminder
    about learning from the past

    Kenneth Wink

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    Re: Caste system (Score: 1)
    by sedubah on Sunday, August 03,2014 (14: 34: 03)
    this comment was made in haste
    it's still going on

    there are those that still dream
    all over the world

    It reminds me of the pygmies (bush people)
    of central Africa who are excluded

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    Re: Caste system (Score: 1)
    by sedubah on Sunday, August 03,2014 (15: 07: 13)
    i just got through watching the video
    India untouched: The darker side of India
    on youtube. it gives a background into
    what your poem is about. I'm in USA
    and we have problems too.

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    Re: Caste system (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Monday, August 04,2014 (20: 38: 23)
    what a keen observation.. i feel in heaven by yoru comment dear. welcome

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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