Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 398,227 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    Rock star...Shows you care about the world. Other than just yourself.

    Lacie Mark5 hours ago
    Keep writing poems about world changes and politics. It's your thing :)
    Comment +1
    Wonderful

    Virginia R5 hours ago
    Your ending stanza was very strong
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    good poem


    iron maiden fan4 hours ago
    a leader or a rock star what do we need?
    Nice


    Ahmad Al_khatat5 hours ago
    Very crate
    Comment +1
    good


    Jeckle Hyde5 hours ago
    good

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    Real wisdom.....
    Love This


    BabyGirl26 minutes ago
    And the poor will enter God's kingdom of riches and be as kings.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Chelsea Hamel29 minutes ago
    You sir are humble and a great poet.
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    Yes Indeed.... Quite Impressive Work! ! ! !


    Michael Donovan27 minutes ago
    Such a nice reading experience has been provided by this formidable piece.
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    well done


    Sai Krishna31 minutes ago
    beautiful

  • Kassem Oude Kassem Oude (9/25/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Hello, I am amazed by this poem and others too as I read all you show, this is a special one. I would hold your hand tightly and shake well. Thank you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    NO one to question....

    Beautiful


    Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago
    A true testament to this time and age.
    Comment +1
    good


    Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago
    I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing

    Jaime Leal10 minutes ago
    Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    She does

    A true man speaking of a true woman.


    Amanda SteinbrecherLess than a minute ago
    She must really love and be dedicated to you and her family. No woman will give her best day in and day out unless they have firm reason to. Cherish her dearly!
    ...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2014 10:57:00 PM)

    No ordinary...

    I enjoy it..


    Richard J Swartz44 minutes ago
    You have to know Poetry to understand it and know how to Read it...as well as to Wright it. You are a very good Poet I might add.
    Comment +1
    Best line


    Todd Vanisacker59 minutes ago
    Love the line I shall always see in form of an art I am half tempted to steal it. Just kidding
    Comment +1
    It's alright

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2014 10:42:00 AM)

    Love and...

    Aman


    Ahmad Al_khatat1 hour ago
    Very powerful writing
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    Love and- - - - -Passion- - -Compassion- - - - Fine unique expression- -


    Subhashchandra Adhav1 hour ago
    The design of the poem is thoughtful, imaginative and unique of its kind- - - - -I liked it much- -
    A zealous write of strong message- - - Love, peace, Aman and Amen- - -

    An excellent read- - - -

    Great work!

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    talented poet


    Sandra Boswell1 hour ago
    you are obviously a talented poet and despite a couple of lines that i did not understand i think you have written a great poem.Thank you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Haminia Haar Thank you for your precious comment, dear Hasmukh! I can understand that you don't believe in God, or you would have liked to see God..You are right, nobody could see God in reality. Some people see God in their dreams, others can feel Him, the bible says that God is the creator of all things, beings and human beings. I am one who can feel God and His help for me in reality. Albert Einstein also said that if he didn't believe in God's existence he wouldn't have discovered anything. I believe only in what is present in my life. In my opinion it is better for the people create good things in their mind than to create wars. Where to find God? In our souls!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2014 7:43:00 AM)

    Haminia Haar Hasmukh, thank you for the beautiful poem:
    You know
    And as far as I go
    You are the only one
    To whom I trust and none else

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    The little flower]

    Very nice


    Keith Horton23 hours ago
    Beautiful
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    wonderful description.

    alyshia mills23 hours ago
    when reading this, you chose the perfect words to paint a picture in my mind. I found that it had strong visionary words. When you talked about color, i saw them. When you talked about her smile, i saw the perfect smile, Very good work!

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
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