Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 439,504 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Haminia Haar Thank you for your precious comment, dear Hasmukh! I can understand that you don't believe in God, or you would have liked to see God..You are right, nobody could see God in reality. Some people see God in their dreams, others can feel Him, the bible says that God is the creator of all things, beings and human beings. I am one who can feel God and His help for me in reality. Albert Einstein also said that if he didn't believe in God's existence he wouldn't have discovered anything. I believe only in what is present in my life. In my opinion it is better for the people create good things in their mind than to create wars. Where to find God? In our souls!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2014 7:43:00 AM)

    Haminia Haar Hasmukh, thank you for the beautiful poem:
    You know
    And as far as I go
    You are the only one
    To whom I trust and none else

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    The little flower]

    Very nice


    Keith Horton23 hours ago
    Beautiful
    Comment +1
    wonderful description.

    alyshia mills23 hours ago
    when reading this, you chose the perfect words to paint a picture in my mind. I found that it had strong visionary words. When you talked about color, i saw them. When you talked about her smile, i saw the perfect smile, Very good work!

  • Dr John Celes Dr John Celes (9/8/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    sir, an enormous life-time's poetry writ with much truth, wisdom and authority. GLORIOUS.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    Good time..

    Haminia Haar Hasmukh, you are a great and very good poet! Thank you for your touching my heart new poems you write as reply to my verses, they are so beautiful and true!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/7/2014 5:36:00 AM)

    From:
    Lento Maez (Mesa United States; Male; 74)
    To:
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    9/5/2014 3: 56: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    Presenting
    MHA, I present you with the highest award for literary excellence in poetry. Stay well and keep on keeping on.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/5/2014 8:33:00 PM)

    Martial law...

    Re: Martial law (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Friday, September 05,2014 (20: 40: 22)
    this is chilling and frightening and yet something I fear our current government here in the United States is aiming for. There is never a reason for martial law especially here in the States. We are a government of the people, by the people and for the people. Unfortunately as I said our current President seems to have forgotten that and day by day I see us heading into martial law and there seems little we can do about it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/5/2014 7:33:00 PM)

    Martial law


    Re: Martial law (Score: 1)
    by sedubah on Friday, September 05,2014 (02: 23: 00)
    Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink
    Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

    thanks for writing on this subject jadia4708au,

    in these yet united states of america;
    we call it the military police.

    i love these last lines

    But martial law is curse
    In many cases it has provide futile of course
    But still it is helpful to some extent
    It is needed at present

    To every thing there is a season,
    and a time to every purpose
    under the heaven

    Ecclesiastes 3: 1


    Sedubah

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2014 9:36:00 AM)

    Dear soldiers

    Soldiers are caught in the web of they're authority- more than many just want to be home with said families, so many would not be caught up at all, if given opportunity, the need for protection is understood, but not always who is being protected- Great write
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2014 8:11:00 PM)

    Struggle....

    Marvellous line


    Ashutosh Kumar9 hours ago
    Inspiration
    Comment +1
    “Is it curse to be in poor family”?

    Helvi Salminen19 hours ago
    People coming from poor families face problems which can seem like big mountains. To climb these mountains we must struggle, I agree. Also the question is it curse to be in poor family is interesting. Some explain that children suffer from parents' bad doing for generations. To me existence of poverty is a political choice which can be changed if there is a real will to do so.
    Comment +1
    Good one


    Rod Daniel19 hours ago
    Nice

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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