Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 303,628 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:15:00 PM)

    With you all

    Robin Pauley Nice write too
    May 16 at 7: 53pm · Like · 1

    JayLou Santos I love yOur smile
    June 12 at 8: 43pm · Unlike · 1

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    With you all...

    Mv Venkataraman You look very young in this one, Let your beard be undone, You are extremely handsome, Your beard-less photo is welcome, Forgive me if I am offensive, Only a kind suggestion, I now give.
    7 hrs · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    With you all...

    Mv Venkataraman You look very young in this one, Let your beard be undone, You are extremely handsome, Your beard-less photo is welcome, Forgive me if I am offensive, Only a kind suggestion, I now give.
    7 hrs · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 8:48:00 AM)

    I could reach

    Introspection

    KR BALAKRISHNAN17 minutes ago
    good poem.I consider this poet as a revolutionary poet in the sense that he has bravely adopted to create a robust structure in most of his poems, regardless of the theme dealt with. He has opened his own path of writing poetry, which has to be appreciated.
    Comment 0
    Nice poem


    Nita Varma17 minutes ago
    I liked the way in which you have expressed yourself

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:33:00 AM)

    Complete heaven

    Re: Complete heaven (Score: 1)
    by Lilwing on Friday, June 13,2014 (02: 21: 16)
    Such beautiful words...profoundly deep yet even someone who's never been in love, can feel your heart! ?Thank you for sharing yourself so intimately??

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    on Friday, June 13,2014 (08: 32: 09)
    welcome lilwing. kind regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    You are right..
    Re: You are right (Score: 1)
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    Re: You are right (Score: 1)
    on Friday, June 13,2014 (08: 28: 21)
    welcome anthony. regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Premilah Ramnauth Hasmukh Mehta am no poet nor poetress..neither do I aspire to be one....am simple woman...I keep repeating it...u r a prized author....I salute you Sir

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Girl for you.....Deep


    Michal Cendrowski9 hours ago
    a pre-determined love?
    Comment +1
    Great

    Michael Sechrest9 hours ago
    Very lovely poem, and I feel that your accent seems to bleed into your writing which I find interesting it gives the writing a certain tone you dont see too often. The idea of finding that special someone from an early age is a good topic to write on and you clearly have done so from a unique perspective, so I rather like this poem.

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/29/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comments, much appreciated and an honour from someone as you, I would like to be considered one of the top 500 poets, you stand in exalted company and well deserved too, I have read many of your poems and they are extremely high standard, please keep writing, its a pleasure to read your work.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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