Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 330,737 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2014 9:51:00 PM)

    Cuckoo remind...

    I love the abstract feeling!

    Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago
    I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose.
    Comment +1
    Metaphor really stood as something else

    Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago
    Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways
    Comment +1

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    LIFE MUST RELEASE

    I am your si..
    Let us be respectful
    And make it successful
    That human tragedy is avoidable
    If we remain united and face the struggle

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Life must release..



    catherine lajul
    You are God sent, with briliant poems

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    Flow in limit....

    sage advice indeed


    barbara greaves1 hour ago
    Prophetic words. Thanks for sharing
    Comment +1
    wonderfully done


    Billy Stephens1 hour ago
    keep up the good work
    Comment +1
    Good written


    Nabil Akif1 hour ago
    Good content..
    Comment +1
    Good flow


    Judith Newby1 hour ago
    Full of positive affirmations.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/30/2014 7:12:00 PM)

    Can afford....

    Hmmmm


    Piusha Singh7 hours ago
    True Hasmukh ji, political and religious big game.Dividing people across the border, spreading hatred in the air.
    Good write.
    Comment +1
    Jai Hind!


    Srirama Jayam6 hours ago
    There are no options really, for people in the defence services of the country, except to do their utmost and protect our beloved motherland. The political ramifications that are involved in making strategic moves in safeguarding our borders are not really easy to understand for the common man. The verses may be empowered with metre and rhyme to make it an enjoyable poem with a message.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Freedom of expression...H..
    ammer down as is the nature of truth, I have heard this hammer work, it will bring down walls love has power, this poem holds love
    22 Mar by leafsailors Ghost to Freedom of expression

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Humbly serve...

    Scott Ransopher Poetry is all about imagination two person can not have same indication one may always differ and feel otherwise as lover may sometimes be called 'mad' by wise so never collide but confide by heart and take it as an art love is expression poetry is confession speak your heart freely the field is wide open really why someone must be blocked? Good lines. Good poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2014 8:33:00 AM)

    Live and let....
    Roseann Shawiak(3/17/2014 11: 21: 00 PM)
    Live and let others live - is close to my heart - it is how I live my life and
    expect others to do the same towards me. Honesty and truth go hand
    in hand throughout life, with a gentle, kind compassion towards all. This
    poem is taken right from God, great one! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/13/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    The great salt march....

    George T. Everette likes this.

    George T. Everette A great country must have great leadership and when it is lacking, the people look for it, though it is a rare as gold. Success, I hope you publish this one somewhere.
    14 hours ago · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/6/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    Gloria Rodikis A great poem marking the times
    of a place, or country!
    7 hours ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Move Is Known

Move is known

You have strong belief
And that provides relief
You need no personality cult
As it is in built

Many people hold view
But held firmly by few

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