Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 317,325 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/6/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome lajpat jagani, nikhil godiyani, ankita chaturvedi, mac adrona and sandeep kumar
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/6/2014 6:07:00 AM)

    Death caught her.....

    Ferdinand Quintos...
    Wonder why and when TERROR became an ISM.
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    Lilian Dipasupil Kunimasa Intensive Sadistic Malfunction?
    I just noticed how ISM is added to any obsessive belief.
    I agree Terrorism should not be identified with any religion, region not even with any race, sex, age, or social standing.
    Terrorism more than just bombs and fanatics. It is of people who are deluged with own perceived power.
    A delusionary stand and practice. Violence never solve anything yet it exists wherever love, respect and sanity is gone.
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  • Jitesh Shah Jitesh Shah (3/3/2014 10:02:00 AM)

    as per your experience there are very nice the poem i also invite to read my poem and if any query please suggest me

  • Tanya Gupta (2/27/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    you are very expierienced mr.hasmukh i invite you to read my poetries and leave a comment

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/19/2014 4:56:00 AM)

    No reason......The maturity you imbibed is the result of long experience in life. Worth repeating lines.

    UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307
    Feb 19,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/18/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    The God is...Mohan Lohani I have enjoyed reading your poems in the past and good to know that you have continued writing such beautiful and nice poems.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 10:52:00 PM)

    By words...
    Scott Ransopher It has key to ignition there is lot more compassion emanating from kind heart almost written in form an art words are molded like river water some times it flows slower sometimes with fury and totally in spate there are many more things to relate poetry can make you to cry it can make you to fly even with weak wings in sky it helps to boost morale with concentrated try words have immense thrust it can be coupled with trust it may cut through slice with determined bid of promises words do come from mind but it has inner core and shield heart pushes real ambition and desire words play nicely with shape to admire. Good lines. Good poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/25/2014 6:45:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno I could only repeat what Rohani Daud said
    'You're a great poet.. Never fade a passion and knowledge Mr Hasmukh
    - Manzil Rajput 'nice sir ji '

    ... Pls send me the English version :)))
    ... I believe them, You really are! ! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    face the bullet

    Much Appreciated

    Syed Mudasir37 minutes ago
    I respect both the individuals like Mahatma Gandhiji as well as Martin Luther; But there is no comparison in terms of Gandhi, he is an individual and a great personality. This poem had brilliant imagery which talks about the loss of the last century and there is no worst tragedy then Gandhiji's Assasination, he was a pillar of Asia... A great poem which is very honest and we all know great people are either disappeared or assasinated.... Much Appreciated
    Comment +1
    A clear point made

    Steven Curphey32 minutes ago
    Well the second political poem i have just reviewed on the bounce. This one maybe doesn't read as fluently as I have a preference for, however, if you are making a political point why not say it straight up like this one as we have plenty of politicians who don't say what we want them to and who hide behind masks in speaking terms, so well done for saying it like it is.
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    this real and has nothing to do with politics. people should fight for themselves now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2014 5:27:00 PM)

    Poetry is no joke......Rick R
    Well put I am in awe that those with English as a second language can create very good English poems I have enough trouble with one language

    Well taken sir..words of wisdom from a great poet himself! Thank you for the guidelines!

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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