Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 318,628 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/8/2016 12:16:00 AM)

    Sandra Ssarmiento Will give my verse to touch some hearts.
    Will give my little voice also, close to your voice.
    We can say stop to the violence.
    Stop to the pain of our childrens, womens.
    No more deaths, no more hunger.
    My heart there, where the people cryn.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2016 6:50:00 PM)

    'Female touch
    Makes it to reach parity of gold'

    Hasmukh Bhai, Dr Radhakrishnan said that man is an animal tamed by woman. It is the female touch that calms the angry man and thus creates social tranquility.
    A beautiful poem with new ideas.

    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Oct 29,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/26/2016 9:14:00 AM)

    Chris Wood John Berryman asked W.S.Merwin How do you know if anything you wrote is really any good? The answer he got was You don't. You die without knowing. If you have to know, don't write. Unlike · Reply · 1 ·
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/26/2016 9:13:00 AM)

    x Shrikrishna Ubale You wrote reality....! But even if no one is commenting on non -selected poets, writers...! Not to worry just write and write go ahead...! Express and feel good...! Self joy...! Enjoy...! Unlike · Reply · 1 · 3 mins
    today by hasmukh amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/26/2016 12:03:00 AM)

    Dear Hasmukh I add my congratulations to you for your wedding anniversary. You have written such a beautiful poem depicting your life's journey and at then end acknowledging that all is from the Almighty. May you and your wife enjoy many more years together in peace and every growing love for each other.


    Avril meallem, Jerusalem, Israel
    May 07,2015 (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2016 11:38:00 PM)

    What would happen?
    If granted heaven
    To terrorists
    Whenever they insisted

    I think they should be sent as early as possible to heaven. If it's done they will get 'zannat, ' which they are hoping to get and the world will cease to be a 'zahannum.' Both sides will be happy.

    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Oct 15,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2016 12:37:00 AM)

    - - -Dear Poet,
    You are amazing. Your poem is really the essence of poetic charm.
    I thank you for your kind comments.
    Robert

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/13/2016 6:53:00 PM)

    Pantas Pangihutan S Thanks sir... for your toughts in poem -nice one! Moral values is a fine softwares of humanity that should be re-installed and updated!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/13/2016 3:32:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Bhai, you have rightly observed the plight of the nation. Indian history shows that our ideals of universal manhood and world as a family is the cause of our failure to drive out invaders. We should retain those ideals and at the same time be prepared to face invasion in any form including terrorism.


    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Oct 13,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2016 12:03:00 PM)

    A sad commentary on the state of affairs in the country. We have so many ills that we are at best a fractured democracy.

    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Oct 10,2016

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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