Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,256 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 8: 21: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20890994 - Between lines
    Member: Ricardo Flores
    Comment: This has so much potential within it.
    it is the kind of poem that brightens me with emotion in fact.
    I admire this.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 10: 55: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Romeo Della Valle
    Comment: Excellent confession! coming from the bottom of your honest heart! Poetry is a non-stop process we go through with no time limit...Inspirations come and Inspirations go, but the ones we can hold, become the centered stage of a master piece poem...10+++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/8/2010 10: 31: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18254711 - Bidding farewell
    Member: Alex Nodopaka
    Comment: It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

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  • John Maxwell John Maxwell (1/6/2010 12:04:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind comment. I have just read your' Accept Everything.'
    What a great insight to ones everyday living, and life in general. Great write!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:30:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    te & Time: 1/1/2010 6: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20139791 - I miss
    Member: Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire
    Comment: Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/30/2009 8:30:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/30/2009 9: 35: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Jack Price
    Comment: Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2009 9:47:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20817072 - At bay
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran

    Comment: You are a gifted writer and poetry flows from your pen so freely and smoothly like a running river. God bless you.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/28/2009 10:55:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: wow! a wonderful hope of harmony...so deep that my sphere of life.....
    rendezvous the beautiful tomorrow of my life... my success would be our
    prosperous banquet for your one of my best friend in land of poetry....
    may your poem be amongst the inspiring wisdom of these ages...
    may God bless you.... a star for you and a 10 +++++

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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