Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 689,276 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/26/2009 9: 54: 00 AM Remove this comment

    Poem: 20754857 - I will descend
    Member: Ronald Peat

    Comment: A higher power will squash us all like bugs because humans are evil. An interesting concept. I keep thinking man brings about his own demise due to his own actions. Which has little to do with God at all and has everything to do with mans greed, anger, lust, vanity and attachment to things. And that God is really only love, with the hope that we, his creation, will finally get it some day; someday before we all put an end to ourselves and the complete planet. If we could only begin with ourselves maybe the world would, could change. Every person needs to be the example. Change yourself and change the whole world. It starts with yourself in your own heart.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    From: Lindani Mahlangu (Siyabuswa South Africa; Male; 19)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/24/2009 8: 39: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Wow wow wow

    A poem titled 'accept everything'
    thats a poem that deserve a round of applause, you are such a great writer, happy Xmas man n have a prosperous new year too. I like ur style of writing n all da courage n potential u have man, cheers

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    From: Joseph Stotz (Springfield United States; Male; 30)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/1/2009 7: 58: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Re: dear friend

    Sir I appreciate all kind words
    that pour from the silver breeze
    that I may find my soul and not
    mind anymore being bound by week knees
    that I may stand up with truth
    and never have to fight
    That when I have no time to read yours
    for you it is I write
    May God bless you as I may be blessed
    as you have given me faith
    that I may write for family
    soldiers that no man be left behind
    i write this now for you
    and I will post it true
    for all to read as you
    Hasmukh Amathalal
    I may be american
    but divided the whole
    earth needs to unite in spirit
    to be never torn from old

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 11/10/2009 6: 31: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 20153775 - Backlash
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: Beautifully landscape of poetry.....this is a poem for refreshing and for
    stress management.....just a ponder would mean a lot to unlock
    our emotional pain.....recommended for people who have no reason to
    pacify them selves....no reason the...Why of this world.....this would
    help their doubt.....thank you for sharing...and God bless you my friend
    a 10....and a Star

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/31/2009 3: 04: 00 AM Remove this comment

    Poem: 20033807 - I could explain
    Member: Lady Grace

    Comment: i wish you could explain sorrow
    as you see it in her eyes
    to stop you from loneliness
    keeping in your heart..

    i wish she could explain all the things
    that bothers inside you
    for it can comfort the surroundings
    and the environment within you...

    i wish i could see you in the best smile
    without jealousy and discomforts
    without hesitations and doubts
    wish a goodluck to BOTH....

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  • Mohd Murtuza Soofi (10/31/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    quiet tricky and nice use of words in most of your poetry

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  • Catrina Heart (10/30/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    My thankfulness for the sacred text
    you have engraved on my obelisk

    The hieroglyphics carved means so much
    In my journey to the seven seas

    You stood to be my beacon on the storm
    You stood as a tree seeing my history

    Thanks once again for the friendship
    Painting my days really worth remembering

    Thanks and love,
    Catrina Heart

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 8: 59: 00 PM Remove this comment

    Poem: 19017920 - Blood all over
    Member: Almedia Knight

    Comment: 'Blood spilled all over on ground' your poem is painful to read because of the truth it tells.As I write there're 2 wars spilling the blood of innocence men, women, and children. Where or who is the 'almighty'? Perhaps our hoping for 'it' to be rescued by the power of some unknown or myth, [ no respect to any one's belief just my personal opinion] seems to just give us a reason to relinquish our personal responsibilities. Hasmukh, without love in our hearts for the born and the unborn, there seems to be little hope for any changes in the minds and hearts of those who wishes to dominate and or suppress other human beings.In my country many pretend to care about the unborn but how can you be concern about the unborn but have no problem killing or having those that are born killed...it makes no sense to me.Anyway a good write. a 10+++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 9:18:00 PM)

    Poem: 17309480 - All hopes against hope
    Member: Gracey Newman

    Comment: AHH...the ending is soo powerfull
    'Sun may go up with its destined time,
    target we should set as our object prime,
    luck may not favour but not let us down,
    plant will come up when seeds are sown '
    - beautiful

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 5:57:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 10/28/2009 12: 58: 00 AM Remove this comment

    Poem: 19924166 - Beautiful world
    Member: Vinod Kumar

    Comment: Nice job.. to identify and understand the almighty with the clear mind, that is this poem, in my humble openion there should be a godess to help the god that is Mother, who knows the cild`s needs well, thanks 10++

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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