Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 742,417 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:30:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    te & Time: 1/1/2010 6: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20139791 - I miss
    Member: Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire
    Comment: Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/30/2009 8:30:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/30/2009 9: 35: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Jack Price
    Comment: Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2009 9:47:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20817072 - At bay
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran

    Comment: You are a gifted writer and poetry flows from your pen so freely and smoothly like a running river. God bless you.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/28/2009 10:55:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20754880 - Accept everything
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: wow! a wonderful hope of harmony...so deep that my sphere of life.....
    rendezvous the beautiful tomorrow of my life... my success would be our
    prosperous banquet for your one of my best friend in land of poetry....
    may your poem be amongst the inspiring wisdom of these ages...
    may God bless you.... a star for you and a 10 +++++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 9:11:00 PM)

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    Poem: 20754857 - I will descend
    Member: Ronald Peat

    Comment: A higher power will squash us all like bugs because humans are evil. An interesting concept. I keep thinking man brings about his own demise due to his own actions. Which has little to do with God at all and has everything to do with mans greed, anger, lust, vanity and attachment to things. And that God is really only love, with the hope that we, his creation, will finally get it some day; someday before we all put an end to ourselves and the complete planet. If we could only begin with ourselves maybe the world would, could change. Every person needs to be the example. Change yourself and change the whole world. It starts with yourself in your own heart.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/26/2009 3:51:00 AM)

    From: Lindani Mahlangu (Siyabuswa South Africa; Male; 19)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/24/2009 8: 39: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Wow wow wow


    A poem titled 'accept everything'
    thats a poem that deserve a round of applause, you are such a great writer, happy Xmas man n have a prosperous new year too. I like ur style of writing n all da courage n potential u have man, cheers

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    From: Joseph Stotz (Springfield United States; Male; 30)
    To: Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time: 12/1/2009 7: 58: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: dear friend


    Sir I appreciate all kind words
    that pour from the silver breeze
    that I may find my soul and not
    mind anymore being bound by week knees
    that I may stand up with truth
    and never have to fight
    That when I have no time to read yours
    for you it is I write
    May God bless you as I may be blessed
    as you have given me faith
    that I may write for family
    soldiers that no man be left behind
    i write this now for you
    and I will post it true
    for all to read as you
    Hasmukh Amathalal
    I may be american
    but divided the whole
    earth needs to unite in spirit
    to be never torn from old

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 11/10/2009 6: 31: 00 PM Remove this comment


    Poem: 20153775 - Backlash
    Member: Antonio Liao

    Comment: Beautifully landscape of poetry.....this is a poem for refreshing and for
    stress management.....just a ponder would mean a lot to unlock
    our emotional pain.....recommended for people who have no reason to
    pacify them selves....no reason the...Why of this world.....this would
    help their doubt.....thank you for sharing...and God bless you my friend
    a 10....and a Star

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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