Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,760 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    Your Words Flow Well With Truth And Capture The Very Essence Of The Heart. A Wonderful Poet Indeed. **Blessings**

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  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (8/11/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    my heart gets wings on your verses

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/1/2009 7:38:00 PM)

    you are a fine poet.

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  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (7/27/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    Friend in need is friend in deed,
    Modern friends only provide feed,
    Desert in right time and nev.........
    fiend who helps in time is called friend...10

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  • Mariel Obog Mariel Obog (7/23/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    i aM disgrace.. i Love this one.. its nice.. evry! should read it..

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  • Samaneh Nazerian (7/22/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    Hi, Dear.

    Well down! Your poems are so nice. Your “bidding farewell” was excellent and so amazing. Your way of expression is wonderful and easy to understand. Your poems’ style are very close to mine; It is good to me.
    It’ll be pleasure for me to have your comments on my words almost with God.
    I’m waiting for knowing your opinion and nice advice about my poems.
    Wish you all success and happiness,
    Samaneh Nazerian
    Tehran,
    Iran

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  • Mary Tornyenyor (7/17/2009 5:26:00 AM)

    I LOVE UR POEMS, U ARE SOO POETIC
    I PRAY THAT GOD GIVE U THE WISDOM TO BE ABLE TO WRITE MORE OF THESE. AMEN

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (7/15/2009 12:31:00 AM)

    an excellent poem..did you see the Ghosts on poemhunter..lol..check out

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  • Omar Ibrahim (7/12/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    a one of my favorite poets here at poemhunter.com...........actually, all indians at poemhunter.com are my favorite because they all rhyme! ! ! in fact, Hasmukh Amathalal is the best of them all......he is not less than pablo neruda or william blake...i am really honest....and if he worked on being famous he will certainly be a popular, famous poet......he can publish his poems in many sites...he can also publish them in any journal in india if this is possible......

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  • John Shea (6/27/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh...this poem is truly wonderful...you must have caught quite a beautiful butterfly.. one full of inspiration and fine for your family to see..I know that I will chase it too and share it with my family and tell them where it came from and release it for them to share..your friend John.

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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