Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 742,417 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    Benjamin Hallas (10/27/2009 10: 45: 00 PM)

    I have to say that this is one of the best poems that I have ever read. The message that this poem conveys is one that we should all heed. We all need to be conscious of the earth.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Yacov Mitchenko (10/27/2009 1: 57: 00 AM)

    The last stanza is the most revealing here. Peace and wholeness of being are more important than all the travails associated with success. A few points about success: there are often expectations brought to bear once we have succeeded, and we're often afraid we may not meet those expectations. Moreover, successes often incite envy, and there's always someone more successful than you. They aren't permanent either. Although I don't understand many lines here (because they're too abstract) , I appreciate the thoughtfulness of the poem as a whole.

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  • Catrina Heart (10/27/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a magnanimous dedicated modern poet of today’s’ generation. His works were all reflections of human realism in this world. Be it in individual, personal or global situations. The poet’s pieces surround to the problems arising to everyday’s life with much ado to poetic advices, claiming awareness with questions and motivations in every stanza.

    The poet makes his crafts in quatrain form of verses with fine ending rhymes. Using also vivid images so that the readers will be able to understand clearly what he wanted to convey. Grammar is less significant, bluntness or dullness of presentation is not that matters to him for he believes that the best verse will mark to the readers’ mind easily and the influence of each composition to the lives of the people is most valuable.

    Reading his works is such a pleasure and insightful. Every theme offers valuable lessons to ponder on, great take outs in eloquence.

    To the poet himself, Congratulations for the job well done! ! !

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  • Kris Templin (10/11/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    hello
    I just wanted to say that this is a very awesome poem
    a lot of feeling you put into it wow thanks for sharing

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  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (9/23/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    ........Tremendous efforts and good poetry are your forte.But the popularity terms are quite misleading for I was India`s first last year for two weeks... Efforts for transmission of thoughts must not be ever left aloof. All the best Amathalal

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  • Brittney Miller (8/16/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    Very good I quit enjoyed it

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  • Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    Your Words Flow Well With Truth And Capture The Very Essence Of The Heart. A Wonderful Poet Indeed. **Blessings**

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  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (8/11/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    my heart gets wings on your verses

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/1/2009 7:38:00 PM)

    you are a fine poet.

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  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (7/27/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    Friend in need is friend in deed,
    Modern friends only provide feed,
    Desert in right time and nev.........
    fiend who helps in time is called friend...10

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I am feeble and also very weak,
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