Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

721. Different Environment 3/9/2011
722. An Old Guard 3/9/2011
723. Shining Not Real 3/9/2011
724. Out Of Gear 3/9/2011
725. Beautiful End 3/9/2011
726. Worry Lines 3/10/2011
727. It's Last Rise 3/10/2011
728. Turn Sour 3/10/2011
729. Too Large To Live 3/10/2011
730. Enough For Us 3/10/2011
731. Those Stiff Lines 3/11/2011
732. No One Should 3/11/2011
733. Third Eye 3/11/2011
734. Missing You Lovely 3/11/2011
735. What Can I Do 3/11/2011
736. A Gift For Us 3/11/2011
737. Hopeless Dreams 3/12/2011
738. Hopeless Untrue Dreams 3/12/2011
739. Turns Dry 3/12/2011
740. More Than Award 3/12/2011
741. Mercy On Mankind 3/12/2011
742. Own Reflection 3/12/2011
743. Desprately Want 3/12/2011
744. Strength In Diversity 3/12/2011
745. Bondage Here Too 3/13/2011
746. Threw Me Out 3/13/2011
747. More Than Important 3/14/2011
748. Writing On Wall 3/14/2011
749. You And Nobody Else 3/14/2011
750. Love And Sex 3/14/2011
751. In Waiting 3/15/2011
752. Play All Part 3/15/2011
753. Inspiring Object 3/15/2011
754. Pack Of Cards 3/16/2011
755. Biggest Gain 3/16/2011
756. Open Road 3/16/2011
757. An Open Road 3/16/2011
758. To Rise Again 3/16/2011
759. Pain Behind 3/16/2011
760. Anchor Safely 3/16/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 7:23:00 PM)

    Find welcome...

    Sanaa Uppal Hasmukh Mehta smile emoticon
    It is always a pleasure to have you
    your splendid words are so lovely and welcomed smile emoticon thank you
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    Difficult art.....

    Maleka Ferdous Thank you for your beautifully repply with an excellent poetry Hasmukh Meheta.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    ........................Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)

    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)

    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2015 6:00:00 AM)

    O soldiers

    Ratnakar Mandlik (8/15/2015 2: 52: 00 AM)
    Oh dear soldiers
    The nation is on your shoulder

    You are one of rare breed
    No one can deny you your rights.
    Hats off. Your poem has reflected sentiments of every one.
    Ratnakar Mandlik (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 4,546 PointsRamesh T A (8/15/2015 2: 46: 00 AM)
    The sacrifice of soldiers at the border to safeguard nation is greatest ever! (

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Perfct match

    What a beautiful way to start the narrative with your 'best whisper'. Enjoyed this lyrical poetry devoted to a delicate romantic affair. Thanks for sharing the poem. I would like to quote:
    My efforts proved success
    She gave nod for full access (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2015 6:50:00 AM)

    With presence

    Wow man, this is awesome. I can definitely tell you know what you're doing with nearly 10,000 poems. It really shows. I might add a comma after the word Yes, but that's just me and i think you have a really impeccable piece here. That's the only thing that really stuck out as a possible fix, but it's not really needed if you like the exact juxtaposition of the stanzas and the poem itself.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2015 12:33:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/11/2015 9: 22: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 17558708 - All Dreams Not Come True###(In 500)
    Member: Bharati Nayak
    Comment: Full of positive notions the poem is a great write inspiring to work with full dedicated effort, sticking to right path and not to be daunted by failures when it says-
    -Life does not end with setting of a day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/9/2015 7:39:00 PM)

    Steven Jacobson I would like to share poetry with yours and be friends.

    Eternal Fountain
    Making fool

    The time translates and transcribes
    its etching on the world. the
    world forever endeared to time
    but missing the mark of ever being
    in the moment. Nature continues
    to outshine the world in both
    effervescent and existential manor.
    whether spring, summer, fall or winter
    nature portrays both an intoxicating
    and intrinsic flavor and festive
    flowing of life. the bubbling and
    birth, a fountain, pure delight
    and perfect demeanor cascading,
    glowing and growing, extravaganza.
    the Spirit in rapture with spirit
    creating an abode, an eternal sanctuary
    filled with grace and glory.

    © 2015 Steven Jacobson
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    Hasmukh Mehta oh so beautiful
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2015 8:04:00 PM)

    Wonderful job, Hasmukh ji. The world of poesy needs you to write more. Keep going and enlighten all. Thank you very much.

    Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
    07 Aug,2015

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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