Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 467,214 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

721. We Gave In 3/10/2017
722. Without Blessings 3/10/2017
723. मजाक सा होगा Majak 3/12/2017
724. ગરીબો નું કલ્યાણ Garibo Nu Ej 3/12/2017
725. Master Stroke Again 3/13/2017
726. ગાંડાઓના ગામ ના હોય 3/14/2017
727. Strong Base 3/14/2017
728. ફેલાવો પ્રેમ નું Felaavo 3/15/2017
729. Heal The Heart 3/15/2017
730. મળે જીવન માં રાહત Male Rahat 3/15/2017
731. डग आगे करो Dag 3/17/2017
732. Beyond Control 3/18/2017
733. જીવન નો અફસોસ Jivan No 3/18/2017
734. Culture Shall Emerge 3/18/2017
735. Happy And Real 3/19/2017
736. On Golden Page 3/19/2017
737. Love Is No 3/20/2017
738. Only Academician 3/20/2017
739. Ideal Place 3/22/2017
740. The Country Is Needed 3/22/2017
741. No Show Off 3/24/2017
742. Earn More 3/24/2017
743. Unrealistic World 3/25/2017
744. In Our Later Stage 3/27/2017
745. Nice And True 3/28/2017
746. હૃદય ની સામ્રાજ્ઞિ Hraday Ni 3/28/2017
747. In New Shapes 3/29/2017
748. I Shall Perform 3/31/2017
749. Peace And Stability Act 4/3/2017
750. Like Kite 4/3/2017
751. Simple Mistake 4/3/2017
752. Peace Abd Stability All Over 4/1/2017
753. No More Dear 4/4/2017
754. No Innocence 4/6/2017
755. Skill Or No Skill 4/6/2017
756. Love Is Love For All 4/8/2017
757. Love Is Love For 4/8/2017
758. માતા નું ઋણ Maataa Nu 4/8/2017
759. Scenes Never Seen 4/9/2017
760. હતા આપણે સમદ્રષ્ટિ Hataa Aapne 4/9/2017

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2015 3:00:00 AM)

    3: 52 PM (21 hours ago)

    to me
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    With lots of fun

    Hasmukh Bhai, you have created a beautiful poem with the Biblical idea.

    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    25 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 7:23:00 PM)

    Find welcome...

    Sanaa Uppal Hasmukh Mehta smile emoticon
    It is always a pleasure to have you
    your splendid words are so lovely and welcomed smile emoticon thank you
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    Difficult art.....

    Maleka Ferdous Thank you for your beautifully repply with an excellent poetry Hasmukh Meheta.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    ........................Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)

    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)

    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2015 6:00:00 AM)

    O soldiers

    Ratnakar Mandlik (8/15/2015 2: 52: 00 AM)
    Oh dear soldiers
    The nation is on your shoulder

    You are one of rare breed
    No one can deny you your rights.
    Hats off. Your poem has reflected sentiments of every one.
    Ratnakar Mandlik (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 4,546 PointsRamesh T A (8/15/2015 2: 46: 00 AM)
    The sacrifice of soldiers at the border to safeguard nation is greatest ever! (

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Perfct match

    What a beautiful way to start the narrative with your 'best whisper'. Enjoyed this lyrical poetry devoted to a delicate romantic affair. Thanks for sharing the poem. I would like to quote:
    My efforts proved success
    She gave nod for full access (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2015 6:50:00 AM)

    With presence

    Wow man, this is awesome. I can definitely tell you know what you're doing with nearly 10,000 poems. It really shows. I might add a comma after the word Yes, but that's just me and i think you have a really impeccable piece here. That's the only thing that really stuck out as a possible fix, but it's not really needed if you like the exact juxtaposition of the stanzas and the poem itself.
    8 hours ago by Peter Hamilton | Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2015 12:33:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/11/2015 9: 22: 00 PM
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    Poem: 17558708 - All Dreams Not Come True###(In 500)
    Member: Bharati Nayak
    Comment: Full of positive notions the poem is a great write inspiring to work with full dedicated effort, sticking to right path and not to be daunted by failures when it says-
    -Life does not end with setting of a day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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