Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

801. ભૂલ થઇ જાય Bhul 8/19/2017
802. Train Accidents 8/20/2017
803. Go On From 8/20/2017
804. Not Late 3/28/2015
805. Courage 3/30/2015
806. Courageous Stand 3/30/2015
807. Miserably Fail 3/31/2015
808. So Sorry 3/31/2015
809. Magical Start 4/1/2015
810. सब का सुख sabka sukh 4/2/2015
811. Always True 4/2/2015
812. Entire Life 4/3/2015
813. Good Sign Or Omen 4/3/2015
814. Bad Luck 4/4/2015
815. Everybody Has To 4/4/2015
816. Crimson Read 4/4/2015
817. Gentle Blow 4/4/2015
818. Nature Shall 4/4/2015
819. People Together 4/5/2015
820. With Full Care 4/5/2015
821. Skill And Power 4/5/2015
822. Against Wishes 4/6/2015
823. Mogaji 4/6/2015
824. In Mud 4/7/2015
825. Bata De... Bata De 4/7/2015
826. Only Mind 4/7/2015
827. Simple Logic 4/7/2015
828. Finest Hour 4/8/2015
829. Truth Must Be 4/8/2015
830. Rich Harvest 4/8/2015
831. Old Memory 4/9/2015
832. With Family 4/10/2015
833. The Death Trap 4/10/2015
834. Alteration 4/11/2015
835. Original Smile 4/11/2015
836. Under Fear 4/11/2015
837. Union Shall Fade 4/16/2015
838. Only One Single 4/16/2015
839. Controller 4/19/2015
840. Best Option 4/19/2015

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2015 3:03:00 AM)

    Ligaw Makata Well-said
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2015 2:58:00 AM)

    welcome jairam tiwari, aumya, ramesh rai, kanya puck, alef mica
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2015 8:25:00 PM)

    John Follett You use words makes me feel the spirit movement.In a organised way.a reality of life zest.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2015 7:02:00 PM)

    Little belief

    Juha Huovilainen (Sweden ;)
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    6/28/2015 12: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Re: Re: Re: Re: Little Belief
    I have seen the very impressive collection of your poems and quality has absolutely not been compensated by quantity. Reading your poems is a really inspiring excercise and from a songwriter point of view, you most often have a beatiful rhytm in your sentences making it easy to apply them to various melodies.
    Looking forward to be able to send you some ready or at least half-done matewrial based on your poems.


  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    In your absence....

    Susan Lacovara (6/27/2015 8: 31: 00 AM)
    Absence is hard for the soul to accept. Thus, we keep looking for familiar faces, even if circumstance erases them from our daily life. Resonating piece of poetry. PEACE (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2015 7:40:00 PM)

    Midern poetry

    Date & Time: 6/21/2015 6: 50: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 18063236 - Modern Poetry

    Member: Kpekot Egweteng
    Comment: You have said it all. Poetry now does not define our moment.I agree our poetic soul has died long back. But we can still exhume it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    It is cool...

    you're always consistent with your work good job definitely a veteran writer
    6 hours ago by Adam Sandler is God to It is cool

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    With the reason

    All truth herein woven with such skilfull pen. I admire your choice of words, so wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this deep poetry, and thank you for the lessons I have learned here, Hasmukh Sir.
    5 hours ago by Sylvia Frances Chan to With the reason

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###


Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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