Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

801. A Peace Offer 6/18/2010
802. A Tear Not To Fall 6/18/2010
803. A Juvenile Home 6/20/2010
804. A Test With One Eye 6/20/2010
805. A Uniform Approach 6/21/2010
806. An Urge To Know 6/23/2010
807. An Ambition Not To 6/25/2010
808. Act As Defender 6/26/2010
809. A Fine Start 7/1/2010
810. An End For Creatures 7/3/2010
811. Accommodate Many Gods 7/8/2010
812. A Slip To Sleep 7/8/2010
813. A Real Term 7/9/2010
814. A Primitive Desire 7/12/2010
815. A Meeting Of Two Souls 7/14/2010
816. All About Fate 7/14/2010
817. A Time Pass 7/15/2010
818. A Soldier Is Never..... 7/16/2010
819. As My First Choice 7/16/2010
820. A No To Rubbing 7/19/2010
821. Am Really Sunk 7/19/2010
822. A Thought Itself A Fear 7/18/2010
823. A Love Not Real 7/19/2010
824. And To Enter 7/21/2010
825. A Long Wait 7/21/2010
826. Am Lazy 7/21/2010
827. A Long Time 7/26/2010
828. A Time Out 7/29/2010
829. A Good Gesture 7/29/2010
830. A Total Discard 7/31/2010
831. A Reason To Part With 7/31/2010
832. A Wish To Remain 7/30/2010
833. A Firm N Focus 7/30/2010
834. A Short Of Sight 8/1/2010
835. At His Mercy 8/1/2010
836. An Useful Thought 8/1/2010
837. And More To Yield 8/1/2010
838. A No To Desire 8/2/2010
839. Available Free 8/2/2010
840. A Cuckoo To Resurface 8/2/2010

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 4:46:00 AM)

    agdish Sahai Sharma · Friends with Shalini Samuel
    Dear brother Hasmukhmehta
    Glad to know.that
    u r a good poet.
    I find humour in ur poem.
    Loving.
    Thanks.
    Best wishes.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2015 10:49:00 PM)

    The success tale


    Date & Time: 10/10/2015 9: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 43419241 - The Success Tale
    Member: Luis Estable
    Comment: This reads more like a prose poem though I do not like to use the term for I am of the opinion that a poem is a poem or it is not. I like here the story that your tell even though it is not told in a very poetic way.


    I urge you to force yourself to go a bit more into the poetic way and try not to sound too much like prose, but in all fairness, I had fun reading this try.. Keep it up! You showed me that you have the ability to tell a story.

    Luis Estable

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2015 3:02:00 AM)

    The world and people

    A passionate verse, most thoughtful! Dorothy APWLTS
    8 hours ago by Dorothy A. Holmes to The world and people

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/2/2015 11:59:00 AM)

    Verily, pain, endurance and morality source a poet for his poetry........10

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2015 8:24:00 PM)

    Lovely tribute to Mother!

    When it comes to mother all become a poet. So much said and unsaid things all carry inside.

    Mom you are ‘Wow’

    But always ‘How’?



    Maaya Dev, Hyderabad
    30 Sep,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2015 8:23:00 PM)

    Lovely tribute to Mother!

    When it comes to mother all become a poet. So much said and unsaid things all carry inside.

    Mom you are ‘Wow’

    But always ‘How’?



    Maaya Dev, Hyderabad
    30 Sep,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2015 7:58:00 AM)

    Nice Tribute Hasmukh Ji. Even Modi got emotional and paid a glorious tribute to his mother during the town hall meeting a few days back in California. Tribute and dedications to all mothers, everywhere!

    ................Prabhu Bharathan, USA
    9/29/2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 8:33:00 AM)

    Worst sufferer

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    Satyananda Sarangi Agree sir! !
    Not a word, and a mention so rare,
    with his quest, he keeps on,
    and not a day, not a night with care,
    suffering as the destiny's son.

    Years elapse, and generations pass,
    his thought recovered from a torn diary page,
    to garner accolades, he is no more,
    having gripped by death before an age...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2015 8:01:00 PM)

    Self indecision

    Absolutely agreeable verse with great flow to the rhymes. Nice poem.
    15 Sep by Keith Labonte to Self indecision

    Really great look on life! Its a great reminder that you're the only one who decides how you feel. Well done!
    15 Sep by Alyssa Henly to Self indecision

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2015 9:52:00 AM)

    Grace Singh, Nella Loagnod, Kanusing Solanki
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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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