Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 465,829 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

841. Heavenly Posting Here 6/3/2017
842. With No Question Here 6/3/2017
843. It Is Absurd 6/4/2017
844. In Universal Brotherhood 6/5/2017
845. Proud Feeling For 6/5/2017
846. Insult Felt 6/5/2017
847. Core And Basic 6/4/2017
848. Luck Clicks 6/6/2017
849. Pray Rain God 6/6/2017
850. Keep Checking 6/6/2017
851. મને સતાવવા Mane 6/7/2017
852. It Is Her 6/8/2017
853. Your Bond 6/8/2017
854. Grip It 6/8/2017
855. प्यार का दुसरा नाम Pyaar 6/9/2017
856. નજર સામેજ તો છો Najar 6/9/2017
857. Painful Spots 6/9/2017
858. હાઈસ્કૂલ 6/9/2017
859. Same Spirit 6/9/2017
860. Love Shall Reign 6/9/2017
861. Love Shall 6/10/2017
862. Makes Rich 6/10/2017
863. Very Useful 6/10/2017
864. कोटि कोटि प्रणाम 6/10/2017
865. इतना निम्न Itnaa 6/11/2017
866. સામનો Saamno 6/11/2017
867. Impose 6/11/2017
868. Powerful Person Here 6/11/2017
869. Women For Love 6/12/2017
870. Free From 6/12/2017
871. Peace And Study 6/12/2017
872. नजर के सामने 6/12/2017
873. Marriage Link 6/13/2017
874. Evening Break 6/13/2017
875. Smile Here 6/14/2017
876. मेरी दुल्हन Meri 6/14/2017
877. Physical Fitness 6/14/2017
878. Gor Safety 6/14/2017
879. Cruel Feet 6/16/2017
880. Lone With Confusion 6/17/2017

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2015 6:24:00 AM)

    Life is exciting...

    Unni Krishnan Atiyodi Birth days come and go/ How fruitfully we use our time is important/In that you have every reason to be satisfied/You spend time fruitfully/Your poems may be thousands in number!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 7:54:00 PM)

    Life is exciting...

    Pamela Moorehead I to like to rhyme it sounds good phoenetically and takes on the rhythm of music. Poetry is also about vibration for me as a writer, meter registers for me in rhyme or I choose not to rhyme. I personally have no favorite style of poetry when it comes to enjoying others. Happy Birthday MV Venkatraman, fluent Poet and smooth to my ear
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    God shall not

    Malik Zafar likes this.

    Malik Zafar Yes of course heaven is in the feet of mothers. He who make her happy will be granted best place in heaven. Love mums eaen heaven and alse get blessings of Allah
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2015 7:06:00 PM)

    In waste seldom

    This is a poem from a true soldier which is inspiring. Many thanks for this poetic gift to me.

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 16,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2015 6:05:00 PM)


    You think very fast! Indeed,
    The soul is taken away to frighten mankind
    As main key lies with creator or mastermind
    This is true. Even a saint like person like Tagore apprehends though not mortal death but death in people's mind after he passes away. He has no answer.

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 15,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2015 11:28:00 AM)

    Peaceful unification: =

    14 May 2015
    TO: Hashmukh-ji
    Your poetic reply again enthuses me. However, Vaishnavite cult had deep influence on Tagore in contemplation of which mundane Death is not the human goal to achieve peace, which following quote from your poetic reply implies ~
    Peaceful unification
    With life’s cessation
    It is really an inexplicable 'passion' of mankind, without isolating an individual, which the Vaishnavites wanted to raise to a lofty spiritual height. However, having a superficial idea about this medieval cult, I'll look wiser less I try to explain it.
    Rajat Das Gupta

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 14,2015

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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