Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

881. A Great Pulse 8/15/2010
882. A Carve Out 8/15/2010
883. A Solid Bond 8/16/2010
884. A Walk On Edge 8/16/2010
885. A Women's Cause 8/8/2010
886. A Certain Truth 8/8/2010
887. A Place Anywhere 8/13/2010
888. An Honest Decision 8/14/2010
889. A Love To Die 8/17/2010
890. An Eyes To See 8/17/2010
891. After Witch Hunt 8/18/2010
892. A Dubious Presentation 8/20/2010
893. A Homage To Martyrs 8/20/2010
894. And Literally Absent 8/20/2010
895. Alternative To Violence 8/20/2010
896. In Open Yard 8/20/2010
897. Always Nice 8/27/2010
898. A Typical End 8/27/2010
899. A Rigid Stand 8/28/2010
900. A Worth To Live 8/28/2010
901. Act First 8/28/2010
902. A Usual Practice 8/28/2010
903. A Nice Way 8/28/2010
904. Agree To A Point 8/28/2010
905. A Natural Outburst 8/28/2010
906. A Senior Year 8/29/2010
907. A Pure Imagination 8/29/2010
908. Any Magic There 8/29/2010
909. A Cut Throat 8/29/2010
910. Ability And Efforts 8/29/2010
911. A Teacher 8/29/2010
912. A Love Is Eternal 8/30/2010
913. An Eyes On Horizons 8/30/2010
914. A Clear Proof 8/30/2010
915. Assume With Surity 8/30/2010
916. A State Of Uncertainty 8/30/2010
917. A Thought Window 8/20/2010
918. A Difficult To Die 8/20/2010
919. A Slow Whisper 8/21/2010
920. An Outside Help 8/21/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    ........................Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)



    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)



    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2015 6:00:00 AM)

    O soldiers

    Ratnakar Mandlik (8/15/2015 2: 52: 00 AM)
    Oh dear soldiers
    The nation is on your shoulder

    You are one of rare breed
    No one can deny you your rights.
    Hats off. Your poem has reflected sentiments of every one.
    Ratnakar Mandlik (Report) Reply


    Gold Star - 4,546 PointsRamesh T A (8/15/2015 2: 46: 00 AM)
    The sacrifice of soldiers at the border to safeguard nation is greatest ever! (

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Perfct match

    What a beautiful way to start the narrative with your 'best whisper'. Enjoyed this lyrical poetry devoted to a delicate romantic affair. Thanks for sharing the poem. I would like to quote:
    My efforts proved success
    She gave nod for full access (Report)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2015 6:50:00 AM)

    With presence

    Wow man, this is awesome. I can definitely tell you know what you're doing with nearly 10,000 poems. It really shows. I might add a comma after the word Yes, but that's just me and i think you have a really impeccable piece here. That's the only thing that really stuck out as a possible fix, but it's not really needed if you like the exact juxtaposition of the stanzas and the poem itself.
    8 hours ago by Peter Hamilton | Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2015 12:33:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/11/2015 9: 22: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 17558708 - All Dreams Not Come True###(In 500)
    Member: Bharati Nayak
    Comment: Full of positive notions the poem is a great write inspiring to work with full dedicated effort, sticking to right path and not to be daunted by failures when it says-
    -Life does not end with setting of a day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/9/2015 7:39:00 PM)

    Steven Jacobson I would like to share poetry with yours and be friends.

    Eternal Fountain
    Making fool

    The time translates and transcribes
    its etching on the world. the
    world forever endeared to time
    but missing the mark of ever being
    in the moment. Nature continues
    to outshine the world in both
    effervescent and existential manor.
    whether spring, summer, fall or winter
    nature portrays both an intoxicating
    and intrinsic flavor and festive
    flowing of life. the bubbling and
    birth, a fountain, pure delight
    and perfect demeanor cascading,
    glowing and growing, extravaganza.
    the Spirit in rapture with spirit
    creating an abode, an eternal sanctuary
    filled with grace and glory.

    © 2015 Steven Jacobson
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    Hasmukh Mehta oh so beautiful
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2015 8:04:00 PM)

    Wonderful job, Hasmukh ji. The world of poesy needs you to write more. Keep going and enlighten all. Thank you very much.

    Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
    07 Aug,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2015 8:02:00 PM)

    From:
    Rajnish Manga (Faridabad India; Male; 64)
    To:
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    8/7/2015 12: 57: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    Namaskar Sir!
    I feel highly obliged by your wonderful words of appreciation in your unique poetic style. This is indeed an encouragement to me. Thank you very much.
    Regards

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    With full blossom

    Hannira Richerr likes this.

    Hannira Richerr Oh Flower my flower... when u grow on the rever... that makes me warmer.. nd i cant believed, that u r charmer... oh Lover my Lover.. u come nd go, to be closer.... i cant believed that u a here... makes me feel life, together... thanx Hasmukh Mehta.. i love ur poem.. nd u r a great poemer smile emoticon heart emoticon
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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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