Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

961. Am With You 9/12/2010
962. A Human Mind 9/12/2010
963. An Art Of Living 9/11/2010
964. A Shine Like Light 9/12/2010
965. A Word Imagery 9/13/2010
966. A Sincere Gratitude 9/14/2010
967. At Past Incidence 9/14/2010
968. A Live Pulse 9/14/2010
969. A Wish To Stay 9/14/2010
970. A Moon And Shadow 9/15/2010
971. A Quite True 9/15/2010
972. A Good Or Bad 9/15/2010
973. Accept As It Is 9/20/2010
974. A Game Plan 9/21/2010
975. A No Exception 9/21/2010
976. A Lovely Expression 9/21/2010
977. As I Cry 9/22/2010
978. An Olive Branch 9/22/2010
979. A Love By Default 9/22/2010
980. An Answer You Have 9/22/2010
981. A Success And Failure 9/22/2010
982. I Am Lost 9/23/2010
983. The Original Plan 9/23/2010
984. A Fair Chance 9/23/2010
985. Remember What We Are 9/23/2010
986. A Light Of The Day 9/23/2010
987. A Love Of The Day 9/23/2010
988. I Cease To 9/23/2010
989. A Gentle Sob 9/16/2010
990. A Music In All 9/16/2010
991. A Matter In Question 9/17/2010
992. A Matter In Quesion 9/17/2010
993. A Young Nation 9/17/2010
994. A Fall And Shame 9/17/2010
995. A Wish To Remain And Last 9/17/2010
996. A Free Hand 9/18/2010
997. An Act Of Devil 9/19/2010
998. A Yesteryears 9/19/2010
999. A Good Choice 9/19/2010
1000. An Anxiety Is Seen 9/19/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2015 8:25:00 PM)

    John Follett You use words makes me feel the spirit movement.In a organised way.a reality of life zest.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2015 7:02:00 PM)

    Little belief


    From:
    Juha Huovilainen (Sweden ;)
    To:
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    6/28/2015 12: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    Re: Re: Re: Re: Little Belief
    I have seen the very impressive collection of your poems and quality has absolutely not been compensated by quantity. Reading your poems is a really inspiring excercise and from a songwriter point of view, you most often have a beatiful rhytm in your sentences making it easy to apply them to various melodies.
    Looking forward to be able to send you some ready or at least half-done matewrial based on your poems.

    Juha

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    In your absence....

    Susan Lacovara (6/27/2015 8: 31: 00 AM)
    Absence is hard for the soul to accept. Thus, we keep looking for familiar faces, even if circumstance erases them from our daily life. Resonating piece of poetry. PEACE (Report)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2015 7:40:00 PM)

    Midern poetry



    Date & Time: 6/21/2015 6: 50: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 18063236 - Modern Poetry

    Member: Kpekot Egweteng
    Comment: You have said it all. Poetry now does not define our moment.I agree our poetic soul has died long back. But we can still exhume it.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    It is cool...

    you're always consistent with your work good job definitely a veteran writer
    6 hours ago by Adam Sandler is God to It is cool

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    With the reason

    All truth herein woven with such skilfull pen. I admire your choice of words, so wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this deep poetry, and thank you for the lessons I have learned here, Hasmukh Sir.
    5 hours ago by Sylvia Frances Chan to With the reason

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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