Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,117 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1081. A Mental Satisfaction 10/27/2010
1082. At The Time Of Disaster 10/27/2010
1083. A Human Brain 10/28/2010
1084. All So Beautiful 10/28/2010
1085. Can'T Be Left Alone 10/28/2010
1086. At What Cost? 10/28/2010
1087. A Deliberate Deception 10/28/2010
1088. Asking With Smile 10/29/2010
1089. A Deep Love 10/29/2010
1090. An Imaginary Conclusion 10/30/2010
1091. A Sleep Is Must 10/30/2010
1092. A Response To Memory 10/30/2010
1093. A No Way 10/31/2010
1094. A Love For Flower 10/31/2010
1095. A Good Change 10/31/2010
1096. Am Very Happy 11/1/2010
1097. A Time To Adjust 11/2/2010
1098. All By Gone Memory 11/2/2010
1099. A Day Never Same Again 11/2/2010
1100. A Highs Stage Fever 11/2/2010
1101. A Synonymous With Corruption 11/2/2010
1102. A Clear Cheating 11/3/2010
1103. A Woman As Strength 11/3/2010
1104. A Poet Everywhere 11/3/2010
1105. A Festival Of Lights 11/3/2010
1106. A Someone To Come Near 11/4/2010
1107. A Life In Stages 11/4/2010
1108. A Unlucky Ton 11/5/2010
1109. A Love Has No Shape 11/5/2010
1110. A Need To Come Out 11/5/2010
1111. A No Price Tag 11/5/2010
1112. A Plan In Advance 11/6/2010
1113. As You Step In 11/7/2010
1114. A Death Not Menace 11/7/2010
1115. A Corner 10/26/2010
1116. A Wise Man 10/26/2010
1117. An Obsession 10/27/2010
1118. A Deer At Heart 10/27/2010
1119. A Very True 11/7/2010
1120. As The Days Pass By 11/7/2010

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2015 6:42:00 AM)

    ........My heartiest congratulations to poets Shigufta Hena Uzma, Avril-Shernaz, Maria Zafar and Purabi Bhattacharya. All four of you are amongst my favourite poets. And a very special congratulations to Hasmukh Mehta Sir for the well-deserved honour.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad
    Apr 11,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2015 8:52:00 AM)

    .......Hasmukhji, accolades thus pour in your way as you relentlessly make everyone feel good. Congratulations!



    Purabi, Gandhinagar
    Apr 10,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2015 1:48:00 AM)

    I am excited to note that all the girls are the winners; that has to be, for they represent poetry. Having said that, I wish to congratulate Maria, Shigufta, Shernaz-Avril and Purabi along with the ever agile Hasmukh ji.


    Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad
    Apr 10,2015


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    Unbelievable. I am thankful to all those who appreciated my effort



    Critic’s award



    I was blinking

    And thinking

    What was this all about?

    The critics award for Mr. Right



    It is always good to comment

    In earnest and present

    What is good in the poem?

    And the relevant message with theme



    Whole of the world is on volcano

    We have no place to go

    Those who are under shed

    Can think of only dead



    We have lots of concern

    But some of the comments turn

    Hostile to some sections

    We can understand the reaction



    The harmony and peace is must

    Above all, the backup should be added with trust

    I go for simple message

    World has come off its age





    hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad
    Apr 9,2015


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    I would like to express my sincere thanks to the editors. I am extremely honored. Many congratulations to all the other winners. Regards.



    Maria Zafar, New Delhi
    Apr 09,2015


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    Congratulations to all the winners! Special congratulations to Hasmukh Sir!


    Supratik Sen, Chennai
    Apr 09,2015


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    Thank you so much to the jury and I am really overwhelmed. With regards,


    Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela
    Apr 09,2015


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    Congratulations to all those whose poems have been selected by the editors. There have been many good postings during the month and we hope the revival of the monthly selection of best poems will motivate everyone in the forum.

    Hasmukh Mehta ji becomes the first person to get the critique's award. He is one person who has been responding to postings of almost all other members, in his unique poetic style, for a very long time indeed. In fact he has converted responses to creative work. All members should take his advice of responding to work of others seriously.



    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Apr 8,2015


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:24:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta ji becomes the first person to get the critique's award. He is one person who has been responding to postings of almost all other members, in his unique poetic style, for a very long time indeed. In fact he has converted responses to creative work. All members should take his advice of responding to work of others seriously.



    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Apr 8,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:23:00 AM)

    Congratulations to all the winners! Special congratulations to Hasmukh Sir!


    Supratik Sen, Chennai
    Apr 09,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:11:00 AM)

    Critic'sa award.....

    For the Critique’s Award for the month we have chosen Hasmukh Mehta who has been unstinting in his appreciation and support of other’s postings.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2015 10:42:00 PM)

    Till the last end

    Naidz Ladia Hasmukh Mehta..thanks oldy oldy for this poem...

    you are a true friend too
    a teaser sometimes
    the man of many poems
    Hasmukh Mehta is the name...

    i wish u long life to live
    so u can write more poems in our page
    goodluck to every journey of poetic life
    be strong be healthy...GOD bless us all...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2015 8:33:00 AM)

    Small try...

    Anushka Ramchuran Your words carry weight and an awareness....I like that. Thank you again. It is an honourable thing to honour a woman. Let a woman respect the man who is unselfish in this expression..13 mins · Like · 1

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2015 7:23:00 AM)

    In her praise....

    Anushka Ramchuran Thank you dear Hasmukh Mehta I am deeply honoured and humbled by this kindness. To all who liked and commented my sincere thanks and appreciation. Your words are beautiful Hasmukh ji, I hope I live up to each expression. Much love...anushka.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/7/2015 7:34:00 PM)

    Geetha Jayakumar (4/7/2015 11: 37: 00 AM)
    A Fantastic write on women. Very true said in few lines....

    Woman is embodiment of courage
    And she ably manages
    Her future lays in self confidence
    A rare quality with assertive stance

    Loved reading each lines. Beautiful presentation. (Report)

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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