Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,117 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1161. A Not Very Far 11/22/2010
1162. A Trusted Friends 11/24/2010
1163. An Apology 11/24/2010
1164. A Day Ends 11/25/2010
1165. A Praise Around 11/25/2010
1166. A Praise To Go Around 11/25/2010
1167. A Long Inning 11/25/2010
1168. It Is Enough 11/26/2010
1169. At Every Stage 11/23/2010
1170. A Weak Love 11/23/2010
1171. A Massage Of Love 11/28/2010
1172. O, Soldier Sons 11/28/2010
1173. A Direct Talk 11/29/2010
1174. Moni, You Are Dear 11/29/2010
1175. Ask For Self And Justify 11/29/2010
1176. A Little Thought 11/30/2010
1177. Live With Harmony 11/30/2010
1178. No More Grief 11/30/2010
1179. My Choice 12/1/2010
1180. A Dubious Life 12/1/2010
1181. A Selfish Nature 11/27/2010
1182. A Real Deep Love 11/27/2010
1183. I May Miss Her 12/2/2010
1184. A Hidden Treasure 12/2/2010
1185. As An Artist 12/3/2010
1186. A Mental Injury 12/3/2010
1187. A Hostile Environment 12/3/2010
1188. Only One Reason 12/3/2010
1189. All Roses 12/5/2010
1190. Just Keep Them Guessing 12/6/2010
1191. A Moral Crisis 12/6/2010
1192. Bring Down Adversary 12/7/2010
1193. A Full Attention 12/7/2010
1194. An Imprint In Mind 12/7/2010
1195. A Primary Knowledge 12/7/2010
1196. Move Confidently 12/8/2010
1197. Try To Come Over 12/8/2010
1198. Woman Only 12/8/2010
1199. A Silence Is An Answer 12/8/2010
1200. Wish, He Had 12/8/2010

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/15/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    Excellent sir. You have nicely said the importance of past history particularly when it is glorious. And the need for revival. The last para is fitting.
    14 Mar by senthil nathan | Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/15/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    Excellent sir. You have nicely said the importance of past history particularly when it is glorious. And the need for revival. The last para is fitting.
    14 Mar by senthil nathan | Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/13/2015 4:07:00 AM)

    Follower, , , , , ,7 February,2015



    Respected Mr. Mehta,



    Now-a-days I've again started browsing MI after a hiatus as I'm feeling somewhat better in spite of my severe neurotic disorder of which I'm a victim over last 6 years.



    However, I find your pen is as lively as before and besides being a regular contributor to MI yourself, you sit up to the contributions of many others and reply extempore in poetry! This is fascinating to me! Maybe, there is scope for brush up in your responses to others' contribution, but that is immaterial as it is only a question of time which you are denied while you are reacting to others' poetic inspirations. What matters to me is the substance in your extempore responses which should be rewarding, at least it is so in my case.



    Of Tagore, it is my conviction that he has shadowed all the poets on Earth of all time and in all languages, including English. Yet, poets of all ages are contributing their mite which has been illuminating to mankind, yours no exception.



    The joy and happiness lies here as beautiful gifts

    The pain and agony is staying side by side without shift

    As world has been made beautiful with fragrance from flowers

    I shall live on earth with single mission of follower



    At the fag end of my life, let this be my 'sustenance' while I'm counting my days.



    Yours sincerely,



    Rajat Das Gupta



    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Feb 08,2015


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2015 8:47:00 PM)

    Additional insight...Thank you Hasmukh Bhai.

    Many poets such as Tulasidas, Kabir and Kannada poet Purandharadas have highly spoken of critics.





    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Jan 28,2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2015 10:55:00 PM)

    Salute to you sir for your bold views.....I like your presentation skills...lucid and nice....1 hour ago by senthil nathan | Reply
    Christopher Woodhouse

    xIt think it is amazing how you present your insights in such a fluid way, while remaining in poetic verse.1 hour ago by Christopher Woodhouse | Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2015 5:02:00 AM)

    Utsav Kad (mumbai India; Male; 16)
    To:
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    1/10/2015 10: 25: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    New Here

    Good morning Sir,
    I am Utsav Kadmawala,15 years of age. I always love writing poems since a very early age cause they enable me to appropriately express my feelings for general topics and various specific ones too. Sir, i am new here, your poems are one of the few i have read and they are really beautiful!
    thanking you,
    Utsav kadmawala

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2015 10:03:00 PM)

    wow. such strong words. i cannot even mutter something smart. im just hit by the words...Personal life has no meaning when you become devotional Everything is given second preference without being emotional.. speechless...
    10 minutes ago by Srđan Kravić | Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/25/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    Rajnish Manga (12/25/2014 3: 10: 00 AM)
    आपके मन का आक्रोश समझ में आता है. यह हम लोगों का ओछापन ही तो है जो हमें अपने और पराये के वर्गीकरण की ओर ले जाता है. दुःख में भी तेरा-मेरा करने वाले मानवता का अपमान करते हैं. बहुत प्रभावशाली कविता. (Report)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/25/2014 6:47:00 AM)

    Rajnish Manga (12/25/2014 3: 10: 00 AM)
    आपके मन का आक्रोश समझ में आता है. यह हम लोगों का ओछापन ही तो है जो हमें अपने और पराये के वर्गीकरण की ओर ले जाता है. दुःख में भी तेरा-मेरा करने वाले मानवता का अपमान करते हैं. बहुत प्रभावशाली कविता. (Report)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/24/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    With all

    Re: With all (Score: 1)
    by Michaelw1two on Wednesday, December 24,2014 (18: 49: 07)
    Aloha hasmukh...

    Well, you certainly are using your tools... this is a much clearer image of words... for these americants who peruse yours... I am pleased... and I can work with these words... within them... to find that man... who wrote them... Thank you for your efforts, you must sleep only shallowly for you are writing most every hour and posting all over the www... are you banking bucks or joining in to save the species human? I am curious... please answer US... and send a gps back too... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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    Re: With all (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Wednesday, December 24,2014 (21: 23: 18)
    I am simple man. expect nothing in return.

    I served Indian Air force for 18 years.Now i write for people and readers.

    it gives me enough of jjoy when write with open heart.

    I wish all f you you pick little and act if can

    i am following simple ideal in life since long

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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