Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 506,866 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1281. Good Start With 6/11/2015
1282. Shall Obey 6/11/2015
1283. People And World 6/12/2015
1284. At This End 6/12/2015
1285. Parade On Donkey 6/14/2015
1286. With So Much 6/14/2015
1287. Not Necessary At All 6/15/2015
1288. In His Possession 6/18/2015
1289. The Message Of Love 6/18/2015
1290. The Message Of Love And Peace 6/18/2015
1291. Man Is No Liabiliy 6/20/2015
1292. No Hate 6/22/2015
1293. On Maggie Food 6/24/2015
1294. Into Good Will 6/25/2015
1295. Reach Daily 6/26/2015
1296. Do Not Present 6/26/2015
1297. Harp, On 6/27/2015
1298. With Cheerfulness 6/28/2015
1299. Think For A While 7/1/2015
1300. Some Influence 7/3/2015
1301. Mass Annihilation 7/3/2015
1302. No Birds Around 7/3/2015
1303. When Things 7/3/2015
1304. The Menace 7/3/2015
1305. From The Race 7/3/2015
1306. Gross Confusion 7/3/2015
1307. Do We Need Democracy 7/3/2015
1308. In Sensible Manner 7/4/2015
1309. To The Scene 7/4/2015
1310. Really Wanted 7/4/2015
1311. With The Wind 7/5/2015
1312. If Politicians 7/7/2015
1313. My Head In 7/7/2015
1314. From Point Of 7/7/2015
1315. Two Into 7/7/2015
1316. Give Best In 7/7/2015
1317. Seek And Help 7/7/2015
1318. Many Things 7/7/2015
1319. Many Tnhsig Not Done 7/8/2015
1320. Against Misfortune 7/8/2015

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    I write...
    light


    Suzanne Hartman Johnson2 minutes ago
    I like it. Its light and fluffy.. check out some of mine...
    Comment +1
    Good to know


    Dumka Vincent6 minutes ago
    I feel your passion
    Comment +1
    A poem about writing, why people write and the enjoyment of writing, which as he describes is natural.

    Joshua FordLess than a minute ago
    ' I write' is a simple poem with a clear meaning, describing how natural poetry is to him, comparing to being a part of him as his body. There are five stanzas with four lines each and there is a near rhyming pattern of a, a, b, b, which gives the poem structure. At times i feel like he has forced words in to fit, or either chosen words merely on their accessibility to the poem, than the actual creative and moral effect. At times it loses interest and is hard to understand. The imagery is very good, using metaphors to get the message it across. The poem was good and the meaning was very clear. :)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:19:00 PM)

    Rise for all

    Rise for all- - - - -Wake up call- - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Reflect ignorance with nature's relation- - - - - -I feel this is conveniently adopted or accepted ignorance in the name of progress and sometimes ignored ignorance for the sake of development with nature's as well as human relation too- - - - - - -I fully subscribe to the views of the poet- - - - - -
    Very thought provoking and insightful piece of work- - - - - Great job done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:16:00 AM)

    Wisdom to be wise

    Re: Wisdom to be wise (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Wednesday, July 16,2014 (12: 24: 52)
    if only the world leaders would listen to your words and at least hear that last verse. too much hatred and fighting and death when all we want is peace.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Rise for all

    I am so in tune on how this poet states how people uses animals to fullfill many semblances on how man justifies how and what man has done to emminate how we are destructing the nature's wealth.

    Evelyn Carter4 minutes ago
    In total agreement how the poet feels how many different cultures feel about how loose existence as we all live life on earth.
    Comment +1
    I LIKE THE POEM


    jennifer daughtrey8 minutes ago
    IT WAS REALLY GOOD POEM

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    Come along
    Even if you are wrong

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 12:35:00 AM)

    Time to waste..

    like this alot

    Betty-Gwen WalkerLess than a minute ago
    i thought this was a great way to to describe everyday life. basically everything is time and role. not who we are but what we are. not who i am, but what ethnicity i might be, or religion. i like your perspective

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    It is difficult

    You're awesome!

    Kenneth HarrisonLess than a minute ago
    You're very talented and please never stop writing!
    Creatively, KEN
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/10/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Papa, pqapa

    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim What beautiful daugter you have Hasmukh Mehta Sahab? ? ? She has your eyes, face and an innocently young smile and face. May she always be safe, happy and prosperoud - ameen.
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    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim Would you remember me in your prayers too plz as I lost my dad nearly two years ago. I hope he still prays for me from his grave but if you also prayed, that would be a bonus. May your off-springs be the coolness of your eyes, the peace of your heart and good reputation that you enjoy forever and ever - ameen xx
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    Hasmukh Mehta Farhana i feel deeply moved, My eyes turn wet as and when i state, the daughters are real care taker, mover of pain and sooth sayer, it is our fourtune that we have daughter. I wish to pray for your dad in earnest, to my sincereity and best.. be loved by your late and rmemeber him. He may calling you often in dream
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    We dream
    Well written, interesting and truthful!


    Boe Parrish7 minutes ago
    I love the flow of the poem and the topic! I have reread the poem a couple of more times and thoroughly enjoyed it. You really have a talent Hasmukh

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    If God given us mouth and teeth to speak the truth, how will you know if the person is lying to?
    12 hours ago by Aira Betita to Worship the God

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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