Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1361. For Number Of Years 2/2/2011
1362. Help Me Out 2/2/2011
1363. Crisis Deepens 2/2/2011
1364. Against His Will 2/6/2011
1365. Displayed At Once 2/7/2011
1366. Far Beyond Horizon 2/8/2011
1367. Turn To His Fold 2/8/2011
1368. The Light To Go 2/8/2011
1369. The Inseparable Part 2/8/2011
1370. May Remain As Bye Gone 2/8/2011
1371. After Sun Shine 2/9/2011
1372. The Different Attitude 2/9/2011
1373. Totally Inactive 2/9/2011
1374. Nothing To Plead 2/9/2011
1375. Proof Or No Proof 2/9/2011
1376. Remain As Human 2/9/2011
1377. Your Own Style 2/10/2011
1378. In All Colors 2/7/2011
1379. Traitors Of Today 2/10/2011
1380. Lord Buddha Smiled 2/10/2011
1381. World May Survive 2/10/2011
1382. Who Are You 2/11/2011
1383. Difficult To Believe 2/12/2011
1384. Finally A Liberation 2/12/2011
1385. Being Very Dear 2/12/2011
1386. Hurtful Words 2/12/2011
1387. See The God In Child 2/13/2011
1388. Happy Valentine 2/13/2011
1389. Turning Barren 2/13/2011
1390. To Hold On 2/14/2011
1391. Most Effective Tools 2/15/2011
1392. All The Night 2/15/2011
1393. With Full Awareness 2/15/2011
1394. Unaware Of The Fact 2/16/2011
1395. Despair Surface 2/16/2011
1396. A Steel Wall 2/16/2011
1397. Real Lover 2/16/2011
1398. Well In Advance 2/16/2011
1399. With A Call 2/17/2011
1400. Avoid Annoyance 2/14/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    wise people

    Wise people- - - valuable asset of the society- -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Good poem- - -
    Good read- -

    Well done
    Comment +1
    Nice poem

    Duane Lynch10 hours ago
    It is good fortune and grace when a leader is placed amongst us, a wise man/woman with which to put out trust in but it is not luck... That person has been put there for a reason, and who are we to question that reason.

    Great write :)
    Comment +1
    this was plane wise itself


    Arsi Ibro10 hours ago
    i like it

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:08:00 PM)

    Wise people

    Perfect poem by seasoned poet


    Shantanu Chindhade10 hours ago
    Tells you a sort of philosophy of sophisticated society.Job well done,
    Shantanu chindhade
    Comment +1
    nice poem


    adam fox10 hours ago
    good work :)
    Comment +1
    I understand the neurotic thought


    Tom Kennedy10 hours ago
    Hidden one thinks

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    Common wealth games

    Insightful.

    darran hardwick1 minute ago
    My favorite lines are:

    Let flags of all countries rise high
    With glory and honor to our delight
    Sportsmen can create special space

    Sans color, creed and race

    Well Done.
    D. H.
    Comment +1
    great concept


    Crisanto Acenas3 minutes ago
    great mind behind piece

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Rosy flower

    Nice


    Matt Griffin3 minutes ago
    I like the use of charity and kindness is world so despair
    Comment +1
    Great use of description


    Jair Massiah2 minutes ago
    Lovely words used to describe this character Rosy. Is she human, goddess or flower? The poet paints it wonderfully and leaves it up to the interpretation of the reader. There are a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixed! ;)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:23:00 AM)

    make others...

    Good thought over poem- - - - - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav2 hours ago
    Well composed- - - - - -
    Good read
    Comment +1
    Such Beautiful Wisdom Hasmukh!

    Krystal Koru From Down Under2 hours ago
    Love your words of wisdom...to share the truth is wonderful....to share a poem
    is an honor....

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    It is garden

    The eclectic Mehta


    Richard Schwartz2 hours ago
    Interesting as always. The Mehta miracle vision.
    It is garden- God waters his plants.
    Ah...yes, I see and I believe too-
    The truth of this miracle is simply before us.
    Thank you my Lord for all your blessings and vision.
    I do see the rain.
    The song writer J.C. Fogerty wrote of this miracle
    and asked the question.. I want to know have you
    ever seen the rain? and he did exclaim furthet
    coming down in love again! . You just might want to have
    a listen Misseur Mehta. Happy listening! . You will enjoy...

    Peace!

    Comment +1

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Why to forget?

    John Ravenscroft8 hours ago
    Hasmukh, well done! !
    Comment +1
    great

    Melissa Carroll8 hours ago
    I love the flow. I am especially drawn to the lines, if we are in this beautiful world, nothing should be told, it has to be observed, if we feel it is deserved. For me that means that everything is beautiful, not just the things that society believes deserve to be called beautiful. I could be entirely off base here in meaning, but that's what reached out and grabbed me and what I took from it.
    Comment +1
    Everything happens for a reason and it should be embraced rather than fought

    Rebbecca Martin8 hours ago
    Insightful

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    I write...
    light


    Suzanne Hartman Johnson2 minutes ago
    I like it. Its light and fluffy.. check out some of mine...
    Comment +1
    Good to know


    Dumka Vincent6 minutes ago
    I feel your passion
    Comment +1
    A poem about writing, why people write and the enjoyment of writing, which as he describes is natural.

    Joshua FordLess than a minute ago
    ' I write' is a simple poem with a clear meaning, describing how natural poetry is to him, comparing to being a part of him as his body. There are five stanzas with four lines each and there is a near rhyming pattern of a, a, b, b, which gives the poem structure. At times i feel like he has forced words in to fit, or either chosen words merely on their accessibility to the poem, than the actual creative and moral effect. At times it loses interest and is hard to understand. The imagery is very good, using metaphors to get the message it across. The poem was good and the meaning was very clear. :)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:19:00 PM)

    Rise for all

    Rise for all- - - - -Wake up call- - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Reflect ignorance with nature's relation- - - - - -I feel this is conveniently adopted or accepted ignorance in the name of progress and sometimes ignored ignorance for the sake of development with nature's as well as human relation too- - - - - - -I fully subscribe to the views of the poet- - - - - -
    Very thought provoking and insightful piece of work- - - - - Great job done.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:16:00 AM)

    Wisdom to be wise

    Re: Wisdom to be wise (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Wednesday, July 16,2014 (12: 24: 52)
    if only the world leaders would listen to your words and at least hear that last verse. too much hatred and fighting and death when all we want is peace.

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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