Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 494,842 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1441. Sincere Prayers To God 9/10/2015
1442. Less Talked 9/10/2015
1443. All The Fronts 9/10/2015
1444. Humbly Relate 9/10/2015
1445. Haiku 9/11/2015
1446. Happiness Around 9/11/2015
1447. Tired Of 9/12/2015
1448. Death With Delight 9/12/2015
1449. Lovely Woman In Mind 9/12/2015
1450. Lovely Woman N Me 9/12/2015
1451. Self Awareness 9/13/2015
1452. With Such Negligence 9/13/2015
1453. Your Lovely Smile 9/13/2015
1454. Strengthen The Relation For 9/14/2015
1455. To Fears Only 9/15/2015
1456. Strong Resolution 9/15/2015
1457. Firmly Drive 9/18/2015
1458. Complete Sway 9/18/2015
1459. Search For 9/18/2015
1460. In Such Turmoil 9/20/2015
1461. It Never Patches 9/20/2015
1462. Everything To Finish 9/22/2015
1463. For Correction 9/23/2015
1464. With Relief 9/23/2015
1465. New Journey 9/24/2015
1466. No Explanation 9/24/2015
1467. Behind Teeth 9/24/2015
1468. Loyalists Or Friends 9/25/2015
1469. All Woman 9/25/2015
1470. Till The Cessation 9/26/2015
1471. Till It Arrives 9/26/2015
1472. Some More Deaths 9/26/2015
1473. Countdown 9/27/2015
1474. Cheers And Happiness 9/27/2015
1475. Problem At Present 9/27/2015
1476. No Concession 9/29/2015
1477. Weak Human Beings 9/29/2015
1478. With Nature Again 9/29/2015
1479. No Wisdom 9/29/2015
1480. No Wisdom In It 9/29/2015

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Premilah Ramnauth Hasmukh Mehta am no poet nor poetress..neither do I aspire to be one....am simple woman...I keep repeating it...u r a prized author....I salute you Sir

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Girl for you.....Deep

    Michal Cendrowski9 hours ago
    a pre-determined love?
    Comment +1

    Michael Sechrest9 hours ago
    Very lovely poem, and I feel that your accent seems to bleed into your writing which I find interesting it gives the writing a certain tone you dont see too often. The idea of finding that special someone from an early age is a good topic to write on and you clearly have done so from a unique perspective, so I rather like this poem.

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Richard Beevor (5/29/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comments, much appreciated and an honour from someone as you, I would like to be considered one of the top 500 poets, you stand in exalted company and well deserved too, I have read many of your poems and they are extremely high standard, please keep writing, its a pleasure to read your work.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:46:00 PM)

    You write......Feeling the Nature around

    Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago
    Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature......
    Comment +1
    Good but could be better

    Arsi Anon20 hours ago
    It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Let nobody......Thank you! I think that relationships between man and man or woman or woman are not as strong...the thing is if I am a woman, I already know what a woman is like so it is somewhat boring to keep on experiencing the same thing and if I make friends with a man it will be different and it tends to be more fun because I am learning how man are like. Beautiful write but I think woman and woman or man and man can get along fine, it is a matter of understanding that is all.
    9 hours ago by Munashe Mumbama | Reply

  • Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    I turn 67...

    Re: I turn sixty seven (Score: 1)
    by maryanns on Saturday, May 17,2014 (12: 12: 02)
    From another one maintaining in time I must applaud this lovely piece of thoughtful artwork - and wish you a very happy birthday, too!

    Love that last stanza; good for you! Smile

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Story of desertion....

    chills chills wow

    Joshua Bissot6 minutes ago
    i totally understand my mother has gone through that same loss and i feel so bad for her it deeply hurts her and by virtue hurts me: (thank you for sharing such a personal introspective poem it is really good

    i recently attempted suicide and was found basically found dead -
    here is my recollection of where i was. http: //www.poetry.com/poems/1257276-content-n-resolve-

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 20: 05)
    These are honest emotions well expressed. There is an old proverb:
    The best reply to ignorance is silence. Don't be discouraged. Keep
    up the good work.

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    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (08: 29: 38)
    Oh sir so nice of you. I am guest poet here. readers keep distance from me here. I still give best of me to them.. regards

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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