Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1481. What Can I Do 3/11/2011
1482. A Gift For Us 3/11/2011
1483. Hopeless Dreams 3/12/2011
1484. Hopeless Untrue Dreams 3/12/2011
1485. Turns Dry 3/12/2011
1486. More Than Award 3/12/2011
1487. Mercy On Mankind 3/12/2011
1488. Own Reflection 3/12/2011
1489. Desprately Want 3/12/2011
1490. Strength In Diversity 3/12/2011
1491. Bondage Here Too 3/13/2011
1492. Threw Me Out 3/13/2011
1493. More Than Important 3/14/2011
1494. Writing On Wall 3/14/2011
1495. You And Nobody Else 3/14/2011
1496. Love And Sex 3/14/2011
1497. In Waiting 3/15/2011
1498. Play All Part 3/15/2011
1499. Inspiring Object 3/15/2011
1500. Pack Of Cards 3/16/2011
1501. Biggest Gain 3/16/2011
1502. Open Road 3/16/2011
1503. An Open Road 3/16/2011
1504. To Rise Again 3/16/2011
1505. Pain Behind 3/16/2011
1506. Anchor Safely 3/16/2011
1507. Happiness And Joy 3/16/2011
1508. Lord Is Kind 3/17/2011
1509. Shock Treatment 3/17/2011
1510. From Thousand Of Miles 3/17/2011
1511. Not Forgotten 3/17/2011
1512. Doom For Relation 3/18/2011
1513. Tsunami And After 3/18/2011
1514. Distinct From Others 3/18/2011
1515. Shy And Shame 3/18/2011
1516. It Will Tell 3/19/2011
1517. I Am Blind 3/5/2011
1518. Miles Away 3/5/2011
1519. Live Without Him 3/5/2011
1520. Ordinary Man 3/6/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    I feel best

    Sir (Hasmukh Mehta) , I personally thank you for this enlightening poem and your stanza of the poem “You have heart and soul—To respond with inner call—Try to listen and carefully think—It may always uplift and not sink” brings a realization in us. Respected!




    Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling
    Jun 29,2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    The faith is not.....
    Oh brave wanderer...

    Sidanne Solomon4 hours ago
    ...I am reminded of a quote: Do not follow the path of others, but instead blaze your own trail and leave sparks in your wake. Go fort, brave soul, and lead the life you have infinitely imagined!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 7:37:00 PM)

    God is staying....

    I love it

    Kamran Minder19 minutes ago
    amazing
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    fabulous

    Lilly Emery 3 minutes ago
    Very good writing
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    I appreciate your outlook.


    Kendon Hoover18 minutes ago
    I like this poem. It's very positive and I highly appreciate your outlook on how people should live their lives. I don't necessarily believe in God, but I will tip my hat to you sir. You have my respect.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Vision to find.....
    Top class visionary.


    John Ravenscroft13 minutes ago
    Spiritual, most deep and forever honest, intuitive.
    Comment +1
    beautiful


    Constance Kabereck23 minutes ago
    your word were vividley expressed i liked it
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    nice


    Qoutes Homemade25 minutes ago
    nice

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 11:00:00 PM)

    With response.....

    without clouds and showers

    KR BALAKRISHNAN6 minutes ago
    This is clear, my poet.
    Comment +1
    ok, good

    BOSS LADY6 minutes ago
    now what''s the title?
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    Extremely trying, but the gift is there.


    Shane Minor1 minute ago
    I have no doubt that you don't lack the proper capability of becoming a great poet, I absolutely believe that your messages are extremely poetic, while your poetry itself needs some work... Instead of looking for rhythmic terms, instead deliver something that is as true inside as it is written on the out..... be completely honest- because its harder to lie, therefore it takes an extremely creative person to come up with material that doesn't speak truth... but that kind of poetry is better left in fictitious novels rather than expressed through poetry.
    ..

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    For his own
    The flow is amazing!


    Chelsie Davis4 minutes ago
    I love how you can make it flow! Its amazing, I really do enjoy this poem, thank you!
    ...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    Mirror may speak....Great words


    Anup Dutta14 hours ago
    Loved the thoughts
    Comment +1
    A Shakespearean eminem


    Karina Paxinos14 hours ago
    You conveyed a story with great emotion,
    The magic of failure is that we recognize it only because we have once (many times before succeeded)
    I love this!
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    good

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Prefer corner...
    And prefer corner to be absent

    rasheeda kearney6 minutes ago
    Great work
    Comment +1
    corner to be


    sEan NoRtH6 minutes ago
    absent
    Comment +1
    I like it


    kashish chawla6 minutes ago
    gud job.deep thoughts
    Comment +1
    fine-craft of words


    George Charisma5 minutes ago
    okay

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Full of compassion

    good

    KR BALAKRISHNAN20 minutes ago
    For the up and down musical resonance of this poem, no separate background music from the poet is required. The readers can very well enjoy the innate music in it.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Holy concept....

    Savita Tyagi (6/12/2014 10: 46: 00 PM)
    I feel very much part......and start with daily routine to keep holy concept of divine. Beautiful lines and the only way to keep peace of mind in face of all the pain and suffering going around. Thank you so much. (Report)

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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