Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 482,234 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1481. Charisma All Over Again 10/17/2015
1482. Vast Infuence 10/18/2015
1483. The Nobel And Name 10/18/2015
1484. Loveand Pain 10/18/2015
1485. Lead Cheerfully 10/20/2015
1486. Promises To Fulfill 10/21/2015
1487. Love And Pain 10/21/2015
1488. It Kills All The Way 10/22/2015
1489. It Kills 10/22/2015
1490. Daily New 10/22/2015
1491. Her Attitude 11/4/2015
1492. Power Arrogance 11/4/2015
1493. Propaganda Materials 11/4/2015
1494. Propaganda Starts 11/5/2015
1495. If Ever Me 11/6/2015
1496. Offer Prayers To 11/8/2015
1497. We Shall Weep 11/8/2015
1498. The Grapes Are 11/8/2015
1499. Responsive Act 11/8/2015
1500. Real Responsive Act 11/8/2015
1501. Into Fashion 11/9/2015
1502. Who Is 11/9/2015
1503. Peep In Their Eyes 11/11/2015
1504. My Approach.................... 11/13/2015
1505. Find Out Fact 11/15/2015
1506. Find Out Fact Today 11/15/2015
1507. No Solution In Sight 11/15/2015
1508. Same Kind Words 11/19/2015
1509. His Momens 11/19/2015
1510. With Incidence 11/19/2015
1511. Passage And Cover 11/22/2015
1512. Keep No Fear From Us 11/22/2015
1513. Out Of Race With Tick 11/22/2015
1514. New Journey On 11/22/2015
1515. Failed To Utter 11/23/2015
1516. No Easy Way Out 11/24/2015
1517. At Such Age 11/24/2015
1518. Seek Justice 11/25/2015
1519. Known Force 11/25/2015
1520. Spare Us Knowingly 11/25/2015

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Simple exercise....


    x lone shoe in a dryer Daniel GarnreiterLess than a minute ago I tumble through this poem as the I feel the thoughts do in your mind. They jar against the sides of the machine banging away with such noise. Waiting and waiting for the cycle to finish. In that time we are left to wait we can be of use in so many ways and with those ways a thousand actions to do more to show who and what we are to improve ourselves so that the presence we offer is the best we can. True though, sometimes it's just time to wait. To watch the tumult inside but being there offers possibilities as well. for should the door be hit and come loose we are there to catch what falls out and to assist as we couldn't if we'd gone away
    today

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    By behavior....

    Lovely work

    Olwen Cuttita9 hours ago
    Well done. Many take amiss of what really matters and focus on only the little things that don't really compare or stand up to other matters. This is said and written very well.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    Spare them....


    Powerful poem Helvi Salminen1 day ago about an important topic
    today

    Broken Lullabies 7 hours ago Very true and something everyone should read! Very nicely said.
    today

    You express the situation well. Tracy Bollinger7 hours ago Your moral stature and compassion bleeds through the words!

    great Joshua Bissot7 hours ago very nicely done my friend
    today

  • Prof.satyavrat Gaur (5/13/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Hamari parchhaiyan a contrast to Shahir Ludhyanvi 's Tasuruvaat ki parchhaiyan. There is flow there is concern and depth of ideas.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    Your choice....

    Thoughtful

    Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago
    Good flow
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    Shakespearan recital


    norbert3 minutes ago
    I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences.

    It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions
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    Nicely written


    Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago
    I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

  • Richard Beevor (5/3/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    excellent work and high achievement

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Talk poetry.....

    I like it

    David Cook1 minute ago
    This is a nice profound teacher. I like his logic. I like the way he explains what poetry is all about. Poetry is the most beautiful gift to mankind and a poet can come from the poorest of the poorest. Could be the most happiest happiest person on the face of the earth. Poetry is like a bible
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Never fades away....

    Anand Brown(4/30/2014 1: 33: 00 AM)
    Excellent poem, absorbing and engaging. It bears testament to the enduring quality of love and does so with poetic zest and class. Take a bow

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Compassionate mother.....

    A lovely poem on mother. Being a mother myself, can very well relate to this poem. Thanks Hasmukhji.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india
    Apr 28,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    For protection....

    i am in love with your words of wisdom! !


    Michelle24 minutes ago
    you are truly wonderful with your energy of words and a meaningful message behind it
    Comment +1

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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