Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 464,305 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1561. In Such Cases 3/2/2016
1562. Opemly State 3/2/2016
1563. Short Span 3/3/2016
1564. Courage.. Success Story 3/3/2016
1565. Masses Along Wih 3/3/2016
1566. Courage... Success Story 3/3/2016
1567. तीर बस छोड़ते रहे Tir Chhodte Rahe 3/4/2016
1568. સઘળું સ્વીકાર્ય Saglu Swikraya 3/5/2016
1569. Let Us Be One 3/5/2016
1570. Nice Occasion 3/5/2016
1571. Cry And Cry Loudly 3/7/2016
1572. No Artificial Art 3/7/2016
1573. Any Expectation 3/8/2016
1574. I Shall Seek 3/7/2016
1575. Repeat Resolve 3/8/2016
1576. Aim To Malign 3/8/2016
1577. With Riots 3/9/2016
1578. Work For Aim 3/9/2016
1579. Path Of Wisdom 3/9/2016
1580. No Relief 3/9/2016
1581. Finish Very Fast 3/9/2016
1582. Anything Left For 3/10/2016
1583. Must Look Real 3/10/2016
1584. No Such War 3/10/2016
1585. Breed No More 3/10/2016
1586. We Can Avoid 3/10/2016
1587. Human Divine Relation 3/11/2016
1588. But Forests 3/11/2016
1589. Giant Tree 3/11/2016
1590. No Classes 3/11/2016
1591. Far And Away 3/11/2016
1592. Prayers Daily 3/11/2016
1593. Try To Remain 3/11/2016
1594. Can The Darkness 3/11/2016
1595. Divinity Show 3/11/2016
1596. થઇ જાય અસાર Thai Jaay 3/12/2016
1597. Feel Sorry For Her 3/12/2016
1598. Discredited Wall 3/12/2016
1599. बीच मुझे जीना है Bich Mujhe Jina 3/13/2016
1600. With Vigor And Deed 3/13/2016

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 10:52:00 PM)

    By words...
    Scott Ransopher It has key to ignition there is lot more compassion emanating from kind heart almost written in form an art words are molded like river water some times it flows slower sometimes with fury and totally in spate there are many more things to relate poetry can make you to cry it can make you to fly even with weak wings in sky it helps to boost morale with concentrated try words have immense thrust it can be coupled with trust it may cut through slice with determined bid of promises words do come from mind but it has inner core and shield heart pushes real ambition and desire words play nicely with shape to admire. Good lines. Good poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/25/2014 6:45:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno I could only repeat what Rohani Daud said
    'You're a great poet.. Never fade a passion and knowledge Mr Hasmukh
    - Manzil Rajput 'nice sir ji '

    ... Pls send me the English version :)))
    ... I believe them, You really are! ! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    face the bullet

    Much Appreciated

    Syed Mudasir37 minutes ago
    I respect both the individuals like Mahatma Gandhiji as well as Martin Luther; But there is no comparison in terms of Gandhi, he is an individual and a great personality. This poem had brilliant imagery which talks about the loss of the last century and there is no worst tragedy then Gandhiji's Assasination, he was a pillar of Asia... A great poem which is very honest and we all know great people are either disappeared or assasinated.... Much Appreciated
    Comment +1
    A clear point made

    Steven Curphey32 minutes ago
    Well the second political poem i have just reviewed on the bounce. This one maybe doesn't read as fluently as I have a preference for, however, if you are making a political point why not say it straight up like this one as we have plenty of politicians who don't say what we want them to and who hide behind masks in speaking terms, so well done for saying it like it is.
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    this real and has nothing to do with politics. people should fight for themselves now
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2014 5:27:00 PM)

    Poetry is no joke......Rick R
    Well put I am in awe that those with English as a second language can create very good English poems I have enough trouble with one language

    Well taken sir..words of wisdom from a great poet himself! Thank you for the guidelines!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2014 6:57:00 PM)

    just behave, , , , , ,

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai,

    I had a similar experience recently while giving a talk to young children. I stopped the noise by reciting a devotional song of Purandara Dasa. Its English vesion is the one given below:

    “Make no noise, make no noise

    I will fall at your feet, be wise

    Those who are asleep might wake up

    And with questions might come up.”

    Had your ‘Madame, ’ known Kannada she would have certainly made use of this song. I know not which ‘Madame’ you are referring to. I hope she is not Madame Bovary of Flaubert.

    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Jan 16,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    When I look.....en I Look At by Hansmukh Mehta is a nice poetic endeavour to present the universe as the poet sees it.

    Kesavan Subramanian8 minutes ago
    It is a good Nature poem. I like it.
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    Keek Ruiz21 minutes ago
    I enjoyed reading your perspective on how you see life.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:29:00 PM)

    I shall....transformation is a true change- righteousness is a free gift.. strive for excellence, do not condemn.

    Jo Anna Mike Simmons5 minutes ago
    Very good.... His light is always with you, if you mess up it is okay, He forgives. When you spend time with God and in His Word, you have a relationship with Him and it is easier to go through life. :)))))))))))))
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    C Castro7 minutes ago
    Very nice message.. Keep up the good work

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Heartless as human.....So wonderful

    krishna Middela11 minutes ago
    We express our views, though they understand, some are keen to observe the grammar.after english is not my mother tongue.neither they know my mother tongue to share.
    Let beauty of expression be appreciated.
    But your grammar is perfect.
    Comment +1

    Greg Obrecht12 minutes ago
    This. Is. Awesome.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:53:00 PM)

    Try to judge
    Wise words

    Abbey Gillespie8 minutes ago
    These words so wise and noble. They show passion and express that has been put into the poem. Beautiful and truthful peace

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    Masterly writing.Facts of life well composed

    Shantanu Chindhade7 hours ago
    Writing of high order.Philosophical but with real truth,
    Shantanu chindhade
    Comment +1
    Good stlye

    Asia Crockett7 hours ago
    Decent good thoughts

    To change without, first change within...

    Anthony V7 hours ago
    Only two problems; week should be weak and date should be a word which rhymes with guide. Otherwise, answering the question of morality; how does one go from an evil person to one of good character? Simply put: Remember deeds done and amend them.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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