Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,117 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1601. Dina 4/5/2011
1602. Dina, Real Flower 4/7/2011
1603. To Remain Close 4/7/2011
1604. Still The Rule 4/7/2011
1605. Pick The Pain 3/26/2011
1606. Love Is Thee Name 3/26/2011
1607. Calling For Sure 4/15/2011
1608. Ripples In Spine 4/15/2011
1609. Nice To Dream 4/15/2011
1610. Rise And Fall 4/15/2011
1611. Feel Intimate 4/15/2011
1612. Someone To Call 4/16/2011
1613. Knew It Well 4/16/2011
1614. From Human Vultures 4/17/2011
1615. Not Focused 4/17/2011
1616. Waters Dropp Down 4/17/2011
1617. Dark And White 4/17/2011
1618. Her Sweet Voice 4/17/2011
1619. You Know The Agony 4/17/2011
1620. Known To All 4/17/2011
1621. Bank On Same 4/18/2011
1622. Holy Movement 4/18/2011
1623. Some Uncharitable Remarks 4/19/2011
1624. Never Cry For Failure 4/20/2011
1625. New Poet 4/20/2011
1626. Intolerant Society 4/20/2011
1627. Let Storm Not Wither 4/20/2011
1628. Only Historians 4/20/2011
1629. A Pathetic Tale 4/20/2011
1630. For New Poet 4/20/2011
1631. Then And Even Now 4/21/2011
1632. Life Being An Obstacle 4/22/2011
1633. The Bond 4/22/2011
1634. Timing With Place 4/22/2011
1635. A Magnetic Pull 4/22/2011
1636. What Is She Looking At 4/24/2011
1637. With Small Words 4/24/2011
1638. Can'T Be Undone 4/24/2011
1639. Show Purpose 4/24/2011
1640. No Dearth 4/24/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    Spare them....


    Powerful poem Helvi Salminen1 day ago about an important topic
    today

    Broken Lullabies 7 hours ago Very true and something everyone should read! Very nicely said.
    today

    You express the situation well. Tracy Bollinger7 hours ago Your moral stature and compassion bleeds through the words!

    great Joshua Bissot7 hours ago very nicely done my friend
    today

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  • Prof.satyavrat Gaur (5/13/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Hamari parchhaiyan a contrast to Shahir Ludhyanvi 's Tasuruvaat ki parchhaiyan. There is flow there is concern and depth of ideas.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    Your choice....

    Thoughtful

    Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago
    Good flow
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    Shakespearan recital


    norbert3 minutes ago
    I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences.

    It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions
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    Nicely written


    Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago
    I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

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  • Richard Beevor (5/3/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    excellent work and high achievement

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Talk poetry.....

    I like it

    David Cook1 minute ago
    This is a nice profound teacher. I like his logic. I like the way he explains what poetry is all about. Poetry is the most beautiful gift to mankind and a poet can come from the poorest of the poorest. Could be the most happiest happiest person on the face of the earth. Poetry is like a bible
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Never fades away....

    Anand Brown(4/30/2014 1: 33: 00 AM)
    Excellent poem, absorbing and engaging. It bears testament to the enduring quality of love and does so with poetic zest and class. Take a bow

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Compassionate mother.....

    A lovely poem on mother. Being a mother myself, can very well relate to this poem. Thanks Hasmukhji.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india
    Apr 28,2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    For protection....

    i am in love with your words of wisdom! !


    Michelle24 minutes ago
    you are truly wonderful with your energy of words and a meaningful message behind it
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    Give chance...

    United from within

    Tracy Bollinger4 minutes ago
    Internal conflict from within as destructive power exceeding that of nature. Give the true nature of man a chance, instead of the few bent on power. This may happen if enough people believe it can.
    I love the message that only a poet can deliver.
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    Boosted.

    KR BALAKRISHNAN8 minutes ago
    Mehtajiii, I am glad that your poems are becoming brighter and brighter day by day. Reaching greater heights....
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    interestng


    Stephen Kister9 minutes ago
    good idea

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2014 9:51:00 PM)

    Cuckoo remind...

    I love the abstract feeling!

    Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago
    I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose.
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    Metaphor really stood as something else

    Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago
    Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways
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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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