Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 453,965 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

16761. देवालय में चढ़ाया जाता है DEVALAY ME 5/25/2014
16762. क्या इस तरह रोशन करना है? kya is tarah 4/9/2014
16763. 'उपहार अनमोल है 'uphaar anmol hai 4/2/2014
16764. 'बेअदबी मत करना' Beadbi Mar Karnaa 1/20/2014
16765. Flowers Offer Smile 1/11/2014
16766. The Shine Disappears 10/9/2013
16767. With Least Humanity 7/24/2014
16768. Not For Fun 8/29/2014
16769. Uske alava, , , , उसके अलावा 9/25/2013
16770. A Sixth Ton 4/30/2010
16771. Slight Doubt 11/9/2009
16772. Put To Harassment 1/2/2018
16773. No Equality -new- 2/20/2018
16774. Let Us Uphold 1/25/2017
16775. Clear Throat 1/28/2017
16776. અકૃતજ્ઞતા Akrut 2/28/2017
16777. The Beauty Of Temple 2/22/2017
16778. Hello Roopa 7/25/2017
16779. Nice Presence 4/8/2017
16780. Calm Melody 6/18/2016
16781. Change Is Natural 5/13/2016
16782. Integral Part 5/9/2016
16783. बाते करने वाले दिलफेंक ही है..Dilfenk Nahi 4/13/2016
16784. Caught Helplessly 11/8/2016
16785. What Would Happen 10/14/2016
16786. First Step And 9/27/2016
16787. Mubarak And Congratulation 7/5/2016
16788. For All Of Us 12/30/2015
16789. Foolish Comments 11/28/2015
16790. Love Shall Not 2/1/2016
16791. Love Is By Chance 1/30/2016
16792. Deep Mistrust 2/9/2010
16793. Do It Yourself 6/28/2013
16794. In Full Ire 6/25/2013
16795. बस अपना लो ना Bas Apna Lo Na 8/4/2014
16796. वचन का एहसास हुआ vachan ka ehsaas 11/24/2014
16797. My Cuckoo 1/13/2014
16798. More Heads May Roll 1/10/2014
16799. जनाजा ही निकाल दे... janajaa hi 4/3/2014
16800. छबि पूर्णतः धुंधली कर रहे है.. Chhavi 3/16/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Omar Ibrahim (7/12/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    a one of my favorite poets here at poemhunter.com...........actually, all indians at poemhunter.com are my favorite because they all rhyme! ! ! in fact, Hasmukh Amathalal is the best of them all......he is not less than pablo neruda or william blake...i am really honest....and if he worked on being famous he will certainly be a popular, famous poet......he can publish his poems in many sites...he can also publish them in any journal in india if this is possible......

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  • John Shea (6/27/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh...this poem is truly wonderful...you must have caught quite a beautiful butterfly.. one full of inspiration and fine for your family to see..I know that I will chase it too and share it with my family and tell them where it came from and release it for them to share..your friend John.

  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (6/24/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dear poet

    It is so hard to talk about you and about the poetry of yours too
    I really appreciate you for every thing you write and create too
    you are one of the greatest poet in our alive nation
    keep in doing on it dear
    well done and great job
    May God be with you
    luwi

  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.
    Vanita.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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