Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1681. Some Percent 6/21/2016
1682. Airborne In Hurry 6/21/2016
1683. Personality Cult 6/21/2016
1684. But Heart Alone 6/20/2016
1685. Beautiful Call 6/22/2016
1686. Really In 6/22/2016
1687. Set Free Once 6/22/2016
1688. Make Use 6/22/2016
1689. Death Chamber 6/23/2016
1690. With Full Of 6/23/2016
1691. Warm Greetings 6/23/2016
1692. Little Contrast 6/23/2016
1693. Just Different 6/23/2016
1694. Message And Theme 6/23/2016
1695. Attain Heaven 6/24/2016
1696. Crow And Human Beings 6/26/2016
1697. In Peaceful Manner 6/27/2016
1698. Support From People 6/27/2016
1699. Through Vision 6/27/2016
1700. Open Path 6/27/2016
1701. Hearty Appeal 6/27/2016
1702. Let Know 6/28/2016
1703. Live Relation 6/27/2016
1704. Like Television 6/28/2016
1705. Mere Revelation 6/29/2016
1706. Our Nature 6/29/2016
1707. Pain And Gain 6/29/2016
1708. Some Decisions 6/30/2016
1709. Deal With 6/30/2016
1710. Suitable Companion 6/30/2016
1711. Totally Transformed 6/30/2016
1712. With Fears 7/2/2016
1713. Love Stands 7/2/2016
1714. Make Difference 7/3/2016
1715. Glorious End 7/3/2016
1716. Remorse Tales 7/4/2016
1717. Will Of God 7/5/2016
1718. Carefully View 7/5/2016
1719. Common Cause 7/5/2016
1720. Fact As Such 7/5/2016

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/8/2013 4:29:00 PM)

    open up hands

    Debra Stanza Melody We owe many things for our brethren
    Who live with hardship and need something to be done
    They are not asking any favor
    Yet it is our privilege and honor to offer..... we have to take care of our own, and our own is all human life. I enjoyed your piece very much. Peace
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/1/2013 9:09:00 PM)


    A truly heart-felt spiritual eye-opener

    Luke Wilson15 minutes ago
    A truly heart-felt spiritual eye-opener.

    This is the kind of poetry we can use universally for true guiding inspiration.

    So brilliantly written, an instant favorite. An Ode to you, sir.
    Comment +1
    I like your style

    robert micon9 minutes ago
    You have found an interesting way of transcribing about the Festival of Lights. It works.
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    Professor Frost17 minutes ago
    This quite the poem. I appreciated the craft and structure of it.
    Thanks for sharing, keep writing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    In many places....


    Ecstacy Furubayashi19 minutes ago
    I apologize you are going through that. As they grow, they never really know why we did what we did is because we lovve them. From when they were a baby and always saying I love you, growing to teens and arguing. But you must not blame yourself. If we get hard on them its because it hurt us so much cause we want them to be better. But we can't shield them from everything. But we can talk to them and do our best to help them achieve goals.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:45:00 PM)

    little child

    I loved it!

    Kenji Z7 minutes ago
    Now I dont have any children of my own, but I have nieces and nephews. Watching them grow, you step in and correct the wrongs but in the end some mistakes have to be made in order to for them to grow and learn as their own. I dont mean to offend any parents, its just my take on it. Loved how your words painted a beautiful yet grim picture. Such is life.
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    Faith Redfield14 minutes ago
    This is really strong: 3
    Comment +1
    Great! !

    Dina Yakout16 minutes ago
    Thank you for sharing this great poem that resonates with kindness and humanity :)
    Comment +1
    Father's love for his child

    Ifeanyi Nnadi15 minutes ago
    Yes girl child pose little problem
    Comment +1
    Needs more work

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    Peace can conquer...

    Janay Griffin9 minutes ago
    This poem is amazing. I understood the eternal message the first few sentences.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Little child.....

    Salute to you

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha33 minutes ago
    Wow. As usual. You have expressed very great.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    Send off.....smart

    meagan w10 hours ago
    you can tell from the poem that you are an intelligent person

    i like the line tears of happiness role out as a play on the common phrase roll out it gives the line a double meaning

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Everyday I miss...

    I miss her yet I see her every day.

    Steven Avolio7 minutes ago
    This poem is filled with beauty and heart felt images. It is moving and moves with a good cadence. Well done and KUDOS...
    Comment +1
    Well written

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    My only child


    Danielle Erin2 minutes ago
    I love the use of the child here, and the way you alluded to faith, but never had to mention it to get your point across.

    My favourite line was, my feet were dancing.
    Comment 0
    good child

    Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi2 minutes ago
    well children are treasure and always child in the eyes of parents, well done poem

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    MY only child.....Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world

    Steven Gress1 minute ago
    Thank you for sharing your poem.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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