Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 439,473 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

17161. Love's Logical End 11/10/2009
17162. Entry 11/13/2009
17163. Smiley 6/26/2009
17164. Sharp Shooters 5/23/2009
17165. Rest In Peace 7/2/2009
17166. 400th Mark 1/4/2010
17167. I Look..... 5/28/2009
17168. Soul Feels 5/19/2009
17169. Tragic End 6/29/2009
17170. What Makes You To Think 5/2/2009
17171. I Don'T Think 7/4/2009
17172. Life Is Not Worth 5/27/2009
17173. Rain Has Come 7/9/2009
17174. When You Are Borne And Gone 8/1/2009
17175. Madame Tosad 6/9/2009
17176. Revenge 5/9/2009
17177. Thank You 6/24/2009
17178. Sun Ready To Set 5/26/2009
17179. Qualities To Lead 6/26/2009
17180. Sensitive Heart 5/25/2009
17181. Kind Ruler 5/17/2009
17182. Kicks In Return 6/7/2009
17183. Sound Sleep 6/28/2009
17184. I Raised My Fist 6/22/2009
17185. Individual 6/6/2009
17186. Death 11/15/2009
17187. Special Friend 6/10/2009
17188. Lord 7/14/2009
17189. Pain 5/26/2009
17190. When Frustration Takes Over 5/6/2009
17191. Music Band 7/28/2009
17192. Pledge 10/13/2009
17193. My Country Bleeds 4/12/2009
17194. I Feel Proud 6/28/2009
17195. No Separate Ways 6/19/2009
17196. Slippery Ground 7/10/2009
17197. Sky Is Falling 7/31/2009
17198. Look At Horizones 5/4/2009
17199. Nature's Call 5/17/2009
17200. I Was Zero 5/7/2009

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Omar Ibrahim (7/12/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    a one of my favorite poets here at poemhunter.com...........actually, all indians at poemhunter.com are my favorite because they all rhyme! ! ! in fact, Hasmukh Amathalal is the best of them all......he is not less than pablo neruda or william blake...i am really honest....and if he worked on being famous he will certainly be a popular, famous poet......he can publish his poems in many sites...he can also publish them in any journal in india if this is possible......

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  • John Shea (6/27/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh...this poem is truly wonderful...you must have caught quite a beautiful butterfly.. one full of inspiration and fine for your family to see..I know that I will chase it too and share it with my family and tell them where it came from and release it for them to share..your friend John.

  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (6/24/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dear poet

    It is so hard to talk about you and about the poetry of yours too
    I really appreciate you for every thing you write and create too
    you are one of the greatest poet in our alive nation
    keep in doing on it dear
    well done and great job
    May God be with you

  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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