Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 450,712 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

17361. Look At Horizones 5/4/2009
17362. Nature's Call 5/17/2009
17363. I Was Zero 5/7/2009
17364. Mournful Death Songs 5/16/2009
17365. My Friend In Mirror 6/12/2009
17366. Poetry-Question Answer Form 7/24/2009
17367. Never Say Die 4/13/2009
17368. Papa You Too....Part Ii 5/4/2009
17369. Moon Lost 5/29/2009
17370. Within Reach 5/11/2009
17371. Is Marriage A Forced......I 6/5/2009
17372. Machhu 8/5/2009
17373. Queen Without Crown 5/19/2009
17374. I Thank God 4/25/2009
17375. I Can'T Be Different 6/10/2009
17376. Sorrowful Ocean 5/23/2009
17377. It Should Concern You 8/16/2009
17378. Modern Poetry 6/23/2009
17379. On Naija Mission 5/1/2009
17380. Salute 6/2/2009
17381. Nature, We Neglect 4/18/2009
17382. Old Memory Lane 6/10/2009
17383. Join 5/27/2009
17384. Stupidity 5/31/2009
17385. No To Sorrow 10/9/2009
17386. Molestation Bid 5/11/2009
17387. Mood 8/21/2009
17388. Hooch Tragedy 7/11/2009
17389. What Enthralls You....... 8/21/2009
17390. Rain Delay 6/28/2009
17391. Hang Them 6/22/2009
17392. Luminous Star Gone 6/26/2009
17393. Who Will Rise 5/31/2009
17394. What Lies Ahead? 4/30/2009
17395. Hunter Bees 5/23/2009
17396. Simple Wagon 8/31/2009
17397. Samsher (Sword) 9/7/2009
17398. Mother Land 6/17/2009
17399. I Could Hear..... 7/9/2009
17400. Why You Need Benevolent Dictator? 5/7/2009

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Omar Ibrahim (7/12/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    a one of my favorite poets here at poemhunter.com...........actually, all indians at poemhunter.com are my favorite because they all rhyme! ! ! in fact, Hasmukh Amathalal is the best of them all......he is not less than pablo neruda or william blake...i am really honest....and if he worked on being famous he will certainly be a popular, famous poet......he can publish his poems in many sites...he can also publish them in any journal in india if this is possible......

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  • John Shea (6/27/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh...this poem is truly wonderful...you must have caught quite a beautiful butterfly.. one full of inspiration and fine for your family to see..I know that I will chase it too and share it with my family and tell them where it came from and release it for them to share..your friend John.

  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (6/24/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dear poet

    It is so hard to talk about you and about the poetry of yours too
    I really appreciate you for every thing you write and create too
    you are one of the greatest poet in our alive nation
    keep in doing on it dear
    well done and great job
    May God be with you
    luwi

  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.
    Vanita.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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