Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1721. My Intention 5/27/2011
1722. For My Country 5/27/2011
1723. I Go Down 5/28/2011
1724. Catch Air 5/30/2011
1725. For The Want Of Time 4/23/2011
1726. Good Institutions 5/22/2011
1727. Many More 5/22/2011
1728. Bitter Experience 5/29/2011
1729. Not A New İDea 5/30/2011
1730. Love Devoid Of Pain 5/30/2011
1731. No One Cares 5/30/2011
1732. Breeze On Fingers 5/28/2011
1733. A Final Gift 5/28/2011
1734. From The Back 5/31/2011
1735. Leave Everything 5/27/2011
1736. Dark Days Are Over 5/27/2011
1737. But Not For Ever 5/27/2011
1738. Bribe With Conviction 6/3/2011
1739. Best Friend 6/3/2011
1740. Sun May Shine 6/3/2011
1741. Difficult As Friend 6/3/2011
1742. Life To Define 6/3/2011
1743. Feel Safe In Cell 6/4/2011
1744. Those Helpless 6/4/2011
1745. Engraved Marble 6/4/2011
1746. Quality Or Color 6/5/2011
1747. So Many Reasons 6/2/2011
1748. In Past Years 6/2/2011
1749. Endless Search 6/2/2011
1750. Can'T Do Away 6/1/2011
1751. Wish And Pray 6/5/2011
1752. Just Prayer 6/8/2011
1753. Future Dream 6/8/2011
1754. Face Some Gap 6/8/2011
1755. Don'T Run Away 6/8/2011
1756. About Illicit Relation 6/8/2011
1757. Some Importance 6/8/2011
1758. To Be Anchored 6/9/2011
1759. Don'T Hurt 6/9/2011
1760. Prayer Words 6/6/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2014 6:57:00 PM)

    just behave, , , , , ,

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai,

    I had a similar experience recently while giving a talk to young children. I stopped the noise by reciting a devotional song of Purandara Dasa. Its English vesion is the one given below:

    “Make no noise, make no noise

    I will fall at your feet, be wise

    Those who are asleep might wake up

    And with questions might come up.”

    Had your ‘Madame, ’ known Kannada she would have certainly made use of this song. I know not which ‘Madame’ you are referring to. I hope she is not Madame Bovary of Flaubert.

    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Jan 16,2014

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    When I look.....en I Look At by Hansmukh Mehta is a nice poetic endeavour to present the universe as the poet sees it.

    Kesavan Subramanian8 minutes ago
    It is a good Nature poem. I like it.
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    Keek Ruiz21 minutes ago
    I enjoyed reading your perspective on how you see life.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:29:00 PM)

    I shall....transformation is a true change- righteousness is a free gift.. strive for excellence, do not condemn.

    Jo Anna Mike Simmons5 minutes ago
    Very good.... His light is always with you, if you mess up it is okay, He forgives. When you spend time with God and in His Word, you have a relationship with Him and it is easier to go through life. :)))))))))))))
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    C Castro7 minutes ago
    Very nice message.. Keep up the good work

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Heartless as human.....So wonderful

    krishna Middela11 minutes ago
    We express our views, though they understand, some are keen to observe the grammar.after english is not my mother tongue.neither they know my mother tongue to share.
    Let beauty of expression be appreciated.
    But your grammar is perfect.
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    Greg Obrecht12 minutes ago
    This. Is. Awesome.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:53:00 PM)

    Try to judge
    Wise words

    Abbey Gillespie8 minutes ago
    These words so wise and noble. They show passion and express that has been put into the poem. Beautiful and truthful peace

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    Masterly writing.Facts of life well composed

    Shantanu Chindhade7 hours ago
    Writing of high order.Philosophical but with real truth,
    Shantanu chindhade
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    Good stlye

    Asia Crockett7 hours ago
    Decent good thoughts

    To change without, first change within...

    Anthony V7 hours ago
    Only two problems; week should be weak and date should be a word which rhymes with guide. Otherwise, answering the question of morality; how does one go from an evil person to one of good character? Simply put: Remember deeds done and amend them.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/8/2014 7:41:00 PM)

    Not all....A spiritual poem with firm faith and discipline.

    Amir Samji21 minutes ago
    After reading your poem, I can say, we forgot, honesty, and piety, that was jewels of societies. This is the reason we see chaos worldwide, and lies are prevailing over the Truth.
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    piously Simple

    prema das32 minutes ago
    preachers preach
    laymen listen
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    Don't talk to me about God

    Mary-Elin Rollins34 minutes ago
    no disrespect meant, but I gave up on him a long time ago because he fed me to the dogs and never did anything to help my family

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/8/2014 6:43:00 PM)

    From 1 to ten...Some Girl
    You might find this interesting The core of Krishnamurti's teaching is contained in the statement he made in 1929 when he said 'Truth is a pathless land'. Man cannot come to it through any organisation, through any creed, through any dogma, priest or ritual, not through any philosophical knowledge or psychological technique. He has to find it through the mirror of relationship, through the understanding of the contents of his own mind, through observation and not through intellectual analysis or introspective dissection. Man has built in himself images as a fence of security - religious, political, personal. These manifest as symbols, ideas, beliefs. The burden of these images dominates man's thinking, his relationships and his daily life. These images are the causes of our problems for they divide man from man. His perception of life is shaped by the concepts already established in his mind. The content of his consciousness is his entire existence. This content is common to all humanity. The individuality is the name, the form and superficial culture he acquires from tradition and environment. The uniqueness of man does not lie in the superficial but in complete freedom from the content of his consciousness, which is common to all mankind. So he is not an individual. Your poem made me think of this concept :)

    I love it. It makes me think.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    with positive attitude...
    Date & Time: 1/6/2014 4: 23: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 37632050 - With Positive Attitude
    Member: marvin brato
    Comment: Faith is kinda a positive attitude... believing for good things in life is an example! Thought provoking sentiments. Thanks for sharing sir.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:24:00 PM)

    tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.

    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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