Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 453,064 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

17561. What About Tomorrow 6/1/2009
17562. Education Gives Us........ 7/28/2009
17563. Prayer 5/14/2009
17564. Old Age Home 5/21/2009
17565. Clarity 8/30/2009
17566. No Teacher, Please 4/10/2009
17567. Racial Abuse 5/30/2009
17568. Go Back 4/11/2009
17569. Will You Marry Me? 7/21/2009
17570. God, Bless You 5/8/2009
17571. As A Friend 10/23/2009
17572. Oh, Dear Daughter 9/23/2009
17573. Should We Feel 8/2/2009
17574. Forgiveness 9/2/2009
17575. Mercy, Rain God 7/15/2009
17576. Mother And I Wept 5/8/2009
17577. Touch Me Not 4/20/2009
17578. I Sell My Soul 4/13/2009
17579. Where Were You 9/15/2009
17580. Man Proposed 8/13/2009
17581. A Never Ending 3/17/2010
17582. Premature Baby Killings 5/5/2009
17583. Smoking Is Injurious 8/7/2009
17584. Dark Prepresents Bad 5/27/2009
17585. Set To Sail 9/20/2009
17586. You Go Alone 6/23/2009
17587. You Do Anything....... 8/15/2009
17588. Kind Approach 9/28/2009
17589. He Is No More 6/5/2009
17590. Kohinoor...Unlucky Stone 9/5/2009
17591. Position In Mid Air 9/1/2009
17592. Cool Breeze 5/27/2009
17593. Everything Compromised 9/24/2009
17594. Crush The Rebellion 5/31/2009
17595. Jackson Is No More 6/25/2009
17596. Mother In All Forms 9/12/2009
17597. No To Violence 9/2/2009
17598. Sheer Madness 9/21/2009
17599. Step Mother 9/2/2009
17600. Humble Submission 7/18/2009

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Omar Ibrahim (7/12/2009 1:50:00 AM)

    a one of my favorite poets here at poemhunter.com...........actually, all indians at poemhunter.com are my favorite because they all rhyme! ! ! in fact, Hasmukh Amathalal is the best of them all......he is not less than pablo neruda or william blake...i am really honest....and if he worked on being famous he will certainly be a popular, famous poet......he can publish his poems in many sites...he can also publish them in any journal in india if this is possible......

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  • John Shea (6/27/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh...this poem is truly wonderful...you must have caught quite a beautiful butterfly.. one full of inspiration and fine for your family to see..I know that I will chase it too and share it with my family and tell them where it came from and release it for them to share..your friend John.

  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (6/24/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dear poet

    It is so hard to talk about you and about the poetry of yours too
    I really appreciate you for every thing you write and create too
    you are one of the greatest poet in our alive nation
    keep in doing on it dear
    well done and great job
    May God be with you
    luwi

  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.
    Vanita.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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