Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 497,096 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1761. As Well Wishers 3/20/2016
1762. Systematic Drive 3/20/2016
1763. Self Destruction 3/20/2016
1764. Only Cheers Now 3/20/2016
1765. Reciprocal Gesture 3/21/2016
1766. Rest Of The Life Here 3/21/2016
1767. Before Time Goes 3/21/2016
1768. His Emissary Or Followers 3/22/2016
1769. Must Have Been 3/22/2016
1770. Life Has To 3/22/2016
1771. With Delightful Art 3/22/2016
1772. Best Among Wives 3/22/2016
1773. Such Call 3/22/2016
1774. Really Echoes 3/22/2016
1775. Really Echoes In 3/22/2016
1776. Forget Meal 3/22/2016
1777. So Well 3/23/2016
1778. Who Will Decide 3/23/2016
1779. Other Thoughts 3/23/2016
1780. Some More Destruction 3/24/2016
1781. With Prayers To 3/24/2016
1782. Most Treasured 3/24/2016
1783. Best Situation 3/25/2016
1784. Daily Our Face 3/25/2016
1785. Not To Find 3/25/2016
1786. Keep It Live 3/26/2016
1787. Always Bear In 3/26/2016
1788. Only Answer To 3/26/2016
1789. Mere Speaker 3/28/2016
1790. Fading Darkness 3/28/2016
1791. In Coing Time 3/28/2016
1792. With Less Troubles 3/29/2016
1793. Street Hooligans 3/29/2016
1794. Mountain Peak 3/29/2016
1795. No Manners 3/30/2016
1796. No Manners At All 3/30/2016
1797. Behind Screen 3/30/2016
1798. Dream Of Country 3/30/2016
1799. Love Love 3/30/2016
1800. May End 3/30/2016

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    MY only child.....Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world

    Steven Gress1 minute ago
    Thank you for sharing your poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    It speaks truth.......Ahh the beuty of art. Herein is the beauty of language.

    Lynn Petty23 minutes ago
    Is there a little Tagore here? This is something he would write.
    Very thoughtful. Good construction. Good language,

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:21:00 PM)

    Simple home...
    hussain smelter
    believe me Dear, it seems that your every poem is written on me, i have a very big house on 44000 square feet, garden, guest house, only one daughter in class 5, when she is in school, my feelings............ some time cry loudly, but again thanks God, billions of people have not all these

    i can keep on writing on this but you have God gifted ability to say all these in one stanza, be blessed with complete health

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Night is for silence....

    great poem Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 3 hours ago An intelligent write with a special grace of a poet full of foresight and creative reasons of thoughts....form, structure and message well delivered.. keep writing and sharing more I wish to see you among the top poets soon! Comment 1 Comment+1

    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago i am honored

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/12/2013 7:43:00 PM)

    Grammar and Flow

    Robynn Mussell50 minutes ago
    Your poem, though wonderful in itself, is marred by the lack of punctuation and simple articles like a and the. There is also discontinuity with the 'beat' of the lines in each stanza.
    Without a way to make the syllables match, or are off by one or two (either more or less) , your poem seems to came apart and feel 'almost' broken. Take a look at some of Shakespeare's sonnets for an example of what I am explaining. Your rhyming is different, but it works here very well.
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    it is rarity in itself. you take amy stanza away.no wehre you will find such combination, you enjoy the theme and clsoeness.it speaks of volumes in regard to experience, it has flow of river and rhythms like melody

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 11:23:00 PM)

    with dual act....Gibz Rising likes this.

    Gibz Rising a poem.... lies after lies, the devil does cry, , god and the devil are always unite... mind tricksters from far away planet and relm.... exploding stars after gold is all gone, , destruction is the fake god, and manipulation threw telepathy be the fake gods tool.. innocent is the vampire they call damian, working with love as he always been, , .. vessels are important to some - tainted water supplys, drugs, , alcohol, , all plans to keep our minds safe from them, , smart is 2 entitys working always as one, , team effort, , from another inflicted exploding sun, , found our mother and adores all life in her thumb, wicked is the creator, love is the poor thumb, , the creator is the evil, , and the devil and god are in love! ! ... TIME TO RISE! ! my soul is his, , the devil shall i become, for the good in everyone!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 9:12:00 PM)

    I shall remain, mother....Ravi Anantharaman Yes. You have captured it. See, an individual is often helpless within the claws of a society. Sage Vyasa had something else in his mind as a dramatist when he drew such a plot. What would happen if two brothers of the same blood stood opposite in a battlefield? If Karna was not drawn like that, the impact of the epic would have been much less than it usually carries. By effectively drawing such a plot, Vyasa could show before the world the depth of motherhood of Kunthi as well as you have come out with this poem. So, the plot has many angles.8 hours ago · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    Re: My pen goes dry (Score: 1)
    by Legendary on Friday, October 11,2013 (10: 05: 14)
    interesting thoughts on what we write about as poets, really like the thought behind

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    Re: My pen goes dry (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Friday, October 11,2013 (16: 59: 48)
    You definitely have the inner inspiration, all you are missing is a bit of finish and polish. But I find many of your poems have a lot of soul-food! Very Happy

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    Unlimited desire....

    Post The goodness of humans..blurred beyond recognition! Philo Francis4 hours ago Your words resonate all the truth..But we seem to have left our conscience behind.. Way too far behind! TQ Hasmukh for an awesome write! Comment +1 About human values

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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