Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,117 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1761. My Illusions 6/11/2011
1762. No One Realizes 6/12/2011
1763. I Feel Great 6/12/2011
1764. Divine Mission 6/12/2011
1765. Away From The Scene 6/13/2011
1766. One Soul 6/13/2011
1767. I Shall Resurface 6/12/2011
1768. After Break 6/12/2011
1769. Of Myself 6/14/2011
1770. Not For One Day 6/15/2011
1771. At Her Zenith 6/15/2011
1772. Pulled From 6/16/2011
1773. She Slammed 6/16/2011
1774. Cry For Her 6/16/2011
1775. A Shy Boy 6/16/2011
1776. Rained Heavily 6/16/2011
1777. Feel At Ease 6/19/2011
1778. Midnight Scare 6/19/2011
1779. Loss Of Life 6/19/2011
1780. Sun Shine 6/19/2011
1781. Know Your Talent 6/21/2011
1782. Difficult To Maintian 6/23/2011
1783. As He Does 6/23/2011
1784. Kind Of Confusion 6/22/2011
1785. Free Bird 6/22/2011
1786. Claim True Beauty 6/24/2011
1787. Any Parallel 6/24/2011
1788. Love Is Disease 6/24/2011
1789. If There Were 6/24/2011
1790. Set To Receive 6/25/2011
1791. Rock Has Slope 6/25/2011
1792. I Can'T Dare 6/26/2011
1793. In Heaven 6/26/2011
1794. Such Memory 6/26/2011
1795. Nothing To Complain 6/26/2011
1796. Time To Decide 6/27/2011
1797. Not To Keep Us Free 6/27/2011
1798. Dynastic Rule 6/27/2011
1799. Felt It Badly 6/28/2011
1800. Can Turn A Tide 6/28/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Seize the opportunity...tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Seize the opportunity...tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 1:47:00 AM)

    On their side...
    AN AMBASSADOR OF GOOD SPEECH, LOVE, AND PEACE


    Edward Wahbe3 minutes ago
    Men and women may cease to exist
    But not their pain and agony make exit
    It shall remain as permanent part
    We need to think fresh and start

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Face reflects......

    Brilliant


    Shofi Ahmed8 minutes ago
    Tears do speak too, you are spot on.
    Comment +1
    It speaks


    Robert Roberts8 minutes ago
    After reviewing so many poems I see your's and see your pain, your joy... Through thick and thin you have been, and the flow was unbelievable. Very good poem and if i might add, keep doing what you're doing.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    Simple, person..

    Great


    Amy Noborikawa19 minutes ago
    Love this poem. It talks of a simple man who does not pick fights, but is picked upon just because he does not appear to live up to someone else's standards. He does not understand the inner dislikes that people have. As much as he tries to figure out why, it is a game that he probably cannot win. I totally identify with this poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    o, rose

    Tibjee Kachroo Excellent, Once Milton was asked to admire rose in a sentence he said A rose is a rose is a rose.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    O, rose

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai, Your poem has something rare and really great It reminds of a reply given to Romeo by Juliet A rose by any other name would smell as sweet KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134 Jan 04,2014.....

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    Virtue is shadow, , , , , Fantastic


    Andy Everstine10 minutes ago
    We all need support...imagine what we could accomplish in this world.
    Comment +1
    very good

    malenky malenky12 minutes ago
    nice
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    very enjoyable


    Kate Noble13 minutes ago
    interesting concepts explored
    ...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    Little significance

    Fantastic advice and rhyme scheme

    Stephanie Marilyn22 minutes ago
    I don't think there's anything I would change about this. It's relatable, wise, and understandable. Well expressed, good job. Nice reflecting.
    Comment +1
    Great Poem


    Elizabeth Waters24 minutes ago
    It was full of emotion.
    Comment +1
    cool

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  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Poet Hasmukh Amathlal
    One of the talented and respected poet.
    His poems flows freely on variety of topics.
    Its a beautiful gift you are blessed with.
    Thank you supporting me in this journey of poems.
    May you keep on contributing many valuable poems to this poetic world.
    Wishing you all the best.
    God Bless!
    Congratulations Sir, On Dec 30,2013 today you have attained #301 among the top 500 poets in PH.
    Thank You!

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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