Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 437,827 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1761. Selfless Dedicaion 5/7/2013
1762. Try 5/7/2013
1763. No To Her Death 5/7/2013
1764. Would Love To Stay 5/7/2013
1765. Happy Marriage Anniversary 5/7/2013
1766. If Desired 5/7/2013
1767. Your Birhday 5/4/2013
1768. Respect 5/10/2013
1769. Ordinary Thoughts 5/10/2013
1770. Time 5/14/2013
1771. Same Environment 5/14/2013
1772. Grandma's Death 5/14/2013
1773. My Dream 5/17/2013
1774. Love Must Be Felt 5/16/2013
1775. Not To Alter 5/17/2013
1776. No Holiday 5/18/2013
1777. Humane 5/20/2013
1778. Without Guilt 6/19/2013
1779. Welcome Enjoy And Greet 6/24/2013
1780. Idiot's Tale 6/25/2013
1781. Imagery Person 6/26/2013
1782. No Sound Sleep 6/27/2013
1783. As Proud Cover 6/28/2013
1784. Bare Facts 7/9/2013
1785. प्रेम का इतिहास...Premka Itiihaas 7/11/2013
1786. विहार करने दे मान्यवर.. vihaar karne 7/12/2013
1787. उत्तम मरना भी...uttam marna 7/14/2013
1788. Peace On 7/17/2013
1789. काहेका कोई खेरखा है Kaheka koi 7/20/2013
1790. अपने हाथों से ही बुझाते हो...Apne hathose 7/21/2013
1791. भुला नहीं कहते.. bhula nahi kehta 7/24/2013
1792. पियु मारो गयो परदेस..piyu maro gayo 7/24/2013
1793. આજ છે સત્ય Aaj Chhe Satya 7/25/2013
1794. Feel Closely 6/22/2013
1795. About Tomorrow 7/27/2013
1796. अपना ही फ़साना.. apna hi 7/28/2013
1797. मै वो नहीं....me vo nahi 7/28/2013
1798. jab khud hi... जब खूद ही पछतायेगा 7/26/2013
1799. बस भावना हो... Bas Bhavna Ho 7/26/2013
1800. धनी और बडभागी, , dhani or badbhagi 7/29/2013

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    Unlimited desire....

    Post The goodness of humans..blurred beyond recognition! Philo Francis4 hours ago Your words resonate all the truth..But we seem to have left our conscience behind.. Way too far behind! TQ Hasmukh for an awesome write! Comment +1 About human values

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    Just a guess... Logan Geise28 minutes ago...is this about a song bird? The way life sometimes gets in the way of a person appreciating the simple/natural things that go on around them as time passes? I dunno. That's what I felt and agree with. Comment 0 Beautiful expressions great lines.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    WAO! A true wish

    Roland 'KingShip' EdiareLess than a minute ago
    Very well done, many have paid the price...to bring us to where we are, but the plight of the world today does not reflect much about what they fought and died for. I say Amen! To we need God once again.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/9/2013 7:08:00 PM)

    I love word

    Re: I love word (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Wednesday, October 09,2013 (12: 23: 16)
    I like how you explore topics, I feel on some level you are an ethical poet.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    With importance...... Re: With importance (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Monday, October 07,2013 (22: 43: 05)
    You know Jadia, this would have sounded great in Sanskrit. There are glimmers of something very poetic here, which I can appreciate. The rhyming did not feel forced and the Brahmin (arrogance) sounded more like translated from Bengali but captured something of the vedic consciousness just the same.

    I felt the power of renunciation and surrender to shakti throughout.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:28:00 AM)

    I shall remain mother

    A voice for the mothers who face similar situations..The world over!

    Philo Francis4 minutes ago
    Grateful thanks for your depictions so deep, so strong, so powerful!
    Thank you Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    history or fact

    Guilty Pleasure13 minutes ago
    Just a powerful poem, Well Done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/7/2013 12:53:00 AM)

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    hussain smelter
    Really touched by your personality & the poetry, wish & pray for your long life with complete health & prosperity.
    Warm regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    It pays occasionally

    Excellent you have hit the nail on the head-well done.

    stan brierly11 minutes ago
    You have a good style and I liked the poem.
    Comment +1

    malenky malenky13 minutes ago
    i love it good one
    Comment +1
    Very good

    Sean Barker12 minutes ago
    words of wisdom

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Simple entity.....

    i loved it

    El Bayoumy El Samanoudy19 minutes ago
    That I am simple entity is the base of the whole universal
    Comment 0
    It was really moving

    Ryan Hill19 minutes ago
    i really like the pauses it creates within the poem for the reader to reflect on the words you have written. I like the idea of the poem talking about the soul so genuinely and freely aswell as the words you have used to describe the way you feel about life. You could feel that it was genuine which is what i personally love about reading poems like this. I think you could work on expanding the ideas that you have about the soul within the poem. but overall it was really really good.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.

    Tony Adamo20 minutes ago
    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.
    Comment +1
    it's good

    Kam Shea Avandi22 minutes ago
    it is a good i am poem i would like it more if it was more directed at the world, the reader...bc than i could feel the emotion too

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Mothers are always exceptional
Their views are rationale
They are universal
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