Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 466,725 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1801. Real Lover On 5/8/2016
1802. Her Good Success 5/9/2016
1803. With Status 5/9/2016
1804. With Status In Force 5/9/2016
1805. Keep Away The Pain 5/9/2016
1806. Bhumiputra* 5/10/2016
1807. Blank And Absent 5/10/2016
1808. Senior Ranking 5/10/2016
1809. Human Behavior 5/11/2016
1810. Cold In Noon 5/12/2016
1811. Happily Done Again 5/12/2016
1812. Real Difference 5/12/2016
1813. Outer Beauty 5/13/2016
1814. Much Of Noise 5/13/2016
1815. Ready For Her 5/13/2016
1816. Only Nature For Us 5/13/2016
1817. Nature For Us 5/13/2016
1818. खुशियां अनामत रहे Khushiyaan Anamat 5/15/2016
1819. Free Birds 5/15/2016
1820. We Often View 5/15/2016
1821. Feel It As One 5/15/2016
1822. Rub The Dark Pages 5/16/2016
1823. Seize The Call 5/16/2016
1824. Maltreatment 5/16/2016
1825. Heartily Longing 5/17/2016
1826. Strike First 5/17/2016
1827. Not Enough Light 5/17/2016
1828. Not Face Alone 5/18/2016
1829. When Will You Come 5/18/2016
1830. Help Way 5/18/2016
1831. Spirit Found 5/18/2016
1832. Listening To Poor 5/20/2016
1833. Sensible Human 5/20/2016
1834. Not Result Into 5/21/2016
1835. Self Choice 5/22/2016
1836. Accept Reality As 5/22/2016
1837. Shall Not Care 5/23/2016
1838. Nice Preference 5/23/2016
1839. Strong Will 5/24/2016
1840. Logical Argument 5/24/2016

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    The sea waves, , , , , Gibz Rising suffering due to our mad acts is a beautiful lesson from love, , but are we realy to blame for the devil manipulating minds disguised in another relm? the devil created all religion and wants humans to believe we all have free will so we blame our selves for the works of him, , this is not the same devil as ever described - its a entity that came to earth long ago, , from a far away galaxy, lost and alone it took refuge on earth and it only knows fear, , it has no other feelings, , , but likes to try to laugh, , this entity came with another, , a positive entity, its brother, , or sister you may even say, , man does not have free will once we have totaly manifested negativity, , it can enter your vessel and take over fully at any givin time if you are on a negative frequency, , all media is his tools to have fun, , believe only what your spirit is telling you when you are on a positive frequency, , mother earth is working with the devils brother/sister/positive to protect the planet and over throw the devil, , for the devil will not co-operate and is just a lost puppy full of thriving fear, , fear not the open words of the wise owl, , and understand them, , , for a war is coming, , and the devil may not get to be apart of it - if it continues to disrupt efforts, , i will have no choice but to destroy it myself
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    Sheila Ann Anderson If we do not protect and nurture Mother Earth, she will no longer be able to protect us and allow us to live upon her
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Great Greater Greatest

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha4 minutes ago
    Wonderful writing. You are my lovely Poet.
    Comment +1
    It's good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Great.

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha1 minute ago
    With humility I submit You are a great Poet

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by piph on Saturday, September 28,2013 (18: 48: 47)
    the world i do not think has never missed the beauty
    only the men in the world who would like to claim to own this mystery

    vivid writing
    it seems maybe you are translating into english, forgive me if i am wrong
    the sometimes broken form seems to lend to this poems worth
    thank you

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    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, September 29,2013 (00: 33: 26)
    never translating. it is poem coming from heart.5000 poem sso far and all have earned acclaim. it is new to you as the form is new to u

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 10:56:00 PM)

    clm down, calm down....The parts I understood were very good

    Regina Lee3 minutes ago
    The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships.
    The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist.
    The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions.
    learned a new word = spate
    I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    I love to hear....
    Re: I love to hear (Score: 1)
    by Pujakins on Thursday, September 26,2013 (18: 51: 16)
    This writer is consistent in his exhortations to all and I appreciate his vivid spirit and beautiful heart. A very loving effort. Thank you. Warmly, Tasha

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    What is ac?

    Steven Avolio1 hour ago
    I enjoyed reading this poem. It is heart felt and flowes well. The poor we will always have with us.Thanks for shairing. Keep them coming.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    real student

    Great! hazel Shirley6 hours ago It is worth reading and My respect always remain for the Educationist...Well written Mehtaji!

  • Rinku Tiwari Rinku Tiwari (9/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    you are good poem i think you can be a popular poet

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    For self obsession....great writing

    Johnson Vdev11 minutes ago
    This poem is concieved well... written well and as has brought out all thye feelings the poet wanted to express...very deep thoughts....thanks for sharing

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###


Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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