Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1801. धनी और बडभागी, , dhani or badbhagi 7/29/2013
1802. पर लाज तुही रखना.. par laaj tuhi 8/6/2013
1803. क्या मिला आपको ... kya milaa 8/11/2013
1804. जी छोटा ना करना.. Ji Chhoa Na Karna 8/14/2013
1805. भय पैदा करेंगे दिलो में .. Bhay Peda Karenge 8/15/2013
1806. Holy Thread 8/19/2013
1807. Keep Smile On Face 8/19/2013
1808. मजबूर तो नहीं थे majboor to nahi 8/20/2013
1809. Good Flavor 8/22/2013
1810. काश हम रो ही पाते, , kaash ham 8/24/2013
1811. में दोहराता जाउंगा.. me dohraata 8/25/2013
1812. Television Shows 8/28/2013
1813. जब आप हो पूरी तरह बेखबर.. jab aapho 8/31/2013
1814. चकनाचूर हो जाएगा chaknachur 9/1/2013
1815. आप ही बताये, , AAP HI BATAYE 9/3/2013
1816. मेरे ही दिलका मतवाला Mere Hi Dilka 9/6/2013
1817. Go Ahead 9/8/2013
1818. जबान बंद क्यों है आज तुम्हारी jaban kyo 9/9/2013
1819. Capable And Wise 9/9/2013
1820. No Joke Or Fun 9/9/2013
1821. Away 5/21/2013
1822. Must Be Blown 5/19/2013
1823. I Am Called River 9/12/2013
1824. Her Honor 9/13/2013
1825. In Orderly Way 9/16/2013
1826. All Ready And Set 9/13/2013
1827. Late To Catch 5/8/2013
1828. Happiness 5/8/2013
1829. Not The Strong 5/5/2013
1830. Prefer Journey 4/30/2013
1831. How Best We Can 9/22/2013
1832. Past Days Are Means 9/22/2013
1833. Senru 9/29/2013
1834. Sky Is.... 9/28/2013
1835. I Shall Win Over 10/13/2013
1836. We Are Duty Bound 10/14/2013
1837. In Their Company“you Are Stupid” He Blasted “you Have No Lead” He Was Shivering With Rage I Was Listening To Person From Bonded Cage “you Are Pretending” He Went On “you Are Reck 11/7/2013
1838. Natural Rule Of Law 11/9/2013
1839. Love Words 11/11/2013
1840. Common Bond 11/13/2013

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Great.


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha1 minute ago
    With humility I submit You are a great Poet

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by piph on Saturday, September 28,2013 (18: 48: 47)
    the world i do not think has never missed the beauty
    only the men in the world who would like to claim to own this mystery

    vivid writing
    it seems maybe you are translating into english, forgive me if i am wrong
    the sometimes broken form seems to lend to this poems worth
    thank you

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    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, September 29,2013 (00: 33: 26)
    never translating. it is poem coming from heart.5000 poem sso far and all have earned acclaim. it is new to you as the form is new to u

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 10:56:00 PM)

    clm down, calm down....The parts I understood were very good


    Regina Lee3 minutes ago
    The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships.
    The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist.
    The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions.
    learned a new word = spate
    I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    I love to hear....
    Re: I love to hear (Score: 1)
    by Pujakins on Thursday, September 26,2013 (18: 51: 16)
    This writer is consistent in his exhortations to all and I appreciate his vivid spirit and beautiful heart. A very loving effort. Thank you. Warmly, Tasha

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    What is ac?


    Steven Avolio1 hour ago
    I enjoyed reading this poem. It is heart felt and flowes well. The poor we will always have with us.Thanks for shairing. Keep them coming.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    real student

    Great! hazel Shirley6 hours ago It is worth reading and My respect always remain for the Educationist...Well written Mehtaji!

  • Rinku Tiwari Rinku Tiwari (9/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    you are good poem i think you can be a popular poet

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    For self obsession....great writing


    Johnson Vdev11 minutes ago
    This poem is concieved well... written well and as has brought out all thye feelings the poet wanted to express...very deep thoughts....thanks for sharing

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Hasmukh your poem reminds me of the environmental cause a famous Axlepino poetess believes in, her name is Zhivka Baltadzhieva. Can I share your beautiful poem to read? Thank you so much!
    (Maria) Alicia

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Dr. Joseph W. Schnapp, Jr.8 hours ago
    This is one of the first poems I've had the pleasure to rate & read that addresses the religion of Islam and the many millions if not billions whom follow this great path...

    The abovesaid God, The Creator, The Great Spirit, First-mover and so on and so forth goes by many different languages (tongues) yet, if you take the time to really investigate these religions- nay: every religion the world has known, there run amongst and betwixt them certain truths and teachings... many of our Christian folk would readily recognize the so-called golden rule which is in essence: Do unto others as you would have them do to you. and any other number of comparable sayings and teachings...

    One minor religion oft overlooked are the Bahai's whom follow The Bob which was their most recent prophet whom was incarcerated and died in Arab prisons in the late 1800's sadly.

    So it is with absolute equity that I rate this submitted poem four (4) stars this day and primarily due to its underlying message,

    Cheers,

    -Joe

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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