Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,610 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1841. Cried For Hours 7/15/2011
1842. Declared No More 7/16/2011
1843. Little Mistake 7/16/2011
1844. Watch Green Leaves 7/15/2011
1845. Plight Or Hunger 7/16/2011
1846. Where Is She 7/17/2011
1847. Are Dear To Us 7/17/2011
1848. Desire And Wish 7/16/2011
1849. Find No Answer 7/17/2011
1850. Let Them Go 7/17/2011
1851. Powerless Animal 7/18/2011
1852. Doom's Day 7/19/2011
1853. In My Lap 7/18/2011
1854. Good To Feel 7/19/2011
1855. Dump The Good 7/19/2011
1856. Complete Thrust 7/7/2011
1857. Money Is God 7/19/2011
1858. No Compromise 7/19/2011
1859. Self Boost 7/19/2011
1860. At The Hang Over 7/19/2011
1861. To Feel Punch 7/19/2011
1862. Force Me To Love 7/20/2011
1863. Do Not Change 7/20/2011
1864. One Question 7/21/2011
1865. By Your Own Right 7/21/2011
1866. Nothing Is Permanent 7/22/2011
1867. Nothing Wrong 7/21/2011
1868. Only One Religion 7/21/2011
1869. No Pretence 7/21/2011
1870. Must Repeat 7/23/2011
1871. Home Sickness 7/22/2011
1872. With Variance 7/23/2011
1873. Naked Vision 7/22/2011
1874. Silver Moon 7/23/2011
1875. Keep Them Away 7/22/2011
1876. Something Unusual 7/23/2011
1877. It Is Faith 7/23/2011
1878. New Friend 7/23/2011
1879. At Midnight 7/24/2011
1880. Little Glimpse 7/24/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    In many places....

    wow

    Ecstacy Furubayashi19 minutes ago
    I apologize you are going through that. As they grow, they never really know why we did what we did is because we lovve them. From when they were a baby and always saying I love you, growing to teens and arguing. But you must not blame yourself. If we get hard on them its because it hurt us so much cause we want them to be better. But we can't shield them from everything. But we can talk to them and do our best to help them achieve goals.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:45:00 PM)

    little child

    I loved it!


    Kenji Z7 minutes ago
    Now I dont have any children of my own, but I have nieces and nephews. Watching them grow, you step in and correct the wrongs but in the end some mistakes have to be made in order to for them to grow and learn as their own. I dont mean to offend any parents, its just my take on it. Loved how your words painted a beautiful yet grim picture. Such is life.
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    Wow

    Faith Redfield14 minutes ago
    This is really strong: 3
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    Great! !


    Dina Yakout16 minutes ago
    Thank you for sharing this great poem that resonates with kindness and humanity :)
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    Father's love for his child


    Ifeanyi Nnadi15 minutes ago
    Yes girl child pose little problem
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    Needs more work

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    Peace can conquer...




    Janay Griffin9 minutes ago
    This poem is amazing. I understood the eternal message the first few sentences.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Little child.....

    Salute to you


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha33 minutes ago
    Wow. As usual. You have expressed very great.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    Send off.....smart


    meagan w10 hours ago
    you can tell from the poem that you are an intelligent person

    i like the line tears of happiness role out as a play on the common phrase roll out it gives the line a double meaning

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Everyday I miss...

    I miss her yet I see her every day.


    Steven Avolio7 minutes ago
    This poem is filled with beauty and heart felt images. It is moving and moves with a good cadence. Well done and KUDOS...
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    Well written

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    My only child

    Great!


    Danielle Erin2 minutes ago
    I love the use of the child here, and the way you alluded to faith, but never had to mention it to get your point across.

    My favourite line was, my feet were dancing.
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    good child


    Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi2 minutes ago
    well children are treasure and always child in the eyes of parents, well done poem

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    MY only child.....Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world

    Steven Gress1 minute ago
    Thank you for sharing your poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    It speaks truth.......Ahh the beuty of art. Herein is the beauty of language.


    Lynn Petty23 minutes ago
    Is there a little Tagore here? This is something he would write.
    Very thoughtful. Good construction. Good language,

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:21:00 PM)

    Simple home...
    hussain smelter
    believe me Dear, it seems that your every poem is written on me, i have a very big house on 44000 square feet, garden, guest house, only one daughter in class 5, when she is in school, my feelings............ some time cry loudly, but again thanks God, billions of people have not all these

    i can keep on writing on this but you have God gifted ability to say all these in one stanza, be blessed with complete health

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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