Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 465,829 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1841. Perfect For Team 5/27/2016
1842. Be It Man Or....... 5/30/2016
1843. Through Unfair Means 5/31/2016
1844. Through Unfair 5/31/2016
1845. Mend Irritation 5/31/2016
1846. Publication Work 6/1/2016
1847. Also Added 5/31/2016
1848. Stand None 5/31/2016
1849. Show And Appear 6/2/2016
1850. Live Side By 6/2/2016
1851. Different Ways 6/2/2016
1852. Only Mission 6/2/2016
1853. Draw New Lines 6/2/2016
1854. Each Night 6/3/2016
1855. Ban Eyes 6/3/2016
1856. Goal High 6/3/2016
1857. Not King 6/4/2016
1858. Different Mood 6/4/2016
1859. With One Guilt 6/5/2016
1860. No Authority 6/6/2016
1861. Emerge At Last 6/6/2016
1862. Real Bless From 6/6/2016
1863. O Dear Child 6/6/2016
1864. Future For 6/7/2016
1865. Still Not 6/7/2016
1866. Tit For Tat And 6/7/2016
1867. Tit For Tat And Back 6/7/2016
1868. At Home And 6/7/2016
1869. Direct Fall 6/7/2016
1870. Thousands Or 6/8/2016
1871. Black Or White 6/8/2016
1872. Listen To Your 6/8/2016
1873. Cruel Butcher 6/9/2016
1874. Not Later Anytime 6/9/2016
1875. Her Need 6/9/2016
1876. Sole Judge In 6/8/2016
1877. Human Art In Use 6/9/2016
1878. Memory In Sleep 6/9/2016
1879. As Not Lost 6/9/2016
1880. Understand In Time 6/10/2016

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Hasmukh your poem reminds me of the environmental cause a famous Axlepino poetess believes in, her name is Zhivka Baltadzhieva. Can I share your beautiful poem to read? Thank you so much!
    (Maria) Alicia

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Dr. Joseph W. Schnapp, Jr.8 hours ago
    This is one of the first poems I've had the pleasure to rate & read that addresses the religion of Islam and the many millions if not billions whom follow this great path...

    The abovesaid God, The Creator, The Great Spirit, First-mover and so on and so forth goes by many different languages (tongues) yet, if you take the time to really investigate these religions- nay: every religion the world has known, there run amongst and betwixt them certain truths and teachings... many of our Christian folk would readily recognize the so-called golden rule which is in essence: Do unto others as you would have them do to you. and any other number of comparable sayings and teachings...

    One minor religion oft overlooked are the Bahai's whom follow The Bob which was their most recent prophet whom was incarcerated and died in Arab prisons in the late 1800's sadly.

    So it is with absolute equity that I rate this submitted poem four (4) stars this day and primarily due to its underlying message,



  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    the images.....A real poem

    Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago
    like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best
    Comment 0

    Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago
    A place to live in with pride.
    But Now
    Time Changes
    With the Changing Scenario
    No one love antique
    But Novel latest models, ,
    A Very heart touching
    And speaking the real mind,
    I Love the poem, ,
    The way it moves
    so swiftly,
    Comment 0
    Very Nice

    Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago
    This one was good...
    Comment 0

    Dana Moon18 minutes ago
    lovely thought to finish on
    Comment +1

    Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago
    Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:36:00 PM)

    A wish for peace

    Lisa Spears3 days ago
    I sincerely like the message of this poem. Who would not wish for peace? I think on the last line maybe you mean Let skirmishes and bloodshed have no cause? I guess I'm confused on how the last line is worded. I would want skirmishes and bloodshed to have much pause vs. little pause. If skirmishes and bloodshed are paused, then they are not happening. Thanks for your message of peace my fellow poet.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    Love the country...shows patriotism

    Maira Javaid3 days ago

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    one of the most serious and likable poem i ever read in this site. congradulations. love & regards surya

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    Ultra Violet
    Do you know the right thing to say? It can sound good, but still be a lie. Anger is true. It's you telling you that you need to listen to you. ^-^

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    Sinethemba Sindane Wow..it flows man..I dont even know who am I to judge such a great piece of work..wow!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Great Writing Style

    Frank Klein IVLess than a minute ago
    Though I do not agree with what you wrote, and it seems very ideological, I like how you expressed your heart with words in meter that flowed like smooth butter, and no hurdles to trip up the tongue in my mind. Therefore, I am pleased to give you 5 stars. Keep up the great style of writing.
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    joseph harlacherLess than a minute ago
    I believe this poet believes in what he wrote
    without people like him we would not have grocery stores, effective post offices, or lawyers who care.
    keep on writing like this it moves what barricades our way to living in outer space. thanks.
    Comment +1

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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