Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

1881. Life Isn'T Hell 7/25/2011
1882. You May Find 7/26/2011
1883. No Dark 7/26/2011
1884. Not A Word Of Criticism 7/3/2011
1885. Defined Differently 7/27/2011
1886. True Reward 7/27/2011
1887. Bright Day 7/27/2011
1888. Who May Come 7/27/2011
1889. No Tit For Tat 7/27/2011
1890. You Alone 7/27/2011
1891. Love Signals 7/28/2011
1892. Natural Miracles 7/28/2011
1893. Where Do I Find You! 7/29/2011
1894. Rainbow In Sky 7/28/2011
1895. Quest And Request 7/28/2011
1896. Not Afraid 7/29/2011
1897. Not Aware 7/29/2011
1898. Not The Game 7/29/2011
1899. Turbulent Period 7/20/2011
1900. My Courtsy To All 7/20/2011
1901. Beautiful Sunday 7/30/2011
1902. Sink With Shame 7/31/2011
1903. Not New Find 7/31/2011
1904. Not Last 7/29/2011
1905. Inherent Weakness 7/30/2011
1906. Pride And Honor 7/30/2011
1907. Idle Corner 7/31/2011
1908. Birthday 8/1/2011
1909. I And Mother 7/31/2011
1910. Fake Poets 7/26/2011
1911. Keep Open 7/26/2011
1912. A Cuckoo To Resurace 8/2/2010
1913. A Hunger 11/28/2010
1914. Closely Guarded 8/1/2011
1915. Ramadan And Old Friends 8/1/2011
1916. Weeping Child 8/1/2011
1917. Couldn'T Find 8/2/2011
1918. Someone To Overrule 8/2/2011
1919. You Are Same 8/3/2011
1920. Visible Attitude 8/2/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Night is for silence....

    great poem Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 3 hours ago An intelligent write with a special grace of a poet full of foresight and creative reasons of thoughts....form, structure and message well delivered.. keep writing and sharing more I wish to see you among the top poets soon! Comment 1 Comment+1

    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago i am honored

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/12/2013 7:43:00 PM)

    Grammar and Flow


    Robynn Mussell50 minutes ago
    Your poem, though wonderful in itself, is marred by the lack of punctuation and simple articles like a and the. There is also discontinuity with the 'beat' of the lines in each stanza.
    Without a way to make the syllables match, or are off by one or two (either more or less) , your poem seems to came apart and feel 'almost' broken. Take a look at some of Shakespeare's sonnets for an example of what I am explaining. Your rhyming is different, but it works here very well.
    Comment 1 Comment0


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    it is rarity in itself. you take amy stanza away.no wehre you will find such combination, you enjoy the theme and clsoeness.it speaks of volumes in regard to experience, it has flow of river and rhythms like melody

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 11:23:00 PM)

    with dual act....Gibz Rising likes this.

    Gibz Rising a poem.... lies after lies, the devil does cry, , god and the devil are always unite... mind tricksters from far away planet and relm.... exploding stars after gold is all gone, , destruction is the fake god, and manipulation threw telepathy be the fake gods tool.. innocent is the vampire they call damian, working with love as he always been, , .. vessels are important to some - tainted water supplys, drugs, , alcohol, , all plans to keep our minds safe from them, , smart is 2 entitys working always as one, , team effort, , from another inflicted exploding sun, , found our mother and adores all life in her thumb, wicked is the creator, love is the poor thumb, , the creator is the evil, , and the devil and god are in love! ! ... TIME TO RISE! ! my soul is his, , the devil shall i become, for the good in everyone!
    26 minutes ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 9:12:00 PM)

    I shall remain, mother....Ravi Anantharaman Yes. You have captured it. See, an individual is often helpless within the claws of a society. Sage Vyasa had something else in his mind as a dramatist when he drew such a plot. What would happen if two brothers of the same blood stood opposite in a battlefield? If Karna was not drawn like that, the impact of the epic would have been much less than it usually carries. By effectively drawing such a plot, Vyasa could show before the world the depth of motherhood of Kunthi as well as you have come out with this poem. So, the plot has many angles.8 hours ago · Unlike · 1

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    Re: My pen goes dry (Score: 1)
    by Legendary on Friday, October 11,2013 (10: 05: 14)
    interesting thoughts on what we write about as poets, really like the thought behind

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    Re: My pen goes dry (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Friday, October 11,2013 (16: 59: 48)
    You definitely have the inner inspiration, all you are missing is a bit of finish and polish. But I find many of your poems have a lot of soul-food! Very Happy

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    Unlimited desire....

    Post The goodness of humans..blurred beyond recognition! Philo Francis4 hours ago Your words resonate all the truth..But we seem to have left our conscience behind.. Way too far behind! TQ Hasmukh for an awesome write! Comment +1 About human values

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    sing.....
    Just a guess... Logan Geise28 minutes ago...is this about a song bird? The way life sometimes gets in the way of a person appreciating the simple/natural things that go on around them as time passes? I dunno. That's what I felt and agree with. Comment 0 Beautiful expressions great lines.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    WAO! A true wish


    Roland 'KingShip' EdiareLess than a minute ago
    Very well done, many have paid the price...to bring us to where we are, but the plight of the world today does not reflect much about what they fought and died for. I say Amen! To we need God once again.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/9/2013 7:08:00 PM)

    I love word

    Re: I love word (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Wednesday, October 09,2013 (12: 23: 16)
    I like how you explore topics, I feel on some level you are an ethical poet.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

[Report Error]