Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 675,117 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2041. Forgotten And Left Behind 9/10/2011
2042. Less Selfish 9/10/2011
2043. Unknown Patriots 9/10/2011
2044. Deep Sense 9/10/2011
2045. Shaken In Bed 9/11/2011
2046. Not Only Right 9/11/2011
2047. Favors The Brave 9/11/2011
2048. Love Does Rule 9/11/2011
2049. Frantic Search 9/12/2011
2050. Restore Comfidence 9/9/2011
2051. Face May Not 9/13/2011
2052. Bel(I) Eve 9/14/2011
2053. Not To Make Choice 9/15/2011
2054. Reason Behind Liking 9/16/2011
2055. For Female 9/16/2011
2056. For Poems 9/16/2011
2057. Such Existence 9/18/2011
2058. An Honest Man 9/19/2011
2059. Males Always Dominate 9/19/2011
2060. Remain For Ever 9/20/2011
2061. Look 9/21/2011
2062. Disaster Masters 9/21/2011
2063. Never Hesitate To Leave 9/22/2011
2064. Little Twinkle Star 9/22/2011
2065. On That Very Day 9/22/2011
2066. On Pilgrimage 9/23/2011
2067. How Good It Is 9/25/2011
2068. On Wrong Track 9/25/2011
2069. As Real Beauty 9/26/2011
2070. Pleasure Days 9/24/2011
2071. Foresight Or Vision 9/25/2011
2072. One Aspect 9/26/2011
2073. Natural Principles 9/27/2011
2074. Lovely And Beautiful 9/27/2011
2075. Only Despair And Hopes 9/28/2011
2076. Beauty On Earth 9/30/2011
2077. Your Own Thought 9/29/2011
2078. Nobody In The Boat 9/27/2011
2079. Ungrateful Stage 10/1/2011
2080. I Shall Try 10/2/2011

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
    Yes, an egotistic proclivity as well as a regular agenda of opportinistity carries questionable artistic merit. However I must say I am a bit taken aback in seeing this stance coming from someone who recommends his own work in the box that is meant to recommend poems you have read by others & were especially moved by...between that, and the obvious need to copy & paste comments you have received on other sites than this one, has admittedly got me scratching my head a tad....BTW: I believe you would garner far more positive feedback if (1) You did not alienate 80% of this sites membership by posting many of your poems in hindi, and (2) You found it in your own ego to swallow pride and actually read & critique those who have been regular loyal supporters & commentors of your work, here, on PF, despite your polarising actions. Look, don't portray me or this feedback wrogly, as it is merely an I.M.O. based on personal observation. I realise that I have NOT been one of your regular supporters, and certainly have never expected to be one of yours. I hope you take my opine and advice in as positive a vein as it may not have came across, but was meant to be. Good Luck in your literary travels & Be Well ~FjR~

    jadia4708au
    today 07.08
    i replied him as under....

    I appreciate your frankness. Some of your observations are true in the sense they are pursued by me. It is not meant to attract any attention or to get rewards.

    It is time consuming yet it has to be performed because poems must reach to readers and know who all are reading with their comments.

    I never ask anyone to read or appreciate but i am honest in putting to readers.

    I love your criticism. read and criticize. Never build opinion in haste

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    Rufus Henderson You write so well you have a gift
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    adiqullah Khan You have a talent and your poetry is filled with simple virtues, gentle and humanistic.tc and keep writing.- :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2013 7:31:00 AM)

    Bu Magda My friend u r really great artist of poems n I hv seen u in ur website... be best in ur life dear
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    Lyrical

    Ja'Quan LaBenne37 minutes ago
    I love the final line. Great.
    Comment +1
    Great


    Barry Good37 minutes ago
    Great poem. Love the way it flows and the way you put it over to the reader love it.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 6:05:00 AM)

    Seen by 1

    Adrina Adi...god of variety..god of splender! ! ! ..nice! ! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    time to go....Lorraine Currelley likes this.

    Lorraine Currelley Always your love of humanity and profound/wise words burst forth from your poems!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    12 July 2013 TO: Mr. Hasmukh mehta, & Ms. Shigufta Uzma Thanks for your kind comments. I'm particularly moved by Mr. Mehta's profound quotes- Such is faith And remains till death But in Him he finds solace In unhappiness, bright shine on face I'm inquisitive who is this great poet! Rajat Das Gupta

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jul 12,2013

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno and Les Bush Poet like this.

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno awesome poet you are :))
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2013 9:49:00 PM)

    Behind us, , , he poet details our under appreciation of divine natural occurrences that passes without any consideration.

    Mary Akinosi6 minutes ago
    My favorite part of this poem is its word choice and visual imagery that guide the reader through a delightful word party that instilled a new founded interest in the smaller things.
    Comment +1
    great work

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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