Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 507,245 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

18441. Makes Me Bleed 10/2/2009
18442. School 5/24/2009
18443. Come Home 6/26/2009
18444. Emotional Bursts 5/21/2009
18445. Eye For An Eye 6/7/2009
18446. Can Never Reach On Top 5/31/2009
18447. Mom, I Miss You 6/28/2009
18448. O, Mother 4/21/2009
18449. Colours 6/4/2009
18450. Anniversary 8/23/2009
18451. God, Bless Only Those 4/14/2009
18452. Bidding Farewell 7/5/2009
18453. All Trains Stop Here 5/12/2009
18454. Divorce 6/11/2009
18455. Blame Me 6/1/2009
18456. Bullet Proof 6/8/2009
18457. Bitter Words 9/24/2009
18458. Back To Stone Age 5/25/2009
18459. Butterflies Around 6/23/2009
18460. Can Any One Tell Me? 6/17/2009
18461. Close The Eyes 10/4/2009
18462. Asking More 5/29/2009
18463. Deep In Love 4/19/2009
18464. Child 4/14/2009
18465. Character Assassination 5/29/2009
18466. Dead Nights 5/26/2009
18467. Justice Delayed 9/24/2009
18468. Cry Not 4/16/2009
18469. Beauty 9/19/2009
18470. At First Sight 6/5/2009
18471. Blood All Over 8/24/2009
18472. Blot On Humanity 5/12/2009
18473. Anywhere You Like 6/30/2009
18474. At Cross Road 4/10/2009
18475. Brown Eyes 6/23/2009
18476. All Hopes Against Hope 5/11/2009
18477. A Place Called 6/4/2009
18478. All Dreams Not Come True ###309(In 500) 5/25/2009
18479. Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### 4/17/2009

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • John Shea (6/27/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh...this poem is truly wonderful...you must have caught quite a beautiful butterfly.. one full of inspiration and fine for your family to see..I know that I will chase it too and share it with my family and tell them where it came from and release it for them to share..your friend John.

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  • Luwi Habte Luwi Habte (6/24/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dear poet

    It is so hard to talk about you and about the poetry of yours too
    I really appreciate you for every thing you write and create too
    you are one of the greatest poet in our alive nation
    keep in doing on it dear
    well done and great job
    May God be with you

  • Joyce Lee (6/22/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    wow you sure know your work, a poet is a poet well done nicely put

  • Vanita Thakkar (6/20/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Jai Shree Krishna, Hasmukhbhai.
    I am delighted to read poems by Gujju poets on this web-site.
    Your poems are simple and contain the essence of wisdom you have gathered in the journey of your life - very precious. We readers, owe Thanks to you for sharing the real assets of your life with us. Thanks and Regards.

  • Richard Scarbrough (6/19/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    keep writing it does not matter your age
    people will still read page after page.
    i myself am 52 years of age you know,
    and several writers started off slow.

  • Shawnee Gonzalez (6/18/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    hey i've read your poems and they are amazing i hope you keep writing
    ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

  • Oluwajobi John (5/28/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    miss u i luv that... but dont miss me bcos i dont wanna miss u too

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am ex-serviceman from indian air force with literary test for poems.i have composed poems on numerous subjects with simple appeal. I hope readers may like and request them to comment critically

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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