Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 453,965 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2121. Give No Room 9/1/2016
2122. Not Fragrance 9/1/2016
2123. With Melodious Offer 9/2/2016
2124. Mere Drill 9/2/2016
2125. Born And Survive 9/2/2016
2126. Their Hymns 9/2/2016
2127. Pure Guilt 9/3/2016
2128. Pure Guilt In 9/3/2016
2129. An Easy Access 9/3/2016
2130. Takdir Se Kya Hona Hai तक़दीरसे क्या होना है 9/3/2016
2131. Not Emotional 9/2/2016
2132. Light Is All Over 9/3/2016
2133. Learn And Teach 9/3/2016
2134. With Livelihood 9/3/2016
2135. Stand Nowhere 9/3/2016
2136. With New Height 9/3/2016
2137. Not A Single Soldier 9/5/2016
2138. So Speak 9/5/2016
2139. Take Fresh Breathe 9/5/2016
2140. Shed Them 9/5/2016
2141. For Minor 9/5/2016
2142. Always Teacher 9/5/2016
2143. From Roof Top 9/4/2016
2144. Not All Snakes 9/6/2016
2145. We Shall Be Crushed 9/6/2016
2146. Less Importance 9/6/2016
2147. Mix With People 9/7/2016
2148. Feel It At Heart 9/7/2016
2149. All Lies 9/7/2016
2150. Stampede 9/7/2016
2151. Rape On Little Kids 9/7/2016
2152. Patiently Hear 9/7/2016
2153. No Matter 9/7/2016
2154. Gain After Struggle 9/8/2016
2155. New Love In Life 9/8/2016
2156. Accustomed 9/8/2016
2157. Not Caught 9/8/2016
2158. Appeal From Sparrow 9/9/2016
2159. No Movement 9/9/2016
2160. Reward 9/9/2016

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Lawrence H Lawrence H (1/8/2012 10:42:00 AM)

    Dear Sir Mehta,
    You are a good poet with a vast knowledge of poetry and understanding with wisdom how a poem should be written..within your very own voices in your poems..

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    Deletecyclopseven
    I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:36:00 PM)

    patspoems re: Thank you jadia your work is always a pleasure to read. God...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2011 7:23:00 PM)

    Dear Sir, ,
    I'm fine and what about you, sir?
    Oh, I'm so glad now for you've invited me to comment on your poem, ,
    Do you remember or not but once you did post me a message saying that you've to keep your attention in your poems and not in these ratings and they are merely some ratings! ! ! but that time I was in the 4th position in the world by popularity..
    So I could write some good poems for me... And I could find a great deal of satisfaction in my writings! ! !
    Also I could find a lot of things from your poems in what I commented but did I comment it all with what then came to my mind...but they were all my heartfelt comments! ! !
    I hope you may enjoy my comments..
    And If time permits you, please read and comment on my poems too, ,
    I'd like to get comments from a poet who have written over 2000 poems but most of everything, you are from My Country! ! ! !
    May God bless you more, ,
    With Love and Peace
    VIPINS PUTHOORAN! ! ! ! ! !

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:49:00 PM)

    From : Jose Lu (Perth Australia; Male; 22)
    To : Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time : 12/7/2011 7: 30: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject : Re: Friend

    Thank you,

    I have seen some of your poems.There's many of it, see..More than 2000 poems just will keep me around for a year.

    Great poems, I must say.You're one of some poets I know that still use the rhyme, very good indeed.I like the style very much.

    Hope you're in a good state, with a good health and have a great day.

    Cordially, keep writing.I shall wait for another poem,

    Jose

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:48:00 PM)

    Hello Mehta. I am new to this website and do not visit it too often. Thank you for your message and your trust in me to comment. My comments will not be of literary value, but only what I felt when I read it. I printed them and will read them when everything is quiet around me, but I do want to say this...reading them made me sad and am I correct to say it is your own life you are talking about? Or am I too stupid to hear? Can I send them to a friend of mine in Zimbabwe? He is also a poet and I always said he must publish his poems, but being at a University, time is limited
    Whenever this old lady has time, I am going to read your poems as it seems there are a lot.
    Keep well friend!

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (12/2/2011 3:57:00 AM)

    Sir, i bow my head before u. hw did i miss u, really i astonish. i must go trough ur all poems.i also like to get ur comments on my poems.
    with kindest regards
    ramesh rai

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 12:15:00 AM)

    Shaista Nayaab superb sir... about a minute ago · Like

  • Clifford Villaflores (8/16/2011 7:37:00 AM)

    The whole world comes so near
    As you are gripped with fear
    Come and feel the pulse of belonging
    As you were desperately longing

    oh how i love these lines from the latest poem you posted bout love.

    so real and true

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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