Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 673,593 Points [Mehta] (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2281. Take You On Peak 2/9/2012
2282. All My Prayers 2/10/2012
2283. She Is No More 2/6/2012
2284. No Sleep 2/10/2012
2285. What Next! 2/10/2012
2286. Short But Sweet 2/13/2012
2287. It Appealed.... 2/13/2012
2288. ?? ?????.. I Was Unaware 2/14/2012
2289. You Were Never Truthful 2/16/2012
2290. Love Is Not.... 2/16/2012
2291. Smile Today 2/20/2012
2292. Gloomy Faces 2/23/2012
2293. Nice Appeal 2/25/2012
2294. Cheaters Have 2/25/2012
2295. Crowing Glory 2/26/2012
2296. Let Truth Prevail 2/29/2012
2297. As Warning 3/1/2012
2298. False Pride 3/1/2012
2299. Prabhu's Blessings 3/2/2012
2300. About Beautiful Life 3/2/2012
2301. One Of The Best 3/3/2012
2302. ???? ?????.. My Shadow 3/3/2012
2303. No One Will... 3/3/2012
2304. Highest Regard From Poetess 2/26/2012
2305. Zannat...Heaven 2/27/2012
2306. Simple Imagination 2/28/2012
2307. ??? ?????? ???.. Not Human Being 3/4/2012
2308. Good Bye Then 3/4/2012
2309. ???? ?????? ?? ????? ??????? Who Sank My Boat? 3/5/2012
2310. I Hear 3/6/2012
2311. New Born 3/7/2012
2312. International Year 3/7/2012
2313. My Mother 3/8/2012
2314. Heart Can'T Be Stone 3/8/2012
2315. Good To Know 3/9/2012
2316. How You Live In! 3/12/2012
2317. Know Your World 3/14/2012
2318. ???????.. Expectation 3/14/2012
2319. Leaving Behind 3/15/2012
2320. In My Pocket 3/15/2012

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2011 7:23:00 PM)

    Dear Sir, ,
    I'm fine and what about you, sir?
    Oh, I'm so glad now for you've invited me to comment on your poem, ,
    Do you remember or not but once you did post me a message saying that you've to keep your attention in your poems and not in these ratings and they are merely some ratings! ! ! but that time I was in the 4th position in the world by popularity..
    So I could write some good poems for me... And I could find a great deal of satisfaction in my writings! ! !
    Also I could find a lot of things from your poems in what I commented but did I comment it all with what then came to my mind...but they were all my heartfelt comments! ! !
    I hope you may enjoy my comments..
    And If time permits you, please read and comment on my poems too, ,
    I'd like to get comments from a poet who have written over 2000 poems but most of everything, you are from My Country! ! ! !
    May God bless you more, ,
    With Love and Peace
    VIPINS PUTHOORAN! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:49:00 PM)

    From : Jose Lu (Perth Australia; Male; 22)
    To : Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time : 12/7/2011 7: 30: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject : Re: Friend

    Thank you,

    I have seen some of your poems.There's many of it, see..More than 2000 poems just will keep me around for a year.

    Great poems, I must say.You're one of some poets I know that still use the rhyme, very good indeed.I like the style very much.

    Hope you're in a good state, with a good health and have a great day.

    Cordially, keep writing.I shall wait for another poem,

    Jose

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:48:00 PM)

    Hello Mehta. I am new to this website and do not visit it too often. Thank you for your message and your trust in me to comment. My comments will not be of literary value, but only what I felt when I read it. I printed them and will read them when everything is quiet around me, but I do want to say this...reading them made me sad and am I correct to say it is your own life you are talking about? Or am I too stupid to hear? Can I send them to a friend of mine in Zimbabwe? He is also a poet and I always said he must publish his poems, but being at a University, time is limited
    Whenever this old lady has time, I am going to read your poems as it seems there are a lot.
    Keep well friend!

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  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (12/2/2011 3:57:00 AM)

    Sir, i bow my head before u. hw did i miss u, really i astonish. i must go trough ur all poems.i also like to get ur comments on my poems.
    with kindest regards
    ramesh rai

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2011 12:15:00 AM)

    Shaista Nayaab superb sir... about a minute ago · Like

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  • Clifford Villaflores (8/16/2011 7:37:00 AM)

    The whole world comes so near
    As you are gripped with fear
    Come and feel the pulse of belonging
    As you were desperately longing

    oh how i love these lines from the latest poem you posted bout love.

    so real and true

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/25/2011 9:08:00 PM)

    Re: What is she looking at? (Score: 1)
    by ravingbeauty on Monday, April 25,2011 (17: 29: 19)
    profound and totally awesome

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/4/2011 12:55:00 AM)

    True, life is a mini-circus, where one has to practice tight-rope-walking with a stick on hand to balance both sides without falling down. It is easy to swim along with the current, but difficult to go up the river swimming against the current. You have brought these points with clear solutions in your meaningful poem. Good.



    Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai
    Feb 04,2011

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 8/4/2010 8: 09: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24093698 - A reality alone
    Member: Dwi Utami
    Comment: He you not alone friend.
    Reality alone everyone also have these feeling.
    Ya this make me want sitting near you.and remove your feeling alone...G(o_o) D
    good idea..10+



    Date & Time: 8/4/2010 7: 53: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24003469 - A day new one
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: A resurrected call of change...pushes for a while in our dreamy eyes...
    such clever poet of the century.....you got the best for our thought
    to see, more beyond than to live of what is today...thank you and
    God bless...a 10 +++

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2010 9:12:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 09: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: Really inspirational in every respect..



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 08: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: A splendid poem really deserving to be made song...



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 07: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24038935 - A cause for pain
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: A breathtakingly excellent characterization on the structure of love and resulting pain... I really congratulate you on such a wonderful work.... a real 10 from me...



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 7: 51: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: His heart pains for others agony
    H doesn’t work it for gain or money

    It is perhaps the ultimate utterance to establish the necessity of a poets birth.
    Well-written. Enjoyed.

    Regards,
    pranab

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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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