Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 480,132 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hasmukh Amathalal Poems

2361. Poetry Only 5/15/2014
2362. Language Plain 5/15/2014
2363. Purest Form 5/16/2014
2364. Under Care 5/16/2014
2365. Not Masters 5/16/2014
2366. Old System 5/16/2014
2367. India Can Look 5/16/2014
2368. I Smile 5/16/2014
2369. Life Is Worthless 5/16/2014
2370. I Turn Sixty Seven 5/17/2014
2371. Oh, Simi 5/17/2014
2372. Always Happy 5/17/2014
2373. Catch Her Feet 5/17/2014
2374. Nice End 5/17/2014
2375. Joy And Pleasure 5/17/2014
2376. From Stem 5/17/2014
2377. Resist It 5/17/2014
2378. The Struggle 5/17/2014
2379. Feel Pleasure 5/17/2014
2380. With Divinity Call 5/18/2014
2381. Not Gone Far 5/18/2014
2382. It Is Possible 5/18/2014
2383. चल भी देंगे chal bhi dnge 5/18/2014
2384. Love Is Natural 5/18/2014
2385. Wait For It 5/20/2014
2386. Autumn May Have 5/20/2014
2387. Equally Pose 5/19/2014
2388. Their Best 5/20/2014
2389. Why To Speak 5/19/2014
2390. Holy Objects 5/20/2014
2391. More And More 5/20/2014
2392. Speak Direct 5/19/2014
2393. Down To Earth 5/20/2014
2394. The Sea And... 5/20/2014
2395. Dwell More 5/20/2014
2396. Let Us Remain Happy 5/20/2014
2397. Unsung Love Again 5/22/2014
2398. Back Soon 5/22/2014
2399. Love May Reappear 5/22/2014
2400. Bow Head 5/22/2014

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Sarah Fleming (6/21/2010 7:05:00 AM)

    You write the nices poems

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 6/21/2010 2: 13: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23581557 - A bright tomorrow
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Life seems full of uncertainties/One has to remain contended with varieties’…Sir always you decor corpus of poetry with nuggets …some places I find diamonded nuggets …love it most much…quoted above… thanks for sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10



    Date & Time: 6/21/2010 1: 41: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Craig Mize
    Comment: It's a poem that tells a message that really needs to be told and you told it so well.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2010 7:07:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/20/2010 12: 45: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23626637 - A little smile
    Member: Chaitanya Dorwat
    Comment: A fantastic write sir, enjoyed every word, so blessed would be that lover,
    every stanza states the thoughts that every soul feels when in love.
    Thank you for sharing such a pleasant work.



    Date & Time: 6/20/2010 12: 24: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23554601 - A notorious kids
    Member: Chaitanya Dorwat
    Comment: I just passed out 12th and left school, this poem compeled to go back to my school days.
    Thanks for sharing such a fantastic poem, sir.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 59: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23569229 - At last she came
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: The love-in-wait is difficult to bear with for anyone. Well composed.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 56: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23545447 - A waka waka waka
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: As you say, really the sports break all the barriers and unites all the world citizens at one place.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 52: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: A timely advice to the people who are the cause for this pollution around the world.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/18/2010 9: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Swatimalya Chattopadhyay
    Comment: I was just thinking of writing a poem on global warming, Hasmukh overtook me.I was cut off from the site for quite some time and am astonished to find you have crossed 700 poems.HEARTIEST CONGRATS.My knowledge was upto your crossing 300, this is really commendable.

    The poem is very contemporary under the scorching heat prevailing for quite some time.It is well thought out.Your rhyming is always excellent.The poem reflects your enlightenment of the pertinent information and has beautifully portrayed the world bereft of soft, wet touch of the nature.I give secret voting, but of late voting no.is always slipping away.So your open vote is ten out of ten, a well deserved score.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2010 8:17:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/17/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Rafique Farooqi
    Comment: simply... changes we face in our life are unavoidable, and these never in our control, and finally we find ourselves bare handed

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2010 8:01:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/16/2010 11: 00: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23540272 - A bye gone is bye gone
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘It may be of no use if we lament for past and repeat same in present’…

    If stay in past and future the present we’ll loose…

    Swami Vivekananda affirmed us ‘A saint had a past and a sinner has a future’

    You’ve encouraged us to Vedic chat Charaivati [march onward] …by the way it is said that natural forgetting is but a catharsis…a vent to protect us a safety valve…

    Excellent poetry and a psychic booster and remembrencer
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

    PS Sir with humility may I request you to delet a commentless post below mine...as I respect you so saying Sir

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/15/2010 10:37:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/15/2010 9: 53: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23475251 - A change at the end
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: I can understand why poeple can change at the end. Actually they did not change but they just revealed what is truly they are. human can not never expect anything to be the same forever and last long. Time, situation and necessity will provokes changes but the choice is open; either to be ourself or to please someone else. Both ways; there are colateral and stakes to be considered before we use our freedom of choice to make decision.
    very intense of inner and self questioning poem. very well done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/15/2010 8:03:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23555866 - A barren way
    Member: Apoet Bangla

    Comment: So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long.......

    Regards,
    Apoet

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2010 6:13:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/11/2010 1: 12: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23514995 - A life is circus
    Member: Almedia Knight
    Comment: A poem of truth. 'A Life Is A Circus'...our experiences in life are played out on life's stage [ another way to put it]; we're the actors [players] our roles change when we change characters. I like the freshness of your title and the images and descriptions. Thanks for sharing. { can't vote} but I say this is 10++++



    Date & Time: 6/11/2010 8: 42: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23520377 - A strong will power
    Member: JOSEPH POEWHIT
    Comment: Reminded me of THE PETERS PRINCIPLE a book of reaching incompetency



    Date & Time: 6/11/2010 8: 31: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23365932 - A beautiful song
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Sure Sir…’Vande Mataram’…’Jana Gana Mana... ‘’Sare Janshe Achha’……all hike patriotic adrenaline but no never fanatism…chauvinism is condemnable…

    My countries National Anthem…flowething in my blood…my National Flag fluttering my heart
    Very moving poem…Sir may I request you to write one on National Flag of my great country India...
    Ms. Nivedita

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2010 4:23:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/9/2010 3: 10: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23486084 - A Kidda is cat
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: this is nice dedication to my kida...my gosh..how i wish, he will not die..everybody loves him..even neighbors, love him too..as if i am not a successful veterinarian if i cant heal kida..coz he is our only pet here..i'll wake up in between hours at evening just to let him drink milk..and in the morning, i wrapped him a blanket and bath in the sun..but even fish he didnt eat..my gosh, only milk he want to take..i may buy pediasure so that he can recover fast, , but i dont know if he can still make it...but i am so sad, might he will die..accdg to ian, kida is old already but he is 3 years old..so, i dont know if its a sign of old age...i let him take amoxicillin 250 mg a day..hope this will work...i want to see him run and play..u know, its a grerat problem if classes will start..i cant go to work if kida is still sick..coz no one will take care for him, who will give water and milk...of course, i cant bring him to farm and office...so, thats a big problem now...and my goshhhh, ...i am thankful that u made a poem for kida..i am very proud of it...

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Realized

I realized

Monday, February 19,2018
9: 55 AM


The God has obliged
And made me privileged
To live with young and aged

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